[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2012 01:16 am Title: Chapter 6: My Family
wow update when u can im so loving this and are you gonna write about growing u from teens to adults through out the years during later chapters? i love stories like this :) even tho it maybe be sad but it's still good.
Author's Response:
No. I might make them grow up to become teens, but definitely not adults. I have something planned for the end and it won't have the same effect if they're adults. This story probably won't be one of those 50 chaptered stories but I definitely don't plan on ending it anytime soon. I've still got a whole lot more sadness coming!
[Report This]Date: Feb 27, 2012 03:42 am Title: Chapter 6: My Family
oh my god their pasts were so horrible but i am so happy they found each other. i hope they stick by each other because they have a real connection and understanding cant wait for more!
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2012 03:10 am Title: Chapter 5: Tell me and I'll Tell You
yes it is sad you are doing a great job in showing that! i like how it is sad and you can feel the pain. i hope they talk to each other about their past i cant wait for the next chap!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your reviews! I'm glad that it's sad enough because I'm really trying for a sad sotry that touches the hearts of the reader. Hopefully I'll get another chapter in soon!
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2012 02:56 am Title: Chapter 4: Trash Bag?
poor lilly i hope she soon realises that there is love for her
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2012 02:47 am Title: Chapter 3: Teenage Girls
those silly teenage girls just had to ruin their fun :( i am happy michael is trying to comfort lilly but i understand how she still feels sad because she has been through a lot great chapter!
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2012 02:41 am Title: Chapter 2: Terrible, Tortuous and Tough Triplets
this was so cute i love how lilly and michael have grown close its adorable and i hate those triplets! they were so mean to lilly but im glad michael stuck up for her
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2012 02:35 am Title: Chapter 1: Alone
this is so sad i feel sorry for lilly but at the same time im glad she is perhaps in a better place i cant wait to read more :)
Date: Feb 19, 2012 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 1: Alone
Good thing she's gonna talk to Michael about it, they need to listen to each other :)
Date: Feb 17, 2012 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 4: Trash Bag?
Poor lily she wants to be loved so bad. But she is loved she just doesn't know it.
Date: Feb 13, 2012 02:52 am Title: Chapter 1: Alone
Those girls are rude! I wodve kick that *beep. Mike & lily are such good friend :3
Date: Feb 12, 2012 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 1: Alone
Ohhhhh pleaseeeeeeeee write another chapter today this was so cute & sad at the sometime I love this story so much!!!
Author's Response:
I'll update it as soon as I possibly can! :D Glad you like it and I'm glad you mentionned that it was sad and cute because that was really my goal for this story!
[Report This]Date: Feb 12, 2012 03:44 am Title: Chapter 1: Alone
aww keep this up i like it.