Date: Jul 24, 2012 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 11
wow Jordyn really lost her temper is naomi dead now?? omg! wow i can't wait 4 more and i hope u checkout my stories whenever u get a chance. 1love
Date: Jul 09, 2012 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 10
i've read every chapter i love it. i hope 2 see michael hook up with jordan soon. that should be intresting because she's on meds. he gonna have2 becareful around her. pls more soon! :D
Author's Response:
You're right. lol thanks a lot. More is coming.
Date: Feb 15, 2012 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
I mean instead of gigantic paragraphs, each time someone speaks, they earn their own line.
Author's Response:
ok, will look into that. This story is originally a book i am writing and it is all jumbled in my mind like that.
So, i will try to at least downsize the paragraphs.
Date: Feb 14, 2012 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh my! She something else!
Date: Feb 14, 2012 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh my gosh, she is CRAZY! She killed the boy?
I like this story a lot but please space things out more.
Update soon!
<3 Mrs. Maraj-Jackson
Author's Response:
Yes she did, and Glad you like it. And space things out more? explain a little, please. ?
Date: Feb 14, 2012 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
michael is a player well a sexy player anyways oh my god this biotch is CRAZY who kills people like that? lol o i L.O.V.Ed it make more HURRY!!!! cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
lol! I know. Thanks! The way she killed him was bizarre, but he called her CRAZY sooo....Will update soon. Stay tuned!
Date: Feb 11, 2012 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Party time!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Just to let you know, you hit the title of the next chapter on the nose. lol thanks. stay tuned.
Date: Feb 11, 2012 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love! Update soon
Date: Feb 10, 2012 10:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love this! Kamera and Derek are hilarious!
Date: Feb 09, 2012 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it! I love the concept of your story, please updated soon <3 Good job :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, i love that you love it.
Date: Feb 09, 2012 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
thank you so much, this really makes me smile. Feedback period makes me smile. You all are great. : )