Date: Apr 24, 2013 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 49
Okay, so here's my review too! :D
Krystal may be trying to be a better person... but she has to try even harder, what can I say? :O She totally neglected her dutie and not only, she even attempted to set up Wendy with Joel! But the thing that made me cringe was that part where she's like "So only dancers who sell fifty million records are your type?”
EXCUSE ME?! NO, WAIT, I'LL SAY IT AGAIN............. E X C U S E M E ? *snaps fingers*
LOL sorry for the dramatic reaction but THAT is stupid! It's NOT Wendy fuckin' him and dating him around! So shut up! That question may fit Krystal, not Wendy! Whoa! If I were Wendy, this would have ended BAAD! O_O Does this make me a not-so-nice person? lol anyways... who the hell she thinks she is... *is still boiling with anger*
Lolita... well... we all know how she is... can't say anything for her :/ But yeah, I'm glad Michael came and rescued the situation!!! I can't wait to see what their conversation will be like ç_ç
I love this story so much.
Thank you for all, love! <3
*rolls up sleeves and goes searching for Krystal*
Author's Response: Oh Maggie! You and your reviews! I'm telling, it is the best part about uploading new chapters!!!!! It's like the mini entertainment clip hat comes after an episode ends in a tv show!!! And I love ALL of what you write!!! Thank you thank you so much for making me smile everyday like this!!! Krystal doesn't know the right way to help someone. It's sad really. Oh wait, that's just how I made my character sound like! So stop taking what happens to Wendy so personally darling.... Anyway, lots of explanations are due all around and I'll get to that as soon as I can. Sending out much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!!!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2013 01:51 am Title: Chapter 49
Okay, so at first, i thought Krystal's surprise would be Michael. But, of coursenot, as Krystal is sooo freakin' jealous of Wendy, that's why she brought Joel to fix her up!
And omg, Michael's on the phone, so I hope you update soon!
Thank you so much for that story, I really, really love it!!! <3
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review ALLFORLOVE77!!! It's so great to hear from you again!!! I missed you!!! Yeah, I hope to update as soon as I can too! I'm so glad you guys like my story this much! I won't disappoint you! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2013 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 49
OMG hun what an update poor Wendy ...that girl just can't catch a break I feel so bad for her..and I know beyond anything Krystal set her up ....wow and I know her mom was worried but I can't believe she belittle her that way ..and Michael coming to her rescue I wonder what he will say to her ...hun congrats on med school ....and yes u inspire me your a sweet kind wonderful person who has a great heart and writes amazing stories about Michael :-) ...I will be sad u can't update much but I will wait patiently cause I know how things go so just know I'm here and I will wait ...take care hun
Author's Response: I know. Wendy always gets in trouble no matter how hard she tries to steer clear of it. Some people are cursed that you know! Hee hee. Sorry I dont mean to torture hee character on purpose. But the thing is I cant get enough of angst. And top it all with Lolita!!!!! I promise you very interesting conversations in the next chapter. And I dont hope to keep you guys waiting for too long! Thank you so much for your kind words darling.... I really appreciate everything you write for me. You be safe and I hope you are feeling better. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2013 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 49
her momma got straight up issues like for real!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Mwahahahahahaha...... yeah she does, doesn't she? Would come up with the next update really soon!!!! Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2013 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 1: She Got It
Hey hun ...I have missed you and being here to...I am going to try and keep coming back lol...u know how life gets in the way sometimes lol...not been really well but doing better and hanging in there :-) ....you inspire me girl u really do and I hope to get to read more updates soon cause I love this story really missed it but so glad to be back hope all is well with u take care hun and keep inspiring :-)
Author's Response: Hello again sweetie! Yeah I can understand what you mean. Life gets in the way of thigs at times. I have started med school now so once work piles up I don't think I'd be able to upload my stories as often as I do now. It's a real bummer. I love writing so much!!! I would give up anything for it! I will update really really soon! And gee girl.... I inspire you....? Seriously....? Aw shucks...! I'm blushing over here! It's so lovely to hear from you again! Get well soon sweetheart! Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2013 08:22 am Title: Chapter 48
This is so beautifully written :) I loved the phone convo between Wendy and MJ :) wonderfully emotional and I love how the deep we are going inside the plot and the characters :) You are certainly a very talented author can't wait to read more from you <3
Author's Response: Thank you tharu. I really appreciate all of your reviews! I won't keep you guys waiting for long for the next update! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours.
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2013 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 48
oh wow I just finished up reading some chapters and I loved them hun cant wait to see what happens next...but I have to say I was sad about the things that went down with wendy and Michael very sad but I am glad that Michael finally got to hear her side ....wether they talk again remains to be seen but I will have to wait and see and I dont think it was a super great idea for wendy to be with them girls I feel for her ....cant wait for and update :)
Author's Response: Hello there sweety!!! I'm not lying when I say this I REALLY MISSED YOU OVER HERE!!!!!! It's so great to hear from you again!!!! How have you been doing girl???
Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you liked this update. I was worried with its reception. Don't worry. I won't keep you guys waiting for too long for you to see Michael and Wendy talking to each other again. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2013 06:30 am Title: Chapter 48
Okay... so...
Those were terrible things, you know, the things Michael said to Wendy. But I understand why he said those... he felt like she considered him inhuman and of course it would hurt if coming from a person you confide in. At least I'm glad Wendy finally explained herself. Now I want to see how they'll get in touch again and if they will ever apologize each other!!
Was that the change Krystal was going to make? LOL One thing is true: Michael really makes you want to be a better person! (:
I just hope Wendy won't get in trouble with those other girls. She doesn't need any more reason to feel sad... eh..
Author's Response: I know the conversation was kind of harsh. But what can I do? I just love writing fights between them! That makes the love even more intense! So much of tension all time! It is bound to explode in the worst way! And yeah, I'll bring them together sooner than you guys expect. I just can't bear to keep them apart anymore! I know you guys want them to be together! I'll update real soon. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Apr 20, 2013 01:52 am Title: Chapter 48
Thank you for the update. You know, I'm a little scared what will happen there in the club. Wendy is so natural, girlish, sincere, but Krystal...I still don't trust her. I feel that she's hiding something and that something bad is going to happen.
To tell you the truth I was expecting a different reaction from Michael and Wendy, but they had a real argument. How are these two gonna come to terms and start back again now? I have no idea. But their conversation made broke my heart. Why? Why? Why are they so stubborn?
I really can't wait to read more...and please don't make it long as I miss this beautiful story...and I really expect the turn of events... Please...Thank you.
Author's Response: I know, they are very stubborn. They are too alike for each other. That's the problem here. Don't worry, I know how to get them talking, may be even do more than that. Don't lose hope. I'm not going to disappoint you guys with the plot. They'd be together, someday, someway, somehow, I promise you that. I don't know how long I'd take to update this again cause I'm juggling with so many stories at the same time. I know the argument was a bit unexpected, especially coming from Wendy's side, but it's so exciting to write about their fighting!!! Forgive me! I'll talk to you soon. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2013 12:37 am Title: Chapter 47: I Have This Dream
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!This is one amazing chapter!!!!Loved every single line including the exchange between Wendy and Austin at the start which was so natural and witty and just perfect :D The phone convo between MJ and Wendy was freaking awesome!there were so many killer lines there especially Wendy's scripted responses and the way MJ kept prompting her to speak about the kiss :P I loved the way you have written what goes through Wendy's mind :D Brilliant in all ways conceivable waiting for more!!!!!
Author's Response: Aww....... tharu!!!!!!!!! Thank you so so much for such a wonderful review! It's great to see that my hard work hasnt gone to waste! I find nothing more enjoyable than entertaining my readers in the hest possible way! I hope I continue to live up to your expectations on my writing. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours! Xoxo
Date: Apr 17, 2013 06:28 am Title: Chapter 1: She Got It
OMG...thank you for your fast reply. WOW I am shocked let's say star struck. You know why? Because you're brilliant. The way you write, the way you put words together are let's say mastered, like you were doing it for years. The thing is that I also write. I write poetry and fiction. But my dream is to write better, and you know to improve my style. I know how much work it requires. This is not only putting words together, but working on the text, enriching it with adjectives and adverbs and all this staff, but I also lve it. I love how much feelings and emotions you can pour on "a paper" and how much you can express yourself. Each time I write, I feel I am there, like this was my alternative, other, better life. That's why I keep on doing this. And of course your stories, which I'm in love with (Sweet Deception speaks straight to my heart...after reading it I felt like crying, I missed Michael and pictured the worst scenarios in my head... I could empathise with what Michael and Evelyn could have felt and could feel actually, oh God ...I would die if my dad told me to stay away from the man I love more than anything else in the world. I'd rather die than live without him...without my Love...I wanted to write to you PM, but couldn'rt make it....I'll try again and if I do , will you answer me, please...I do really admire people who write....because I can learn a lot from them. Thank you love
I love you more...LOL...
and something for you....
(this is sad, but please dont cry....)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QPFFiqT8w9s
and somethind not dso sad...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RALMFIYj2-w
Ania
Author's Response: Hello again Ania!!!! Gee, star struck? I'm just another girl like everybody else. Just another MJ fan like you. Thank you so much for your kind words. It really means a lot to me when someone appreciates my writing this way. I feel happy to be alive!!! Even I started with poetry. I was around 8 years old when I wrote my first poem, that was when I discovered I could write. And you are right. After that I never stopped writing. You shouldn't either. Keep writing. That's the only way we could get better. And submitting stories to a community like this really helps a lot! Helps you to explore styles, plot lines, things you had never tried before. MJfiction helped me so much in so many ways to evolve as a writer. Tell you what, we'll write a story together! I always wanted to co-write a fan fiction but none of who I approached for the matter wre passionate enough about it. I see myself in you when I was a couple of years younger. Together we can both be published authors someday! Contact me at cerinekyrahsands@yahoo.com I await your reply!!!! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours. P.S. thank you for the links you sent me for two beautiful song. Xoxo
Date: Apr 16, 2013 11:19 am Title: Chapter 2: Who Is It
Wow...wow...wow...
This is a beautiful and amazing story.....I've already become the fan of yours. I like your style a lot. Can learn from it (English is my 2 nd language LOL). I love how they (Wendy and Mike) play around together, their games and teasing...this is wonderful and her ...lets say self-restraint is what I understand cause I'd behave the same towards Michael regardless all the feelings...I literally spent 2 days and one night to read it all and I did it...These two (W & M) are a perfect match...but why for goodness's sake Michael started dating with that slut Krystal!? I hate her.... (He's a decent guy....) (sorry...I needed to write this), when he had the girl he loves at hand...and she's waiting for him...maybe she's a tad bit insecure (maybe more), but he's the guy to convince her that she belongs to him..... I can feel real chemistry these two share....
I really can't wait for what happens next. Did Michael really insist on her telling him how she felt about and after the kiss? I hope so...and I hope it was him who rang her again......
Please update soon (when are you going to do this?)... with lots and lots of love
Ania
Author's Response: Oh honey..... This is one of the most breathtaking reviews I've ever read!!!!!!! Thank you thank you thank you so much for it!!!!!! Well the thing is when they started off Wendy was more like a kid and less like a woman. And Michael is a man who needs a woman. If you remember, there is a point in the last conversation Wendy has with Bill when he says it's not a relationship that was forged fill an empty need. English is my second language too you know. Tee hee hee, so that kind of compliment really means a lot to me!!! Thank you Ania. You are too sweet! I was planning to upload the next chapter after I uploaded the 2nd chapter of No Time For Innocence. But just because of you I think I'll update this one first. Thank you again sweetheart. You have no idea how much your words mean to me. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!!!
Date: Apr 11, 2013 04:03 am Title: Chapter 36: Childhood
Amazing chapter as always :) Love how Wendy and Michael emotionally connect <3 you have given a lot of depth to both characters :) Michaels childishness is adorable :) the interaction between the two charcters is perfect :) keep on penning <3 <3 <3
Author's Response: Thank you tharu. Like I said before, I don't much into character personalities. The concoction in the end is like a lucky outcome I guess. Michael is just the Michael I suppose he is. Tee hee hee. Thank you for the review. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Apr 11, 2013 03:52 am Title: Chapter 35: On My Anger
Wow!!!Absolutely loved this chapter :D <3 you have captured both Michael's and Wendy's voices perfectly :) :) Excellent flow and natural dialogues nothing seems forced or out of place :) The sexual tension between the two characters is almost tangible :) keep on penning <3 <3 <3
Author's Response: Sexual tension... tee hee hee... didn't mean for that to come out that strong... glad you like this chapter. It was really hard to write it. Thanks for the review. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2013 07:18 am Title: Chapter 47: I Have This Dream
Haha girl you never fail to surprise me!!!
He hang up on her face XD I know it wasn't that easy to talk about their kiss, but Wendy could have managed it better, if she only had wanted! You know what ruined it all? The thought of their age and shit like that. Oh, c'mon, who cares? He might be a 33 years man old but he never looked like one! And besides, she's 18 - legally adult... really, this age thing pisses me off when it comes to Michael. He clearly was expecting her to say something... You know what, maybe Michael has understood better his own feelings when it came to that kiss. But who knows, I say something and you end up surprising me again and again in the other chapters :) <3
Really, I CAN'T WAIT to read the next chapter. I just hope that on the other line it won't be AUSTIN calling! lol I might get very angry if it is so u_u
Author's Response: Don't worry. I won't make it Austin. I'm not that cruel. The drama is just simmering up. It needs to explode at some point and I'm working for that. You won't be disappointed. I assure you that. Your reviews always make me come up with new ideas and additions to the plot. So I really value each and every word you write for a review. I'll upload a new chapter as soon as I get it done with. Until then, much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!