[Report This]Date: Aug 09, 2011 03:42 pm Title: An Uncomfortable Situation
Tsk tsk you know lisa has guts lol I have to give it to her.
Author's Response:
Lol. Oh yeah...and there going to start coming out a lot more in the next few chapters. lol
[Report This]Date: Aug 09, 2011 03:23 pm Title: An Uncomfortable Situation
If I was alana I'd leave that situation. Get my work done & leave if Michael wants her back like he says he does then he'll go find her cuz I mean what did she expect? that is his wife, she left him she can't really be that surprised. What did alana think she was walking into you know? lol they are a married couple they're gonna have sex lol. I do feel bad that she had to hear it & know what was going on cuz she does still love michael but really it's kinda her own fault lol I can't feel too bad for her but I can understand her pain, she should just move on until michael actually makes an effort cuz right now he's doing what any guy would having his cake & eating it too lol
Author's Response:
Yeah she is in a pretty messed up situation. Imagine, loving someone and the person you love is married and on top of that YOU let him go. I say she should leave it alone as well but she's in love and she knows that Micahel loves her back; Michael's the one holding everything up lol.
But I completely agree with you.
Date: Aug 09, 2011 03:03 pm Title: Prologue
oh my gosh i really need the next update r im gonna explode
Date: Aug 09, 2011 12:28 pm Title: An Uncomfortable Situation
well damn..Lisa. I can't even be mad at the skank I mean shoot that is her husband lol. Alana come on suck it up you know what you were getting into. Bet she's not feeling as cocky now. Michael better make it up to Lana.
Author's Response:
'I can't even be mad at the skank'---LOL, Why she gotta be a skank? :)
Michael will make it up to her, Lana's his boo! :)
Date: Aug 09, 2011 11:44 am Title: An Uncomfortable Situation
freak!!!!!!! gosh lisa1 i wudve killed her! :) plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzz make it up in d nxt chapter plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Author's Response:
Lol :)
Date: Aug 04, 2011 04:38 am Title: Lisa's Feelings
well lisa ain't dumb is she? i hope alana can deflect her better than michael did otherwise things could get awkward and be over before things even start . . .
a secret affair is always exciting ;)
Author's Response:
Isn't it? don't worry i'm going to try to keep it exciting! :)
Date: Aug 03, 2011 09:52 pm Title: Lisa's Feelings
Oh Michael and Alana won't last at all. They are to messy. they'll be in bed together in the next two chapters :D I love it.
Lisa is going to go bitch on them soon. I can feel it. she anit that damn nice.
Author's Response:
Are you reading my mind? ;)
[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2011 08:06 pm Title: Lisa's Feelings
Oh boy!!! this is getting interesting.
Author's Response:
:) Glad you're enjoying it.
Date: Aug 03, 2011 01:25 pm Title: Hello, Los Angeles
lol I had to read this chapter again. Things are about to get so good..gigi I can't believe you got me feeling kind of bad for Lisa. Oh well Michael and Lana are hot.
Author's Response:
:) They are; much hotter than Lisa and Michael. She's blah.
Date: Aug 03, 2011 06:43 am Title: Hello, Los Angeles
lmao at Alana stopping the kiss. Girl you already moved into the house with the intention of stealing back your true love. Your already playing dirty, might as well roll around in the mud...
Author's Response:
Lol good point. She's the dirtiest of all. :)
Date: Aug 02, 2011 02:03 pm Title: A Challenge
dis ws reallyyyyyyyyyyyy good! i cnt wait 4 the nxt update!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 29, 2011 01:02 am Title: A Challenge
Oh you mention me :) thanks hon.. I'm a big fan of yours! I Love your work! Your welcome, Anytime feel free to ask :D BTW I didn't expect to see you around I thought ur come back was in Aug lol xD
Review:
"Michael gritted his teeth.
“Alana, you do not have a boyfriend.” - I could totally picture Michael's face hehe soo cute!!
I thought that Michael was gonna really just let it be and forget Alana.. Geez I was soo mad and sad wheb he said OK just like that.. But when he called back and said "I Love You" omg I literally yelled xD I can't wait to see what happens when they meet up in LA.. I guess he will show 'Us" heheh
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, I couldn't stay away. Chapters and scenes have just been popping in my mind. lol
Yeah, the LA chapters are going to be interesting. I can't wait to write them!! :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2011 09:08 pm Title: A Challenge
hey you mentioned me...so sweet!! thx...anything I could do to help. I love this story and I love your writing. Ok, now this is what I'm talking about even though I was not expecting her to do it this way, you surprised me there LOL. I don't blame Michael for being scared. I mean after all she did break his heart and left him. Dumb movel, girl but I hope they talk it out and the truth comes out and they fix it. Now as for Lisa, I'm not a fan of her in real life but in this story she is actually sounding nice LOL so now I'm feeling a little sorry for her but hey when your man keeps thinking of his ex..that marriage is not going to last...sorry, good bye Lisa haha. Can't wait to read more...
Author's Response:
Yeah I know what you mean, I'm not that big of a fan of Lisa either, but, i'm trying to go easy on her in this story because Michael is about to put her through it for Alana. Haha.
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2011 03:17 am Title: A Challenge
UPDATE PLZZZZ!!!
Author's Response:
I hope to have a new one up soon. :)
Date: Jul 25, 2011 01:46 pm Title: A Challenge
what breast? Lisa anit got nothing up there lol. I think it's pretty clear who he loves more if his wife is infront of him ready and willing but he's off thinking about a phone call he just had with his mistress. I missed this story. Thing are about to get good. I know Michael doesn't have it in his heart to just up and leave Lisa.
Author's Response:
HA! You're right about Lisa! And you're also right when you said he doesn't have the strength to just up and leave her. Yet, now Alana's moving in so yes, it's about to get really interesting. :)