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Reviewer: mrsmj2011 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2011 08:18 am Title: Latoya's Discontent

wow, is michael cheating on her?  i think that latoya should chill and let them be happy

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Date: Sep 18, 2011 06:02 pm Title: The First Words

no, its not slow n i'm really into it

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Date: Sep 18, 2011 05:56 pm Title: The Tension

this is  going to be good lol!  i can't wait to hear her explanation

Reviewer: mrsmj2011 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2011 05:51 pm Title: The First Glance

i like it and you did a great job. i'm just confused to why alana wanted a divorce. she should never married him if she was going to be like that

Reviewer: mrsmj2011 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2011 05:32 pm Title: Chapter One-Their History

wow, that sucks cuz i can tell that she still loves him. much props for making the sex scene hot and steamy

Reviewer: mrsmj2011 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2011 05:08 pm Title: Prologue

i like it so far and i can't wait for more

Reviewer: sonflin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2011 12:00 am Title: Prologue

when is the update coming?? i cant wait im gonna go crazy!!!

Author's Response:

I'm sorry. I've been trying to finish it up. I've been super busy. I hope to have it up by the end of the week.    :)

Reviewer: vinaya595 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2011 10:11 am Title: An Uncomfortable Situation

no update yet! :( :( :(



Author's Response:

No, i'm sorry. I've been trying to finish it, but I just haven't had the time.

Reviewer: vinaya595 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2011 08:25 am Title: Prologue

god i really m veryyyyyy excited!!!!!!!! 

please please pleaseeeeeeeeeeee update!! ASAP!

much love.....

Reviewer: wisdom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2011 03:40 pm Title: An Uncomfortable Situation

Wow... My gosh...

Please continue soon!!!


L.o.v.e.



Author's Response:

I will.  :)   I'm currently writing the update. 

Reviewer: mjloverforever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2011 02:35 pm Title: An Uncomfortable Situation

UpDate!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm writing the update right now.  :)

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2011 02:19 am Title: An Uncomfortable Situation

Ohhh shit O____O that must be like OD hard to handle!! But I don't think that Lana should react to it next day, she should be like if she didn't hear anything even if it kills her inside... And to Mike she should tell him to back off until things are final just like he said to her ;)

But I can't blame Lisa even if I hate her xD Lisa is his wife and she gots to defend what is hers! (In the story, cuz in real life he is MINES) Lana should have know what she was getting into and should of had an idea that THIS was going to happen no matter what "If you can't take the heat stay out of the kitchen" right?! Michael is just... Idk like yea he feels bad I guess but he IS married to Lisa and Alana did leave him. But then again he is messing with Alana and her feelings, he was the one who told Alana that he was gonna leave Lisa he called Alana and told her that he wanted her.. So I Cant fully blame Michael but I kinda do just a lil..

Reviewer: rockwithyou86 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2011 06:18 pm Title: An Uncomfortable Situation

wow, really enjoying this. I think she should not react to Lisa the next day, stay calm and just play it cool with both of them. Lisa's his wife and if she want's to be immature that's up to her. Mike can't have both and I hope she knows that. Keep up the good work.  



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are.  :)    But you know Alana, she can't help it. In her mind, he's already hers. lol She's going to overreact.

Reviewer: sonflin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2011 06:08 pm Title: An Uncomfortable Situation

next part pleaseee!! asap!! LOVE thiss

Author's Response:

Thanks! Update coming soon!   :)

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2011 04:53 pm Title: An Uncomfortable Situation

Damn



Author's Response:

Your one words states it all.  :)

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