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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2012 03:39 pm Title: A Midnight Meeting

Wow. In surprised he did it. Well those papers need to be signed so they can get on with their lives I guess! And lol @ Lisa's outburst. I'm kinda disappointed Alana was a coward ass though. She shouldn't have let her talk about/to her like that. Regardless if it was justified.

Author's Response:

Yeah I think thats kinda what it was. Alana felt bad, especiallytelling her the way she did. But I agree, she should have said somethinglol

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2012 02:37 pm Title: Latoya's Return

Did he just gave he a complet payback for what she did to him... Damn that shit was soooo dirty.. He played her. Ass hole.....

 

I do get why he did it but like still naw it wasnt fair, but niether was what she did to him..... But she did explain why she did, even if it wasn't the best reason.... He is scared but doing what he just did was out of line.

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2012 02:31 pm Title: You're My Foundation

This will be interesting. So now she's supposed to jump cuz he's ready? Psh. Please. And now he all of a sudden has the balls to get rid of Elvis in a wig aka Lisa? Well Alana still needs to keep her distance until that really comes to fruition. She doesn't need to just jump back into his arms. Not without him putting in some work. He says he dot wanna get hurt, I'll bet she doesn't either!!! He needs to show and prove himself first.

Author's Response:

'This will be interesting. So now she's supposed to jump cuz he's ready? Psh. Please'  HAHA.  And Elvis in a wig-ISN'T SHE!!! That's what i say too! I agree with everything you said.

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2012 02:21 pm Title: The News

I am sooooooo glad she finally told Toya about her and Mike.

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2012 02:20 pm Title: Regret

He didnt wany to be in the same state as her, but now is gonna stay ata hotel? Jerk that's what Mike is.



Author's Response:

Haha. He can't help he's drawn to her. lol

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2012 02:18 pm Title: Latoya's Call

It's good that Lana seems to be moving on and to someone who seem like a good guy...

And wow Toya is actually accepted them and talked Michael into maybe thinking things over, making him see how irrational and stupid he was for getting her hopes up and the. Hurting her and leaving her like trash. But i am loving how Toya decides to accept this love and help her best friend out.



Author's Response:

Yeah it was about time. This whole mess kinda started because of her. lol. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2012 02:11 pm Title: You're My Foundation

Omg I Can't wait!!! I thought she wasn't gonna give into him at least not yet... In my opinion she should of said no and made him work harder, he hurt her like OD bad, what he did to her was hell and he went back to her after 3 months he hurt her that long? Without a word from him and after what he said to her...Eh she gave in way to fast and easy.. :( I needed my strong woman Lana..

This would of been good if it was like the next day or something, not 3 month, that's to long for the quick give in..

Happy New year!!



Author's Response:

Good point. I should have made her will a little stronger and prolonged it a little longer, but at this point i felt like she knew she wanted him. Why play herself?  :)

 

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 30, 2011 02:22 pm Title: Latoya's Call

they really need to get back together..talk for real and fast!!!

 



Author's Response:

Lol, I agree.

Reviewer: sonflin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2011 07:18 pm Title: Latoya's Call

WOW!!!! next part ASAP i cant wait!!! love thiss soo much!!! :D

Author's Response:

THANKS!

Reviewer: joy2thaworld Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2011 04:59 pm Title: Latoya's Call

Oh the irony. The person who they desperately tried to hide their relationship from may put them back together
Boy ol boy both Mike and Alana play to
Much.

Author's Response:

LOL isn't it ironic? haha.

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2011 01:42 pm Title: Latoya's Call

Wow.. I hope Michael saw her with that other man and sees what he's missing. They both have played way too many games. Alana needs to stay clear of him until his ass is divorced. The way he did her when she left was unacceptable. She needs to cuss his ass out. That's what I'd do. 



Author's Response:

I agree. He needs to just leave Lisa in the dust, until then, he shouldn't even contact Alana. I completely agree. lol

Reviewer: Michael_Is_Forever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2011 01:17 pm Title: The First Glance

This story is REALLY good girl <3 i can't believe i've never read this !! i LOOOVEEE it already <33 [:



Author's Response:

Thank  you for taking the time to read it. :) i'm glad your already enjoying it.

Reviewer: Speechless Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2011 07:19 pm Title: The News

This story is really amazing. i lOVE IT. cant wait for more :). Im sad that its ending so soon though. :( Now im really curious about whats going to happen. I hope they can get back together. <3



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoy it a lot. I've enjoyed writing it and i'm sad that soon its ending as well. The next few chapters will be posted soon. 

Thanks for your review.  :)  

Reviewer: MeganGlovesMichaelJ Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2011 04:16 am Title: The News

i love reading your story its heart touching and im almost cried its beautiful! cant wait for another chapter. it sad that michael doesnt want anything to do with her.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I really apperciate it. I enjoy writing it and i'm so sad that it's almost over. And as far as Michael, wanting nothing to do with her, it is sad. He's scared to get hurt again.

Thanks again for your review.

Reviewer: sonflin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2011 07:49 pm Title: The News

OMG!!! you have no idea how wide my smile was when i saw that u had posted some chapters!!!.....WOW i cant belive she told Latoya!!! i cant wait for the next updates!!! :D

Author's Response:

I figured it was time, lol . Thanks so much for continously reading and always leaving such nice reviews. You have no idea how much I apperciate it. Thanks again and the final chapters coming soon! :)

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