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Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2010 01:29 am Title: The Meeting Continued....

OMG this is GREATTTTT!! AMAZING!!!

Thank you soo much for the 2 updates in one day your AWESOME!!

YES YES YES they kissed, God they needed that!! Im soo happy!! damn they cant deny that they still LOVE each other very much so!!

Reviewer: Call_it_bliss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2010 10:16 pm Title: The Meeting Continued....

oh wow that was so good!!!! super excited for an update love the story so far!!!

Reviewer: Ceannxxx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2010 08:19 pm Title: Prologue

Great chapter. I forgot all about Vivienne....

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2010 08:04 pm Title: The Meeting

Ahhh omg, im a be honest and say this i hit my computer when you ended there..i know its stupid but omg i was sooo hoocked on it wow lol...Anyways WOW aswesome chapter AMAZING but i need more!!plizzzz! This chapter just got me soo hooked and i pictured everything happening the way it is!!

Very very good job!!



Author's Response:

Lol I'm sorry. Well the new update is up :)    And thanks for all your positive responds. I greatly apperciate them!

Reviewer: heroxmyworld Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2010 04:26 pm Title: Prologue

I just can't get over the fact that this story reminds me of who is it so much!

"I gave her money, I gave her time, I gave her everything inside one heart could find"(michael kept mentioning how he willingly gave alana his all and she left.

"And she promised me for ever and a day wed live as one, and we made our vows wed live a life anew, and she promised me in secret that shed lovee me for all time, a promise so untrue, tell me what will I do?" (Michael kept saying promise me, and they married, but in secret she promised she'd love him forever, but to michael tha promise was broken, and untrue)

"And she didn't leave a letter, she just up and ran away" (well...she did leave a letter, but with only 3 words!...SHE DIDNT EVEN SAY "love, lana" at the end! Lol)

I really think u should incorporate this song into the story :)...the song is from 1991, the dangerous album, when michael left to go back to work after their marriage it was to record that very album...it'd fit in perfectly :)

Author's Response:

That's a great idea! And a great point. Hmm...I just might. :)

Reviewer: isandmj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2010 12:13 pm Title: Latoya's Discontent

Oh, God. Who's Vivenne? What other women?
UGH. Keep going, it's amazing!

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2010 01:53 am Title: Latoya's Discontent

Wow very interesting, Cant wait i wanna know whats next lol

You got me hooked =)

 

ANd he do need to explain who them other woman are and whos this new chick..

Reviewer: Call_it_bliss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2010 01:39 am Title: Latoya's Discontent

OMG you can't leave us hanging to long hahaha this chapter was so good! I love it!!!!!

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2010 01:09 am Title: The First Words

This is very good. Keep it up.

I am dying to know what happens next...

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2010 07:47 pm Title: The First Words

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!! This is greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat

LOOOOOOOOOOVe it... WOW!!!

i cant wait to rea more!!! Amazing job!!!

Reviewer: Call_it_bliss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2010 12:55 am Title: The First Words

oh my goodness I love it! I can't wait for an update its really good so far!

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2010 07:31 pm Title: The Tension

OMG OMG PLIZZZZ update this is GREAT!! Ur killing me here lol

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Date: Oct 05, 2010 07:04 pm Title: The First Glance

OMG what a great chapter!! LOVE everything about it.. Great that we have found out a lot about them and the past!!

Reviewer: Call_it_bliss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2010 01:44 am Title: The Tension

I love this story! please continue great update!

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2010 12:32 am Title: The First Glance

Good so far!

Keep it coming.

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