Date: Jul 25, 2011 11:06 am Title: A Challenge
Sooo good can't what happens when she get there :D
Author's Response:
I'm going to try to make it really good. ;)
Date: Jun 07, 2011 03:25 am Title: The First Glance
I am obsessed with this story!
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2011 06:57 pm Title: Three's Company
let me just say first I am so happy that you updated, i already love it :) second in the prelude I was all for alana & Michael I was totally team Alana but then lets face it she fucked up lol & now reading this part of the story I know Alana still loves michael its only obvious but shes being a total homewrecker am I right? lol I mean come on??? she's going to LA with them?? she's only asking for trouble she's acting desperate & that might turn Michael off, who knows?? I know Michael still loves her too but Alana has to remember that he's married & that if Michael really wants her he'll go out of his way to get her back, she's gonna start acting like a groupie I just know it hahahaha anyways love it keep up the great writing girl!!! :)
Author's Response:
LOL She is being a TOTAL homewrecker AND she's being completely selfish!
But...she's in love.
It should be interesting to see how everything goes when they get to LA. Michael is going to have to make a hard decision and i'm not sure he knows which one to make.
:)
Date: May 31, 2011 03:38 pm Title: Three's Company
ohhhh! this is going to get good!
Author's Response:
I think so too! :)
Date: May 31, 2011 01:10 pm Title: Three's Company
Yessss..I been waiting. Things are about to get interesting. Lol Alana is so dead ass shady though..its her fault her marriage ended in the first place now she's on a mission to steal him back..but Michael was the one kissing all up her while he was married. These two are nuts and I love them.
Author's Response:
Exactly. You can't help but be like 'Alana come on! YOU let HIM go.'....but on that same note, He is still chasing her and he doesn't hid the fact that he still loves her.
I guess thats what's going to make it interesting to see how everything evolves. Who is he going to pick in the ending....
[Report This]Date: Mar 01, 2011 01:47 am Title: Lisa's Invitation
yay!!!!! ur back :)
please continue!!!
Date: Feb 23, 2011 08:07 pm Title: Lisa's Invitation
Glad you're back...looking forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2011 03:22 pm Title: Lisa's Invitation
Alana is playing with fire...this is not looking good.
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2010 10:21 pm Title: The Jealously Game
Amazing update!!
This story gets better and better i LOVE it how they are pushing each other hahaha lets see who is gonna snap first..I could tell thing are going to be messy cuz both are going to be pushing each other more and more..
Question: what happened that he brought Lisa over to her house? I thought it would have been just them, like a secret meet up type of thing.. Is he trying to make her jealous? If so why?
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2010 03:06 pm Title: The Jealously Game
LOLLLLL That dinner is gonna be a mess!
Date: Dec 04, 2010 09:26 am Title: The Jealously Game
i think it is great
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2010 12:30 am Title: The Jealously Game
I loved this chapter! I love this story!!!! Can I just say I "jealous Michael" is probably my favorite hahahahahahahaha I love that characteristic on him for some odd reason hahaha anyways wonderful story so far plz continue can't wait for an update!
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2010 02:02 am Title: Ready To Reveal
I was thinking about this story the other day nd then you updated aswesome..
Sound good wonder what going to happen when toya frinds out..and with them its like a really hard situation..
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2010 07:14 pm Title: Ready To Reveal
loved it I totally want to know what happens update soon!
Date: Oct 26, 2010 02:06 pm Title: Prologue
Very good story, can't wait for the next few chapters...