Date: Dec 04, 2012 03:23 pm Title: The Unexpected Surprise
Real Magic
Date: Jan 30, 2012 09:06 pm Title: The Unexpected Surprise
I think the story is great.
Date: Jan 30, 2012 06:46 pm Title: Sleepover
This is great so far but you should space things out more and slow down a little. There isn't enough detail and I know details and details and details can be boring but you just have to manage it well to make everything flow together.
I look forward to reading more and I love the song, It Had To Be You by Frank Sinatra.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the input :)
Date: Jan 25, 2012 04:13 pm Title: The Unexpected Surprise
Lauren, I love this story! I'm glad you put it up (:
Author's Response:
Thanks :)