[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2012 12:15 am Title: Chapter 44 - Michael and Schuyler's Vacation (Part 2)....
I'm glad Michael and Schuy got away from the family just to spend time with each other. These two are happier when its just themselves. When their around the family they are distant from one another.
Author's Response:
You are so right!! They really are the happiest when is just them. Family sometimes could be trouble if they meddle too much as Michael's family has. But they know how to handle it. Thx for the review hun xoxo
Date: Oct 25, 2012 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 1 - A Thriller Night (Part 1)....
Oooh this sounds good!! I like it so far
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I hope to see more of you. Enjoy!! xoxo
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2012 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 43 - Michael and Schuyler's Vacation (Part 1)....
Love it! Honeymoon oh that sounds wonderful just love this so much can't wait for more!
Author's Response: A nice vacation or honeymoon, always sounds great, very relaxing *__*
Author's Response: A nice vacation or honeymoon, always sounds great, very relaxing *__*
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2012 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 43 - Michael and Schuyler's Vacation (Part 1)....
To your first question I think it was both. I think that Mike was doin things to piss them off cuz he didn't want to do the tour in the first place. I'm glad that he finally told Schuy how he felt about her jealously and runnin away. And loved the video it was so romantic, i'm gonna watch the whole thing tonight. And you are killin me w/these cliffhangers. I will get my revenge lol jk XD
Author's Response:
you really have to, is a great story :))) thx Smokey and revenge?!! O_O you wouldn't dare!! XD
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2012 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 42 - The Lies, The Games, The Mistrust (Part 2)....
Love it as always!
Author's Response: Thank you Susan!!! xoxo
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2012 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 42 - The Lies, The Games, The Mistrust (Part 2)....
yes what schuy did was messed up but this is a wife who feels threatened. michael is not making the situation better, by lying to her. look at her background. she is not use to all this. michael is always saying stuff like 'maybe we shouldn't be together' or 'maybe we should get a divorce' thats not gonna solve anything by just giving up, plus there is a child involved, so they need to think about how all this fighting is gonna affect him in the long run. Mike should understand that if someone is causing problems with you and your wife then you got to delete them. yes mike and tatum are friends but his wife should come first. in a marriage you got to make sacrifices. plus tatum ain't being a good friend by telling him bad things about his wife. i might be wrong but i really think that if tatum was gone, then they would be better. and as for schuy, she went at that situation the wrong way. i mean come on.....his brother? i hope janet got through to her. i hope she push her stubborn attitue behind and just understand his fear. they just need to sit down and talk. its not just them anymore, they can't just break up and leave each other when they please. they are married and have a son now, so they need to grow up, and learn to listen and understand each other. tomorrow is not promised, so they better straighten up now before something happens. please update soon hun. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
You are right!! Mike needs to reassure her that he loves her and why he is with her. At the same time, Mike has never given her a reason that not to trust him. And all of these points will come across in the chapter that is up now. Thanks hun. I enjoyed this review. Will try to update more quickly. xoxo
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2012 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 42 - The Lies, The Games, The Mistrust (Part 2)....
What Schuy did was messed up. But then again Mike is wrong for lying to her about Tatum. Idk. They both wrong this time lol. Maybe now that Janet has told Schuy why Mike won't make love to her. Maybe she will understand. But we'll see XD
Author's Response:
You are right, You don't lie and you don't play with fire. So they both need to fix this. We'll see...thx Smokey :)))
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2012 09:29 am Title: Chapter 41 - The Lies, The Games, The Mistrust (Part 1)....
Oh, no. Schuyler! I can't believe this. She really doesn't get that Michael loves only her so their marriage doesn't need "saving." Everything is so good with them now. She's going to be risking her health and their happiness because of jealously. I'm really anxious to read how this plays out. I think you're a great writer who can convey a lot of emotions without many words. I haven't reviewed in a really long time but I do really love this story!
Author's Response:
Hi Mjaxrox, thank you for taking the time to read it. Just as long as you enjoy it and I know you are enjoying it then I'm satisfied. I write for the love of MJ and for your entertainment. I love writing stories. As for Schuyler, she just needs to learn how to give in and trust. Let go of the shield and with time, I know she will.
"I think you're a great writer who can convey a lot of emotions without many words." <------ Thank you so much!!! This line really made me smile. That means a lot to me.
xoxo
[Report This]Date: Oct 06, 2012 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 41 - The Lies, The Games, The Mistrust (Part 1)....
Janet was right to be worried. Mike will be furious once he finds out that she and James DeBarge are married. And so will the rest of the Jacksons. Why did he lie? He should have told the truth. O_O no Schuy is not trying to trap by getting pregnant. Wooowww very dramatical update XD
Author's Response: Janet and Mike, they love each other. Siblings will fight but they will always be siblings. And yes, Schuy went about it the wrong way but these two are strong. I have faith in them. Thx Smokey xoxo Love ya! :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 06, 2012 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 40 - The Jealous Wife....
Karen was a total bitch to her. I'm so glad that Schuy never let her to get to her. Sometimes when he's speaking to the ghostwriter, I think that she's dead. And sometimes I think that they got an divorce. Or they're just separated. TBH Idk XD
Author's Response:
Karen was not nice but she's insignificant XD and hmm...we'll see Thx Smokey :))
[Report This]Date: Oct 06, 2012 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 41 - The Lies, The Games, The Mistrust (Part 1)....
That fact that Schuyler isn't feeling well scares me. I don't want anything to happen to her. Michael is going to upset when he finds out Schuyler lied about being on the pill. She knows he scared about getting her pregnant again because of her health.
Author's Response:
Schuyler is still recuperating and going thru treatment so she will have episodes where she feels worse than other days. Is a horrible sickness she has. However she is strong and we just have to wait and see if she makes it and for how long.
Thx hun xoxo
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2012 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 40 - The Jealous Wife....
hopefully they are still married. and happy
Author's Response:
aww we'll see :) thx hun
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2012 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 40 - The Jealous Wife....
I think they divorced. I really hope she didn't pass away. I would seriously cry. Anyway, why is everybody bothering Schuyler.? I mean she's Michael's wife. Karen knows Michael wouldn't approve of the way she was speaking to her.
Author's Response:
you are not the only who thinks that but we'll see :) and yes, Schuy doen't have it easy. Karen is just jealous, she just better hope MJ won't find out
Date: Sep 23, 2012 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 40 - The Jealous Wife....
Loved the update.Poor Michael is scared to lose Schy. They should talk with eachother. About ghe talking with the Moonwalker ghostwriter i hope is not the last one that she passed away :-(
Author's Response:
aww they really should. Thanks hun and we'll see :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2012 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 39 - Marriage is hard but I love you too much to give you up....
They make the cutest little family!! When Michael does his interviews for MoonWalker, when he talks about Schuy I don't think she's dead. Maybe they got a divorced. Which I really hope doesn't happen. Well I hope neither of them happen.
Author's Response:
they really do. They are so dedicated to their son and hmm...that's interesting, we'll see :) thx hun