[Report This]Date: Apr 26, 2012 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Darkest Secrets (Part 2)....
Wow!! So that's who that man was. This is not the last time we are going to see Mark. Shuy is pregnant!?! Yay!! Lol
Author's Response:
Mark, who knows if he will be back. For now, they better keep an eye out for him and yes, yay!!! Schuy is pregnant XD lol
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2012 07:15 am Title: Chapter 19 - Darkest Secrets (Part 1)....
Don King is obnoxious. And I wish that Michael would have told him to shut the hell up! Lol O_O Schuyler is keeping another secret? I wonder what it could be. And from Mikes reaction, something is telling me that it's not going to be good. Drea, you need to update ASAP cuz you are killing me w/these cliffhangers. XD
Author's Response:
Don King is obnoxious and you know what me too, that would have been funny to see but MJ is too much of a gentleman. and LOL sorry about the cliff hangers...I can't help it but I assure you will love it :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2012 06:45 am Title: Chapter 18 - Family Day (Part 2)....
Schuyler was too funny in this whole chapter. Ola Ray better watch out cuz Schuyler don't play. I loved the making of Thriller. BTW whats the name of the other movie? Loved it, Drea! XD
Author's Response:
LOL Schuyler is hilarious and Thriller, I love thriller. and the movie is called Kites, is with Hrithik Roshan and Barbara Mori (Schuyler), is her first movie in english. She's a famous actress in Latin America and she flew to USA to film this movie in Las Vegas where she met Michael in real life and in the story. :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2012 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Darkest Secrets (Part 1)....
Ok girl what have you got up your sleeve can't wait for more. Love it!
Author's Response:
LOL...we'll see :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2012 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Darkest Secrets (Part 1)....
I have a feeling that the reason why Shuy didn't take the pictures with Michael has to do with the mysterious man. Hmm.? Lol
Author's Response:
LOL do you, huh? Let' see if you are right. New chapter is up :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2012 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Darkest Secrets (Part 1)....
Come on, now that's just cruel! How could you end the chapter like that? I'm dying to know what's going on! Please update soon!
Author's Response:
I'm sorry hun but you'll see why. New chapter is up :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2012 10:39 am Title: Chapter 18 - Family Day (Part 2)....
Someone's jealous!! Hmmm.? Why do I have a gut feeling not to trust Ola Ray.? I love Mike's face in that last picture!!
Author's Response:
haha i know right...Ola, hmm...you don't trust her? *shrugs* I'm not sure why ;) we'll see what she has planned....and yes lol I love that last pic of Mike XD thx hun
[Report This]Date: Apr 07, 2012 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Family Day (Part 1)....
I'm surprised Jermaine didn't sell Mike and Shuy but then agian I guess he was doing it for himself because then Katherine would ask them what they were doin at the casino. In the beginning, Michael was talkin in past tense. I hope nothing bad happened to Schuyler.
Author's Response:
Jermaine did good...At the beginning, it was a glimpse to the future. Notice that the story is currently in late 1983. In the beginning of the chapter, MJ was talking to the ghost writer in 1987 as he was getting ready to do his Moonwalker book before the chapter returned to 1983. I hope it didn't get too confusing but I promise it will make sense later. As for Schuyler...she is strong :) thx hun
[Report This]Date: Apr 07, 2012 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Family Day (Part 1)....
Love the contract with Joseph and Jermaine and his story please more soon!
Author's Response:
that was very smart of Michael :D
[Report This]Date: Apr 06, 2012 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Family Day (Part 1)....
You said that I killed you w/my pics. You are killin me w/yours lol!! And Mike was being a total dick to Joe and I loved every minute of it.Thank god, that Jermaine kept his mouth shut about how Mike and Schuy really met. Loved it, girl!! And I can't wat until he starts workin on Moonwalk And now I eagerily await your next update XD
Author's Response:
Dirty diana does things to me smokey XD (that's your nickname from now on)..yes, Michael is getting some back bone...I think Schuy is being a good influence to him, he's growing up....and ahh yes Moonwalker...still a long way to go :) thx smokey XD my crazy lil sis
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2012 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 16 - You are loving me for me...Can you ask for more?
I cried while reading this. I can imagine Micbaels heartbreaking reaction. I know Michael will make these years be the best years yet. I'm glad this whole situation got sorted out.
Author's Response:
Michael has never been thru this so is hard for him but he's being strong. He's learning to be strong Thx hun :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2012 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 16 - You are loving me for me...Can you ask for more?
Drea, I loved this chapter b/c it was very beautiful yet sad at the same time. But I still don't want Schuyler to die and there has to be a way to save her. And I'm so glad that she is coming w/him on tour. Also I'm so happy that everything worked out for you too b/c that was so fucked up. And I love you too. You are a like a big sissy to me too and I hope that we will always be friends. Love ya, girlie always XD
Author's Response:
Hey Smokey....I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter...I can't say if Schuyler would die, is MJ telling the story, only he knows XD but I hope she doesn't either :)
P.S. I'm glad everything worked out too. I sall in the past. You know I love ya too and you are my little sissy. love ya more xoxo
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2012 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 16 - You are loving me for me...Can you ask for more?
So glad you are writing instead of that other bull! Awesome update can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Is always been me doing the writing. Thx hun and btw "BUll" <--- LOL too funny
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2012 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 14 - What a feeling (Part 1)....
AHHHHH he got caught at the door hahahaha Dude you should of knocked smh now he looks like a stalker xP
"and then slammed the door on my face." LOVE THAT PART!! She is AWESOME!!
Its really good to see that she finally once again but more to him now opened up and told him how and why she is feeling the way she is, best way to start again and to have him understand her more.
"she tried to get up from the bed but I pulled her back and she landed halfway on top of me. I cupped her face and I brought her lips to mine. I thought she would push me away but she didn't. She climbed on top of me and kissed me."
*Screams like fan girl* OMGGGGGGGGG After that is same scream over and over and over until... WHAT?!?!?! *&^%$#@ Grrrr
"What a feeling...... WHEN YOU LEAVE ME HANGING ON THIS DOGGONE CLIFF AND THE DARN WIND IS BLOWING AT 80MPH
lol XO
Author's Response:
LMAO he looked like a major stalker that's too funny
Schuyler is so great. So strong. So fearless. She is awesome. I love her character <3333
Schuyler speaks her mind. She lets you know how it is so there is no misundertanding about her. If you only had a POV of Schuyler, it will drive you nuts because that girl has a lot to say but we are looking at everything thru MJ's POV..
"*Screams like fan girl*" <----LMAO too funny. I love your reviews they make me laugh xoxo
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"What a feeling...... WHEN YOU LEAVE ME HANGING ON THIS DOGGONE CLIFF AND THE DARN WIND IS BLOWING AT 80MPH" <---------LMAO I can't.....LOL
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2012 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Love is never easy....
Gesh I Love how she always Speaks her mind xD
Noooo like why go to Brooke??? Oh yea that is his *mocking voice* Girlfriend BLAHH >:( Awwwwww The lil gift Schuyler gave him is so cute but what made it more cute was the comparison she made to him dancing and the heart dancing xD Its a good thing Brooke told him how it was and sent him on his way. This makes me like here in this story, she didn't try and keep him or convince him of anything..
GET OUT of that DAMN CAR BOY!!
Btw how do you pronounce her name Schuyler? Is it something like Skyler?
Author's Response:
I love how Schuyler speaks her mind as well. She's so strong, is inspiring. No one would think she was battling cancer.
Brooke is not here to cause trouble. Michael involving her was his mistake. He tried to move on too fast and Brooke saw that so she sent him packin'
and yes, I agree the comparison Schuyler made from MJ to the gift was adorable. Schuyler truly has a great heart and only sees the good in people.
Yes, Schuyler is pronounced SKY-LER <33333 not SHY-LER like my mom says it XD