[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2010 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 72
Great update girl. Keep it coming.
Date: Nov 08, 2010 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 72
UGH! Daniel gets on my last nerves, he is too involved with Mike and Jessie buisness. Michael would be livid to know. It makes me nervous. Why did he not let her have her space from the explosion from yesterday?. I mean really! UGH. Returning to the clinic/hospital had me in fear that the paps were gonna catch her and him chatting away. You know how those idiots like to hide in trash cans and hang form trees. LOL!! I dont trust Jessie being so out in the open. Jessie has a new lifestyle to get used to.
Oh, the other part I liked was the part where she was watching him with his handlers as she ate her apple. I loved how Jessie understands Michael and seems to not be intimidated by what he does like before. I really like that about her. Michael is so cute being in charge and focused. Please dont rush the story let it flow. It was fun going to the You tube for the Brunie concerts. I so imagined Jessie there.
Look forward to more!
Date: Nov 08, 2010 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 72
Still loving this :)
Date: Nov 08, 2010 10:25 am Title: Chapter 72
I so love your story!!! You've got such a great style of writing and giving the story pictures! Keep it going! And... please let them have their baby soon... they are so cute together! XD
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2010 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 71
Author: Thank you, and your welcome! You have no idea how much I love this story. I hooted, screamed and held my breath in parts. Jesse is one lucky lady. Im jelous you can pull from your creative space like that and just let it flow and capture the essence of Micheal. He was so multifaceted. I'm a very visual person and I see details. I appreciate you taking the time to do that. At times I see the background and it's becuase of your writting.
Date: Nov 05, 2010 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 71
keep going! I actually love this :) xxx
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2010 11:25 am Title: Chapter 71
”I don’t understand the way you think, saying that she’s yours not mine, sending roses and you’re silly drinks, really just a waste of time, because she’s mine. The doggone girl is mine.”
I undid and re—wrapped the tape on my fingers, man I was turning blue from the cutoff circulation, and I flexed my fingers in and out to keep the blood flowing.
“Good practice today Mike,” someone patted me on the shoulder passing by and I looked up and smiled distractedly seeing it was one of dancers, and smiled brighter as another one followed.
Can I say, I love those details. This is so Michael and I could see him standing there doing that and being so distracted about his baby and what she is doing and feeling..Oh Michael...sigh*
You never disapoint me it was excellent...I held my breath through the entire love scence to the very end when she looked up and saw him sleeping...poor baby he was tired an drunk. Great stuff! Great Stuff. The suspence is the best parts...loved it!
You know you have Michael down to a science...I swear you have Chris down as well! I know they were good pals..again amazing stuff.
Author's Response: You seriously became my favorite reviewer here since the very first comment that you posted on my chapter. As a writer, I don't just want to hear "good job" all the time, I love hearing exactly WHY you liked the chapter and how it made you feel. Thank you so much for doing just that and making me feel even better about my story up here. It's people like you who keep me writing, and who give me the fuel to put all that I can into it and give you more.
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2010 03:41 am Title: Chapter 71
great update. she needs to tell him soon about the abortion i think. and she defiintely doesn't need daniel's help at all.
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2010 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Take your time, let me YOUR creativity flow, dont mind us...but hell Im feining out of control. I can't wait. I love the suspense...I love Jess and Mike...I just love them in this story. More, more , MORE!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love seeing your comments, and thanks for always understanding and being patient with me, although I know you're dying inside for the next update LOL. I always feel bad about making you guys wait, but I'm glad that you have patience with me and keep a calm lookout for the next updates!
Date: Nov 04, 2010 01:13 am Title: Chapter 66
super chapter. loved the conflict of daniel reappearing and jessie's rendition of BillieJean.
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2010 12:09 am Title: Chapter 63
girl this is good.
Date: Nov 03, 2010 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 60
super romantic wedding. loved it. two big thumbs up girl.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2010 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 70
“I hate you,” I cried out in the ugliest sob I’d ever heard before...and then my body was continually racking with my chokes and wails and cries. “I hate you...oh god...I hate you,” I wailed against him not seeing or feeling anything. Just crying my strength away, and still he held me tight and his hands passed slowly down my hair. I couldn’t move, I could barely breathe as I took in air to only let it out in a sob. We were there forever, with me crying and him holding me tight, and I tried so hard to say it, but my wails wouldn’t allow me to. But when I’d finally calmed down, and was reduced to standing still and hiccupping, I said what I’d wanted to say to him forever.
“I can’t give him his kids...and it's all because of you.”
Oh, that part was well..gut wrenching, I cried. I hate Daniel as well. Poor, poor Jess.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2010 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
aka MJWendy, my account went haywire...anyway. OMG! OMG! I died when he locked her in the room. I literally wanted her to claw his eyes out of it's sockets! I loved the update. The story is incredible! I look forward to settling down at the end of the day and reading. This story is one fo the best. My goodness a sleeping MJ had to be sexy as hell. I could totally see them laying there together. Sigh. Michael all warm and toasty. I would never wake him up next to me. I feel so bad for Jessie, she want to be pregnant with MJ and it's not happening that has to kill her inside. I think I screamed when she screamed in the car. Reading it kills me. You know MJ would be devistated to know if she can't, it would kill them both. Poor Jessica. Please dont stop...you are a fantastic writer and Im not kidding.
Author's Response: I LOVE seeing your comments on my chapters. You're another of my fave reviewers on here. Thank you so much, and I'll absolutely keeping writing until I finish this story, and it's because of those like you.
Author's Response: I LOVE seeing your comments on my chapters. You're another of my fave reviewers on here. Thank you so much, and I'll absolutely keeping writing until I finish this story, and it's because of those like you.
Date: Nov 03, 2010 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 70
Great update, once again :)
Argh Daniel needs to frick off.. and she needs to tell Mike!
Update sooon xxx