Reviewer: MJSmile Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2010 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 79

Just imagine Michael sitting in the hotel and turning on the TV and seeing pictures of Daniel and Jess together! Or his people bringing the pictures to him, he's gonna be so P.O'd!

I think its nice of Daniel to try to right the wrongs he did to Jessie all those years ago, and neither one of them mean any harm but Michael hates Daniel and he's not going to see it that way.

All hell is about to break loose lol

Reviewer: enchantress17 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2010 09:16 am Title: Chapter 79

I absolutely love this story.  Great update.  Jessie is going to be in a heap of trouble.  She doesn't know the paparazzi got pics of her and Daniel.  Will she lie to Michael?  And he find out the hard way.  If she's not honest with Michael this is going to get REALLY bad.  Plus, Michael is going to feel betrayed either way because he wanted to be there for her and now the guy that made her have to go to this clinic in the first place is the one "supporting" her.  But in a way it does seem kind of fitting.  It's kind of like closure in a way for Jessie so that hopefully after this she can completely let go of her hatred and angst and move on with Michael, finally putting her past behind her once and for all.  But somehow, I don't think Michael will see it that way.

I hope that Jessie and Michael will be ok.  I love the characters that you have created.  It's a beautiful piece of work.  Cannot wait to see what happens.  Please update soon!

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2010 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 78

I could understand the way Michael and Jessie are feeling. I can't help to think that Jessie might be doing a mistake by going to this place with Daniel especially if Michael finds out. He is already dissapointed in her for keeping this from him. If he finds out, he could lose trust in her. Too many thought are running in my head of where this is leading....please update soon....I'm dying to find out.

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2010 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 77

hey girl...This update was intense...I love how Michael reacted to her telling him about the abortion. How conflicted he must feel? even though this happened before him, I know it hurts to be lied to.

I need to know what happens next. Please update soon.

I'll send you a review on twitter too haha (like always)

Reviewer: CleoLovesMichael Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2010 11:02 am Title: Chapter 76

Wow so glad she finally told him.. but I hope she can keep it together..

Amazing update, this is one of the best fan fiction's I've ever read :)

Keep it up :) xxx

Reviewer: BreakOfDawn Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2010 05:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Finally!!! like a big stone fell from my heart, she finally managed to tell Michael! 

Reviewer: MjsWendy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2010 12:08 am Title: Chapter 75

"His gaze was really burning now, and when I’d turned away to look down and continue busying myself at the desk, I heard his strong voice call me in a deep tone that not many got the chance to ever hear.

“Jessie.”

I looked up, and honestly I was surprised. I’d been warned before not to get in the way of Michael in his domain, especially since it was his haven and territory, and he needed his space to do what he did best, and have things work smoothly and properly without anyone getting in the way of him doing his job like the professional and perfectionist that he was known to be.

He flicked his head to the side for me to join him.

I honestly wasn’t sure at first. I hesitated and waited to see if he was for real, and when he cracked a small smile in waiting, I felt myself slowly bring my body forward to join him, walking at a slug pace to eventually meet him before seeing him hold his hand out for me as I made it the rest of the way. Of course I put my hand in his, it was only second nature to me by now, and when I placed my palm in his fingers, and felt the heat of his hand wrap around mine, I felt so lucky to be accepted into his world, his world outside of here, and his world on stage. He brought our hands down to our sides and held them together and I stayed quiet, I really think that it’s all he needed me to do…and Michael turned his head to watch members of his crew emptying out, some still running around and double and triple checking things, and then Michael called out to see if they were ready to “take him down” and someone immediately spun and agreed to lead him.

We walked quietly, him still holding my hand in his as several people covered us and led us down a secret pathway down the basement of the stage, where more of his crew were waiting, and then that’s where his designers Michael L Bush and Dennis Tompkins were waiting holding his jacket out for him, and he finally let go of my hand to walk one arm after the other to put it on, as MLB closed it and zipped it up on him, fixing it up and talking to him about the platform that he was going to stand on. "

I love this man. I really, realy do. Okay, the description of her out fit and the pic. I bet Jessie looked so pretty in her dress. It sounds very sexy and pretty on her. The scence above was soooo cute! So sexy and cute. I love how when he looked at her the first time and would not stop. He just needed his baby right there to calm him and help center him. I would of died  from him looking at  me so intently from across the room. What I gathered Jessie felt like by staring back and being near to him at that time, was intruding on Michael Jackson the performer. Michael was so sweet to reassure her that she was not, it was just so damn sweet.

Nat and Jackie they are too much. LOL!!! Im glad they are not at each other throats so much. Nat is such a hell cat! Horny toads they are, baby or not. I feel bad for Jessie it has to be a painful reminder for her about her lack of being able to get pregnant. I know when Nat's baby comes there will so much more attention on that new Jackson baby from his family. 

 Nice long one...can't wait for more!

 

Author's Response: Haha I'm so glad that you're a Nat/Jackie fan! Woo! And yes, you got it right on. Jess didn't want to interfeere and step into Michael's territory, but Michael made it adamant that she was PART of his territory, and that he needed her there with him <3 Thank you for another amazing review.