[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2011 12:12 am Title: Chapter 86B
Lawd I laugh my ass of when i read this here.
“You do love me Nat,” the smile was in his voice. “I can see. I see it baby.”
“You can’t see shit,” she exhaled low, and then gulped, gathering herself and controlling her senses.
That was just to damn funny LOL
another great story thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Hahaha my friend loves that part too LOL. Even weakened, Nat's a feisty one.
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2011 12:01 am Title: Chapter 86B
Sweetseducing, this update was smoking girl. I really liked the rhythm that you established while writing this steamy chapter. Natalie finally let her guard down and let Jackie dominate her. The intensity of emotions felt by both of them came through clearly in your oftentimes poetic rendering of the love scene. (I initially didn't think I'd like reading about a secondary love interest. I'm a horndog though so that wouldn't stop me from reading. Plus, Jackie is a sexy a$$ Jackson so...LOL.) However I think your building up the friendship between Jess, Kayla, and Nat allowed me to feel Natalies pain. You've really done a great job building up Nat as a secondary protagonist. Not many stories push character development this far. So bravo girl. But you know I'm ready for Michael to enter asap. But this was a smoking hot update girl. A well written sexy piece of MJfanfic hotness. Keep it coming.
Author's Response: I've probably read this comment about four times now. Seriously, everything you said is just what I hoped to hear in my readers from this chapter and I'm so glad that you took the time to tell me in the wonderful and fluent way that you did. Thank you :)
Date: Jan 20, 2011 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 86A
oh girl! you made me laugh, made me dream, made me worry about Michael and Shana....I dont know...maybe she will be a little bitch....I thinks so.... drama, drama
Michael and Jessie are so good together...
Nat....what a girl! oh god! have mercy. Maybe she is in that way 'cause of her previous relationships.... When jackie and nat are together they argue, they fight..but they love each other...what a couple! they are so different and so unique for each other-
I love the way you write this story. You are a good one!
keep writing
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2011 02:45 am Title: Chapter 86A
Lovely. You are a really dedicated writer. I love it.
I can't believe that Nat and Jackie are together. How unconventional and...cute. I hope Nat gets her attitude together for the sake of their relationship.
Anyways, beautiful update. Can't wait for the next one!
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2011 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 86A
Loved it.
Date: Jan 19, 2011 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 86A
Awww...the chemistry between Nat and Jackie is priceless. Also, is Mike gonna get in some trouble w/Shana? Hmmm...keep up the good work.
Date: Jan 18, 2011 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 85
Hey! I just check for a new chapter....but there's no one!
:(
(Sorry about my english. I try my best!)
Please update asap!
Keep writing!
Author's Response: Sorry love, I just posted the new chapter now! (P.S. Your english is fine ;] )
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2011 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 58
the best story, i hope it doesnt end anytime soon
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2011 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 85
D'aww, I loved this chapter. It reminds me of my current situation with my boyfriend and how I'd love to fix it like Jessie and Mike did (': Thanks to this, I'm going to be just patient.
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2011 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 85
Beautiful add. Hopefully nothing comes in between their relationship again.
Date: Jan 14, 2011 08:47 am Title: Chapter 85
thank god they are back I am so happy great update!
Date: Jan 14, 2011 02:46 am Title: Chapter 85
Awww!! They are back! I'm so happy!!!!
Date: Jan 13, 2011 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 85
Ohhh girl! What a beautiful chapter!!!! I was missing your story! SO glad you could make it! This update was so funny, so lovely..... keep writting girl! What about Naty and Jackie? Let us Know pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee
Date: Jan 13, 2011 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 85
Very good story...looking forward to the next one. BTW - 3Ts mom's name was Dee Dee, not Enid. Enid was Jackie's wife who also died.
Author's Response: You see, I knew that something was wrong. I knew I kept putting her name wrong but I wasn't sure who's name I mixed it up with. It's Dee Dee. Thank you for correcting me!