[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2011 01:04 am Title: Chapter 80
Yup, the shit done hit the fan--and it's gettin' FUNKAAYYYY!
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2011 12:45 am Title: Chapter 79
AWWWWWWWWW, SHIT!
It's about to get KUH-RAY-ZAY up in here!
I knew it! I KNEW Jess was gonna run into Nat & Jackie. I bet that Jackie snitches to Michael, AND confirms it all with the pictures those hype ass paparazzi took! Ooooooo! Michael is gonna be above and BEYOND pissed! He's probably gonna be like, "Oh, so THAT'S why she wanted to get tested "alone"! She really IS still messing with Daniel--she LIED to me...AGAIN! She's CHEATING on me!"
Holy mother of Christ, what's gonna happen NEXT?
Date: Feb 26, 2011 12:21 am Title: Chapter 78
I'm sorry, but Michael's irking the hell outta me now....Smh.
I can't wait to see how Jessie's visit to the fertility clinic goes....
Date: Feb 23, 2011 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 89
As Gemini said...." I missed this story!!!!"
Please Girl keep writing for us!
You know I feel sorry for Daniel....but was JT's son "What goes around come back around"....For me It was hilarious MJ and Daniel were in the same room.... and then when MJ got flowers for Jessie...So cute.... I love him!!! (wel....who doesn't LOL)
Bu the way.....what about Jackie and Naty? I love them too.
Sorry for my english...I try my best
:)
Date: Feb 21, 2011 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 77
PLEASE don't be mad at Jess, Michael!
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2011 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 76
Oh...my...GOD. What an INTENSE chapter. She FINALLY told Michael the truth, but...WHY didn't she tell him that she really DIDN'T sleep with Daniel? I think THAT would relieve Michael even MORE.
Sigh....Michael is so sweet...and Jessie's pain is so RAW & DEEP...I hope things get better because I don't think I can STAND those two having another fight!
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2011 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 89
ok this is gonna sound really bad but this is just the vibe I'm getting from the story, that Michael is not in love with Jessie like he thought he was he seems really off & cold towards her I know Jessie messed up but it's not like he's a saint either i mean seems like work is more important to him at the moment & I feel like she's really trying & Michael's not trying as much as Jessie! this might just be me but Thats what I get when I read it lol, like as the chapters go on I feel like his being really distant & like there growing apart or at least Michael is Cuz Jessie seems like the same girl he fell in love with it's just michael with the problem! As you post new chapters (which I love btw) I find myself thinking that michael is acting like a jerk even when he's not lol I don't know if I'm making any sense lol! I just feel bad for Jessie I don't know MJ doesn't seem to spend or want to spend more time with her I feel like she's lonely again & work & Daniel & the baby drama I feel like she's needs Michael around her more now then ever & to me his not, he's not being the supportive husband he promised he would be! they or at least Michael seemed so much more in love with her before they got married I can't help but feel like he regrets it maybe if Jessie finally tells him that she didn't sleep with daniel when they were apart for that year who knows?? I mean just cuz he bought her some jewelry & flowers I dont feel its good enough lol, I just don't think Jessie wants to except that Michael is going back to his old ways pressuring her & distancing himself idk michael needs to step it up in my opinion cuz I'm not liking him at the moment hahahaha Great job with the story your a wonderful writer can you tell I'm totally into this story lol (also sorry I typed such a long review haha)
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2011 12:43 am Title: Chapter 89
Omg..that scene in Daniel's office between Jessie and Mike was steamy. I almost forgot Daniel was in the room. Lol. I honestly had a feeling that Briana was leaving Daniel. That's actually sad-- for the kids and him. Beautiful update as always. I've honestly never been disappointed with any chapter of your story!
Date: Feb 20, 2011 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 89
I missed this story. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! x And this story's missed you <3
Date: Feb 20, 2011 06:15 pm Title: Interlude 4
omg on this entire website i think this is the best freaking chapter ever! :)
Date: Feb 20, 2011 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 74
This is so cute! And the last paragraph makes me wanna cry...Awww!...:-)
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2011 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 89
aww, little anias' personality is soo cute! can't wait to see what daniel has to say, should be interesting.
so happy you updated, mjfiction has been so dry without this story and a couple others, in my opinion atleast, lol .
Author's Response: I love Anais so much. She's one of my favorite little characters.
Oh my god, I don't know what to say! I'm honored that you said that! Thanks so much <3 I love bringing this story to you guys, and am trying my harderst with school to keep it coming regularly. x Thanks for being a reader!
Date: Feb 20, 2011 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 89
It always makes my day when I see that this story is updated :) Great chapter as always xx
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much girl. And thanks for the compliment! xxx I love seeing your comments <33
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2011 01:07 am Title: Chapter 68
That was INTENSE!
Date: Feb 19, 2011 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 60
SUCCESS! YES! I'm SO HAPPY for them!
Author's Response: <333333333333333333333333 I love your replys so much!