Date: Jun 05, 2011 11:23 am Title: Chapter 98
This story is da bomb diggity.
Author's Response: hahaha, your comment on COMJ was friggin amazing. Thank you girl xoxo
Date: Jun 05, 2011 09:51 am Title: Chapter 98
YESSSS!!!! NOW they're both in the same boat and parents are involved so they got nothing to hide and shy away from getting everything out in the open!!!
THAnkyou girl for posting this chapter. R U posting the nxt one in a while or soon? I perfer soon. lol.
Great chapter.
L.o.v.e.
Author's Response: YES! I'm not sure yet, I'm taking summer classes right now so that really cuts down on free writing time. Hopefully sooner rather than later, but I'm thinking it may be another update to come on the weekend again. We'll see
Date: Jun 05, 2011 05:52 am Title: Chapter 98
HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE! :O
That was amazing.. you truly write so brilliantly. I can't wait for the next update xxx
Date: Jun 01, 2011 03:10 am Title: Chapter 97
They're both being really stubborn (but especially Michael). I'm all for the "break" apart, however, I think they should still talk on the phone to at least check on each other. I mean, they are married now. Great update as always.
Date: May 30, 2011 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 97
Wow!!! Drama, drama, drama. I'm waiting for the light at the end of the tunnel
Date: May 29, 2011 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aaaaay,Your story is one of the best stories i have ever read in my life,and im meaning that from the bottom of my heart.You work so hard and i truelly believe you out do yourself all the time.You put your mind into the characters whichi think takes alot of research and imagination.
Cant wait till the day Jessie becomes pregnant!!
Love you girl xx
TabloidJunkie aka SM4MJ
Date: May 29, 2011 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 97
Great update!!! I can't wait for more!!! I have no sympathy whatsoever for Michael, which is sad b/c I really do love him lol. But I really hope it doesnt take him too long to realize that he needs to do better. I'm worried though b/c it looks like they have a pattern of this, so if/when they do reconcile, what's going to keep them from falling apart again in the future? I guess I'll find out though lol. Love this story so much!!
Date: May 29, 2011 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 97
This was such a powerful chapter... I'm still trying to wrap my mind around everything that happened in it.
I hope Michael will stop being so damn stubborn. Jesse did the right thing in leaving, things were only getting worse between them. And that little romance between his assistent and the driver, I think it was? That was cute lol. And with Jackie and Nat... I think it's high time he found out about that. I remember you hinting about her being abused by her boyfriend in a previous chapter. Weeeel, that's all for now. I'll close by saying you're a wonderful author, I love this story and your writing style. They're both beautiful! :)
Date: May 29, 2011 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 97
AHHHHH!
Alright, let me try and spill my thoughts on this update!
This was a fantastic update! Loved it. Poor Jessie and Michael.... I hope they do fix things. They are both miserable and both to hard headed to realize that they do need each other and that life will be hell with out one another. I hope that he does know that Jess is only trying to fix things by leaving, maybe she secretly knows that he will come to his senses and man up and be the guy she fell in love with. I hate that they fell apart so rapidly... hopefully, they can fall back into that special place they had before the lies and bullshit drama!
Also, im very curious to whats going on with Natalie too. Wonder who has hit her before. Poor Jackie, all he wants to do is love her, but shes to afraid. I want them two to be happy too... they deserve it as much as Jess and Michael does.
This WAS AMAAAAZZZZIIINNNGGG! Love your writing! Your story never ceases to amaze me. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Date: May 25, 2011 08:33 am Title: Chapter 1
A surporise here wit the editing...You already know this the interludes the interludes, are wonderful good or bad times.I simply love them. My MJ and Jessie escape...thank you G.
Date: May 23, 2011 03:39 am Title: Interlude 9
Sigh. I love the interludes. I want them to get back to this place!! Michael is obviously experiencing some amnesia. I hope he remembers that he used to think of Jessie as more than a baby machine.
Date: May 23, 2011 02:50 am Title: Interlude 9
keep the faith <3
Date: May 22, 2011 06:18 am Title: Interlude 9
Oh my gosh. I loved this flashback. Even though she promised to never leave him, I'm happy that she is getting away for a while. They both need a short "break" to think, and regroup.
Date: May 22, 2011 04:30 am Title: Interlude 9
Well, she left ya crazy tail Michael. Go Jessie. Love this story sweets.