[Report This]Date: Nov 28, 2012 03:20 am Title: Chapter 82
hahaha...I love how everytime the shit hits the fan...they have makeup sex and everything is once again better!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2012 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 42
you know I love this story and many of the things I can actually imagine him saying which makes it better. But somehow, I can't rap my head about the whole "baby" thing! hahaha I don't think michael is the kinda guy who uses baby all the time and I feel like its too corny but other than that i love it :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 13, 2012 09:33 am Title: Interlude 2
Oh Michael :-( breaking mine and Jessie's heart
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2012 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg!! This is great I love it already :-)
I'm excited to see how Michael and Jessica first met and started their love affair and how it all came to an end :(((
Omg in a way Michael is wrong for putting Jessie on blast in his new songs but he's and artist and thats how he delt with their break up :(( so it's kinda of a tough situation.
Jessie was wrong for feeding into the Media and their dirt but hey she's mad and hurt, so I can't be mad at her. But what Michael did was wrong too, so in a way Jessie had a good reason to talk some trash *shrugs* lol
I'm ready to go deeper into this story you've already drawn me in with the first chapter ^_^
Much Luv
AMALuvzMJ
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2012 06:05 am Title: Chapter 15
Very hot and steamy I love updates when they are pervy. O_O They are gettin married?! Yasssss XD
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2012 05:55 am Title: Chapter 14
I love Speechless and all of the women that he's w/on this site. i envy them lol XD
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2012 05:42 am Title: Chapter 13
I'm so glad that they are back together. I haven't read for awhile, but I remembered that you are very talented. So I'm back again XD
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2012 09:45 am Title: Epilogue
Yay! They did have a girl. That's what I was hoping for. Now they're having twins. I love this story so much! You said there would be a sequel, right? I'm really looking forward to it! I can't wait to read about their life as parents. Michael and Jessica are an amazing couple and you're an incredible writer.
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2012 04:26 pm Title: Epilogue
♥♥ Awww! Epilogue sadly, but still wonderfully written like the rest of the story! I loved this so much, it put everything into perspective. All of the 'television excerpts' I guess lol, and all the interviews; you kind of see how their life continues after the birth of the baby. You see what continues as the story ends, and before the sequel begins.
Awww ^_^ Natalie and Jackie had baby Alex! And hmm, I don't know if anyone picked up on it, but I definitely saw where you wrote 'sister-in-law'. She and Jackie got married?! *_* *fangirls extremely*
And awwww, Michael was right! *_* A baby girl, Aria like he said! Aria Katherine; that's beautiful and they seem so happy!!
Great job on the pictures and everything by the way :-))
AND OMFG TWINS?! Ahhh! I definitely can not wait for the sequel!!
Bravo on this story! It's wonderfully written, hilarious, dramatic, emotional, romantic, and entertaining all at once. It's not like any other story; always my favorite xoxoxoxo
- delavie
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2012 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 124
♥♥ :-) iagbiagbiqbguiabguiabgkanvsbgisegbknhskg
Omg another great one! Girl I tell ya, you were most definitely blessed with writing and the ability to captivate others with words. ^_^
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“What the ****---What the **** am I watching right now?! ‘YANA girls’?! ****ing YANA girls, Michael?!?!”
“Jessie please, calm down--”
“You said no more girls, Michael! So then why I am watching TV and seeing you singing and kissing up on females?! And why the **** do they have a nickname?!” she screeched.
“Oh, you won’t have any fans left to touch on when I’m through with you. You are dead, Michael Joseph! You’d better be damn glad I’m not with you now because as soon as I fly over there you are FINISHED. I am gonna kill you!”
“Jessie please! Calm down! The baby!” He reminded her frantically.
“Oh, don’t you worry; when this baby comes out I’m making it kick your ass too!”
“Oh God,”he groaned.
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Lmfaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaoooooooo! I hollered! XD
And it was so very sweet of Jessica to surprise him like that! Michael ain't even know what to do! Awwww :-)))
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2012 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 123
♥♥ Wow! This was soooo beautiful! Girl, you know me by now, I'm a big crybaby when it comes to your updates lmao! But really, this was absolutely touching! I can't believe this is seriously the end, but I am more than ready for a sequel!!! :-))) *_*
It was sweet when Alex apologized to Michael, and to Jessie. And when he and Michael had their conversation, it was really heart-felt. Everything's falling back into place perfectly
Date: Oct 02, 2012 02:12 am Title: Chapter 123
oh gosh girl i ma reading this story since a long time & afraid to read the last chapters of it. I can't tell you how much i am into this story. Something i live my life with i could say that, Jessie a character in which i believe everyone of us lookourselves. I can't wait for the sequel girl can't wait. Keep it up :D <3
Date: Oct 01, 2012 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story, you're a perfect writer! I love all your stories and i'm gonna start reading this one again right now because i'm a bit upset that it's finished but I'm happy for Michael and Jessie!!! Thank you!!!
With great love from Russia)))))
Author's Response: THank you so much, love! I hope you enjoy reading again as much as you did the first time! x
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2012 04:16 pm Title: Epilogue
HOLY SHIT!!!! My jaw dropped and my heart broke. That was beautiful and amazing and it was just interviews! You're such a talented writer and I absolutely CANNOT wait for the sequal. TWINS?! And it really was a girl! Haha, Michael was right. This story just melts my heart, I adore it. Thank you so much for bringing this genius and beautiful story to this site. <333
Date: Oct 01, 2012 03:34 pm Title: Epilogue
I've been reading your stories since the start but I never register to MJFICTION. And now this is the end. I'm so sad i wish it could last for ever LOL. But that's a gret Epilogue you made a great job, you made me sad, happy, laugh, cry... I really love your story! I'm so happy for them ;)
Kisses from France