[Report This]Date: Apr 11, 2021 11:26 am Title: Chapter 1 - Costume Girl
Exciting😀
Date: Jun 28, 2017 01:47 am Title: Chapter 22 - Onion Layers
OMG just read this story and you have written it so well!! I can't 3xpressess how bad I feel the need to hear the rest of this tale!!!
Date: Feb 28, 2014 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Costume Girl
I know it' been a long time since you posted, I'm sure you must have had you reasons, but pleeeaaaseeee, girl, please come back for me!!! Or tell me where can I keep up with this story? If you' re not posting here, are you posting at all? YOU NEED TO CONTINUE. THIS IS AMAZING.
You truly are an artist.
Your writting is fantastic.
That whole " sometime" thing was genius!!! I'm sure every obsessed die-hard fan like myself really appreciated it!
The way you describe Mchael, the way he thinks and how complex and impressive his inner life and personality truly are... Well, it's done beautifuly and I very much agree with everything you conveyed through his character. More so, I always thought of Michael to be just the way that you describe him here...
Yoy see, I need this story.
It made me feel someone out there understands me, thinks of Michael the way I do, as a powerfull source of inspiration and a window into human nature, as a starting point for a lot of spiritual questions...and a love that is strong and everlasting.
Please come back.
And if you feel like, I would very much appreciate your opinion on my very first and only story, " Not Too Young To Know",
Love,
Aileen.
Date: Aug 09, 2012 05:23 am Title: Chapter 17 - Cheaters Never Prosper
oh my god this chapter is so funny!!! adorably so!!! its so cute!!! i never knew there was a mathematical sequence in solving a rubik cube. thanks for the tip! much L.O.V.E.
Date: Aug 07, 2012 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Say Anything
Wow, this conversation felt so real. I love it!
Date: Aug 07, 2012 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Count Chocula
So adorable!
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2012 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Say, Say, Say...my name.
WHOA!!!!!!!!!! THE BEST INTIMATE SCENE I'VE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE A MAESTRO!!!!!!!!! I mean its not just the physical intensity of it all but the way you've woven emotion to passion in such perfection is absolutely amazing!!!!! YOU ARE MY ALL TIME FAVORITE MJFICTION AUTHOR!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2012 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Oxygen Deprivation
Ooooh...... this is getting exciting...... very exciting......
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2012 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Where's Bubbles?
Yeah I noticed the sometime too. But its not that he forgets it. It comes from his midwestern accent. Sometimes sound like sometime when he says it. Welcome to the club of grammar nazis! LOL ;-)
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2012 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 10- Who needs a table, anyway?
Bipolar, OCD, Multiple personalities, he definitely is a cracked case. Borderline much? LOL ;-)
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2012 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Caught Snooping
Oh I wish Michael had stared at me like that! God, what would I give to have had one moment with him. *le sigh......*
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2012 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Who is it?
Yeah that sure comes as a surprise doesn't it? Seeing a portrait of yourself drawn by man who you barely knew one hour ago. LOL ;-)
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2012 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Bleeding Art
The next thing I know he's gonna start hitting me like a third grader with a school yard crush! LOL this story is just too good!
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2012 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Claw
So adorable!!! And the want ad was hilarious! I actually had to stop reading this before I could laugh it all out and catch my breath! You are SO ORIGINAL!
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2012 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 5 - It's The Hair
"My hormones however send their heartfelt regrets" gee, your dialogues are so catchy! I love your writing!