Date: Sep 02, 2010 10:52 am Title: Chapter 14 - Say, Say, Say...my name.
HOT!!!! I'm loving this story so far! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Woot! We have a comment on the smut! lol Thanks... ...and if you like this one, there's way better yet to some. Things start to get really naughty, very fast. I work for ratings everyone! So throw some stars my way so I can push this up to 5 stars! lol. I'm so shameless.
Date: Sep 01, 2010 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Where's Bubbles?
love it!!!!! I'm really enjoying this story! and The whole "Sometime" thing I thought I was the only one who noticed that he never said the "s" hahahahaha!!! anyways plz continue.... :)
Author's Response: I know! Isn't that funny? I've seen a couple fanfics out there where they will write this into how he talks. I think it's cute. Thanks for the feedback! :)
Date: Sep 01, 2010 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Costume Girl
OMG!!!!!...ui LOVE it...i must have more!!!!!
Date: Sep 01, 2010 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Caught Snooping
I was right about Michael liking Jean. Doing a portrait is just beautiful.
Author's Response: I thought it might be nice to touch on what a great illustrator he was... Of course, I'm a little biased because I'm an illustrator myself. Thanks for the feedback! :)
Date: Sep 01, 2010 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Who is it?
Michael is very mysterious It seems he has been interested in Jean for some time.
Date: Sep 01, 2010 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Claw
Great chapter. I love the banter between Michael and Jean.
Date: Aug 31, 2010 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Costume Girl
totally gonna give you stars!!!! :) love it girl!!!
Author's Response: You are so awesome! Thanks for the rating!
Date: Aug 31, 2010 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Caught Snooping
I love this story!!!! please update soon! It's Really good!!!
Author's Response: I expect I will get a bunch of chapters up tonight. Keep an eye out. And gimme some stars if you like it! lol MJsBadgirl kicked my fanfic ass with her stinginess. LOL! Im worried people won't read the damn thing with stars like that. haha... tough crowd today!
Date: Aug 31, 2010 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Caught Snooping
I love it, definetely keep it coming!
Author's Response: your wish is my command. More will go up tonight.
Date: Aug 31, 2010 10:34 am Title: Chapter 4 - Reality Check
Love the chapter Michael is very forward here.No holding him back despite the fact he hardly knows Jean.
Author's Response: It will make sense in the next couple chapters...don't worry. lol
Date: Aug 31, 2010 10:23 am Title: Chapter 3 - Who ARE you?
I bet Michael has found someone just like him.Maybe they will be good friends and even more than that. Great chapter.
Date: Aug 31, 2010 09:52 am Title: Chapter 2 - Oops.
Jean really didn't have to measure him at all. Michael must have been having a great time while she was measuring him.
Date: Aug 31, 2010 09:49 am Title: Chapter 1 - Costume Girl
I like this. I wonder has Michael taken an interest in the new girl.