[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2010 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Say Anything
Wow! What a great chapter! It pains me to say this but The fame monster definatly turn againts Michael. The same media machine that shot Michael's career into the stratosphere, the likes of witch will never happen again, plotted his down fall. His relationship was on a downward sprial with the press. because of his lack of doing interviews what so ever. Then the backlash happened.
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2010 02:01 am Title: Chapter 15 - Count Chocula
This Fanfic is so great! I love it! One minute Michael is a sexy powerfull beast! the next he is a cute little kid. Its so hot! Everyone has many facets to them, and Michael was no different. He could be one way the next and then some one totaly different the next.
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2010 01:53 am Title: Chapter 14 - Say, Say, Say...my name.
Damn girl...That was great! I don't think I have ever read such an sexy, erotic fanfic. It was sooo goood.... I want more! I imaging Michael this way. I think he was an in the closet freak for real! I like tis side of him!! Keep the chapters coming babe!
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2010 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Who is it?
Oh snap! What a cliff hanger! It was me. OOOOWeeee!!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2010 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Claw
Ha! this chapter was so funny! You have a great since of humour girl!!! These whole Fanfic as a whole is histarical! I love it! The Personal Ad of Michael was great! SBM Pop star. Closet Pervert hiding behind......ect. It was funny. Oh and, Think dead Puppies, think dead puppies, THINK FUCKING DEAD PUPPIES!!!!!! It's soooo funny!! "Plotting my demise?" "With every mental resource I can call upon, Michael dear." That was hilralious!!!! Keep the chapters comming girl!!!!
Date: Sep 20, 2010 11:50 am Title: Chapter 1 - Costume Girl
Very well written, and good vocab! This is my all time favorite on the website!
[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2010 11:50 am Title: Chapter 22 - Onion Layers
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH! IVE BEEN WAITING SOOOO LONG!! I can't read anything else bc Ive got these two stuck in my head!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 02, 2010 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Mom always said, don't play ball in the house.
sooo good!!!!! don't leave us waiting for an update to long haha :) love it!
Author's Response: yeah...kinda got wrapped up with a wee bit of a text war with a certain ohhh...ex...husband this evening. So, updates were temporarily delayed. But I'm back on the case.
Date: Sep 02, 2010 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Oh HALE Naw!
Exceedingly great. I'm very close to removing my fics. I'm about to go back to the drawing board.
Author's Response: Oh please. Don't do that! I'm reading them!! I like yours!!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 02, 2010 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Oh HALE Naw!
seriously I can't get enough of this story!!!! I love the updates!!! Please continue your doing a great job!
Author's Response: thank you soooo much. And thanks for being like...the only person who will click the rating tab. lol! It's gonna take for freakin ever to shake off the 2 star rating I got. LOL
Date: Sep 02, 2010 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 19 - The Walk
Made me smile too. :) I like picture moments like this for Michael....ones of pure happiness and peace.
Author's Response: Isn't it comforting to see him have a moment like that? I think so anyway...even if it is only fantasy.
Date: Sep 02, 2010 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 19 - The Walk
Aw. I'm glad she help give him that experience. They seem to be really good for each other. Thanks for the update. :)
Author's Response: Their dynamic is pretty good at this point...that's what I've heard. But later on, it gets more difficult to keep them homogenous.
[Report This]Date: Sep 02, 2010 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Operation MJ Escape
I freaking love this story!!! PLEASE update soon!!!! :)
Author's Response: Just did! Ch. 19 is up, more on the way!
Date: Sep 02, 2010 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Cheaters Never Prosper
I'm enjoying it. Good story and a good writer. :)
Author's Response: wicked awesome! Thanks!
Date: Sep 02, 2010 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Costume Girl
This chapter was funny....what happens next?
Author's Response: Read, and ye shall receive... ;-D It gets better. But, that's just my biased opinion. Thanks for the feedback!