[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2012 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Reality Check
This story just keeps getting better! Hands down to you sistah!
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2012 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Who ARE you?
Oh Sweet Jesus! Yeah that's right. Fitting in Savannah's office and all the while he was just playing along! Damn, this scene was just too good! I feel like I'm inside this story! Watching it like a movie! LOL ;-)
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2012 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Oops.
Oh my god this was sooo funny I couldn't stop laughing! I love your style! It's so natural and yet so profound. Very expressive! I LOVE this story. I loved the parts "my heart jumped into my throat, then out of my mouth and onto the floor where it spontaneously caught fire in smoldering ash" "now you've impressemld me. Not many girls make it to thid point without a dinner and a movie first" and "if i could die and crawl into a hole and fall all the way to china I would" Hahahaha. They are all so raw and so funny, which makes everything about this chapter so appealing! I'm a fan!
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2012 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Costume Girl
Wow. Great start. Great writing! I've got a feeling this is going to be one of my new favorites!
[Report This]Date: Feb 25, 2011 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Operation MJ Escape
that is so funny i love this story!
Date: Feb 20, 2011 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Say, Say, Say...my name.
such a hot, passionate love scene!
Date: Dec 20, 2010 12:03 am Title: Chapter 1 - Costume Girl
I hope you update soon...I'm really missing your story.
Date: Dec 02, 2010 06:00 am Title: Chapter 22 - Onion Layers
Are you going to continue posting this story?? I really love it xxx
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2010 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Say, Say, Say...my name.
This chapter was so good that I had to read it again. Its so erotic. Michael put it down on her good! ...To Be Continued. After a cold shower. Indeed.
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2010 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Costume Girl
Amazing,full of emotion and just downright fantastic! I adore Jean! She is exactly like me a feisty redhead! Please I need more! You conveyed Michael brilliantly! x
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2010 01:36 am Title: Chapter 21 - Mom always said, don't play ball in the house.
LOL! Girl you are so funny! I love you and this fanfic!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2010 01:24 am Title: Chapter 20 - Oh HALE Naw!
Boom Shaka Locka Girl!!!! I loved it! Fantastic chapter honey! I love a Manly poweful angery Michael! He is so sexy!! I liked how he defened Jean. I didn't relazied that he concered Jean to be his woman. Thats good though. That would have been great had he hit James!
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2010 12:38 am Title: Chapter 19 - The Walk
I really enjoyed this chapter. It made me smile. Its nice to see Michael out and about just enjoying himself.
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2010 12:26 am Title: Chapter 18 - Operation MJ Escape
AHAHAH! SO funny! I really like how you switch Charareter POV in this chapter. That was genius! ;-D
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2010 12:15 am Title: Chapter 17 - Cheaters Never Prosper
I'll throw you a bone girle! This fanfic is great! And its so funny! Operation: MJ Escape. Hilarious!!!