Date: Dec 01, 2022 10:42 am Title: Surprise
That was awesome!
Date: Dec 01, 2022 10:16 am Title: Preparation for Departure
Interesting premise :)
[Report This]Date: May 05, 2016 05:06 pm Title: Deadly Experience
I love the ending of the story, and how she kept to her promise.
Date: Aug 22, 2014 06:35 am Title: Surprise
I really hoped that Kenya and Michael would end up together 😞
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2012 09:08 am Title: Surprise
Best ending ever
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2012 03:03 am Title: Surprise
I really liked the story. Did you get sources about Michael's personality or did you make that bit of the story up? Anyhow, I quite liked his personality. Very nice story, premise, and OC.
Author's Response: Well for his personality it was kind of stretched. Some parts were the real him but other parts were just me making it up for the sake of the story. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :D
Date: Jun 10, 2012 10:54 am Title: Surprise
Nice ending! Lol I bet her friends & family have tons of questions for Kenya.
Author's Response: Lol! You don't have to lie... the ending wasn't that great. And yeah, I know that I'd definitely have tons of questions! Hope you liked the story! :)
Date: May 13, 2012 08:38 pm Title: Row, Row, Row, Your Boat... Haha, Just Kidding
“He’s attracted to me!” I screamed as I pointed at him. Michael looked shocked and then looked at Richard. “No I am not! Not anymore!” Richard defended. “Oh my God...” Michael muttered under his breath Haha hes like ...oh my fucking god just stop already haha
Author's Response:
:) Yeah.. Richard's kinda weird, Kenya's becoming a bit of a handful and Michael is just tired of everything. Haha the next few chapters to write are going to be fun and interesting...
Thanks for the reviews BTW! I love it! You always review and I always look forward to reading them! :D
Date: May 13, 2012 03:47 am Title: Row, Row, Row, Your Boat... Haha, Just Kidding
I'm back I'm back I'm back! Whew..Since when I haven't read this story? Dude, I miss your story... *big hug*
Author's Response:
OMJ! Yay you're back! I missed you! You always leave so many lovely reviews and when I didn't see thme for awhile I was like "O.M.J what did I do wrong?!" Phew, glad you're back. I was worried for awhile. :) **Bigger hug back**
[Report This]Date: May 05, 2012 10:26 am Title: Richard The Weirdo
OH SHIT! HAHA Y.O.L.O!
THAT REMINDED ME OF THIS ONE DAY WHEN MY FRIEND AND I SEEN TWO OLD guys and i mean ooooooold guys , white guys , in this pimped out car with rims and hydrolicks blastin The Motto down my street....omg i was diein!!!
Author's Response:
haha lol! Omj I would have died! Holy crap that sounds funny as hell! I wish we had old guys like that in my town! lol! That's probably gunna be Eminem when he's 80.
Date: May 04, 2012 11:22 pm Title: Richard The Weirdo
"I can poke you with something else baby..."
LMFBO at that line. Imagining some wrinkly old man saying that to me makes me look like what Kenya's expression resembled. And Mister Jackson over there is a bad, bad adoptive father, he should have smacked Richard in his head lol.
Geez, Kenya and Michael can only seem to get rescued by scheming pirates or just plan nutsos. What luck they have.
Nice update. :)
Author's Response:
lol! yeah, luck definitely hasn't been on their side lately.
Wanna know something? The reason why I added that line was because it actually happened! lol! I was sitting in class and the kid next to me kept poking me with his pencil and after awhile I turned to him and said, "Dude! Quit poking me with your pencil!" and he gave me the creepiest look EVER and he was like "I can poke you with sometihng else baby!" and I was like "OMJ... you're so creepy..." and he said, "Screw you Kourteny! Haha, I'd like to..."
Creepiest thing ever! lol!
Thanks for the reivew! Glad you're enjoying the story! :)
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2012 03:57 pm Title: Father
Well that's was just great ! Now I got to wait until u write another chapter that was a good chapter !!!!!!!
Author's Response:
:) Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it! I'll definitely have another chapter posted up before the end of the week! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: May 02, 2012 02:48 pm Title: Behind the Mask
Awww :)
Date: May 02, 2012 02:26 pm Title: Deadly Experience
Its verry good
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2012 11:25 pm Title: Father
Haha Hey! Dont interupt . Haha but thats sweet