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Reviewer: LiberianGirl777 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2012 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story! I'm really enjoying it!



Author's Response: Thanks. Stay tuned, there's a lot coming up.

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2012 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 17

That was so sad. I was really excited for their baby. Their trip was really fun to read about, though. It almost completely made up for the heartbreak.



Author's Response: Yeah. As I said, nothing is every easy for these two. But each heartbreak brings them closer together.

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2012 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 16

Yay, a baby! That's what I was hoping for. Michael is so sweet. This is easily one of my favorite stories ever.



Author's Response: Hold on to your hat, because nothing is ever easy for these two.

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2012 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 15

Awesome! It's great to finally read about Michael's wild side! I don't want this story to end, ever.



Author's Response: Hahaha! There was just something about him. It was in his eyes. He always struck me as a huge tease. And if there was a young lady in his life that he felt completely comfortable around, Lord help her, I think he'd screw with her head like that all the time. LOL

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2012 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 14

WHOOO FINALLY! It was so worth the wait. Perfect! Can't wait to see what's next now that their engagement is official.



Author's Response: I'm pretty sure that's what was going through Mikey's mind as well! Lol

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2012 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 13

Awww Mikey...it's so sweet how Felicia was there for him.



Author's Response: I always felt that no one really dealt with how devastating it would be for a black man to lose his coloring. I was happy to do it and had tears in my eyes as I wrote it.

Reviewer: Jrmspfingston Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2012 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 13

oh poor Michael it was sweet of her to comfort him I would have done the same can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response: I just posted it. It's been a long time coming.

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2012 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 12

Great! Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response: Working on the next one now.

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2012 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 11

This chapter had so many great things: The Lady in my Life, Motown 25, Michael with attitude, the promise ring, and sexual tension. Great as always!



Author's Response: There was so much to cover! He led such an interesting life.

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2012 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 10

Yay! Randy saved the day and they got through the Chicago drama. Great chapter!



Author's Response: I <3 Randy.

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2012 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 9

Wow. That was heartbreaking. Edward is such a CREEP! The "Felicia Day present" thing was really cute, though. I could imagine Michael saying something like that. Can't wait to see how they work this out.



Author's Response: Yeah, Edward was a major douche. But he didn't count on being clocked like that by a woman. Lol Stay tuned, they aren't out of the woods yet.

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2012 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 8

Yes! This story is awesome. I love Michael being so assertive. I said it once and I'll say it again. GO MIKE! Get your girl!



Author's Response: I've always believed that if Michael felt strongly about something, then nothing could stop him. So, mess with a woman that he considers to be his..........

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2012 10:00 am Title: Chapter 7

Awww, Felicia spent some quality time with the Jacksons! But can she not go to Chicago and get caught up with that creep? Come on, Felicia!



Author's Response: Aww, but then there'd be no drama. :-( And trust me, Chicago brings drama. Lol

Reviewer: Jrmspfingston Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2012 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 6

I like this story please update soon :)



Author's Response: Thanks. Stay tuned, there's a LOT of twists and turns in the future.

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2012 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 6

Whoo, it's official! I'm so happy for them. But what is that creep Edward gonna do? And is Michael really gonna stick with that whole virginity thing? I mean, that's cool and everything, but he could change his mind, right? LOL



Author's Response: Well, boys will be boys. And Michael is proving that he is all man. Just one with strong convictions. But, then again, with a little temptation......who knows? I'll never tell. As for Edward? He's got a few tricks left up his sleeve.

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