[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2012 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 27
Girl, you update so much, I can barely get the time to catch up! I really love this story but, can you slow down a little?
Author's Response: Lol Sorry about that! It's just that the whole story is already written. And I'm currently on pregnancy bedrest, so I have nothing else to do all day. But, I'll try to slow down a bit.
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2012 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 36
Oh no. He's really gonna do the O2 concerts? I hope everything turns out okay. I really hope his marriage with Felicia is enough to help him avoid trouble.
Author's Response: Love is a powerful thing. And their marriage is strong. But stubborn is stubborn.
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2012 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 35
I just love their family! They've come such a long way. I can't believe it! And no O2 concerts? I definitely consider that a good thing. At least I hope it is!
Author's Response: Felicia's opposed to it. But, as we've learned, Michael is very stubborn and a little sneaky when he wants to be. So....we'll see.
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2012 11:41 am Title: Chapter 34
This chapter was very entertaining! I love this story!
Author's Response: I think the most fun part of the whole story for me was showing how much fun Michael and Felicia managed to have with each other, even in their later years.
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2012 03:25 am Title: Chapter 3
Hi
I just found your story and I'm only 3 chapters in but I just wanted to let you know that I'm loving it and to thank you for sharing xx
Author's Response: Thanks so much for being a new reader! Feel free to share any opinions you have on the story as you read. I always respond to reviews.
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2012 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 31
That was so beautiful. You did a great job of capturing the emotions Michael must have felt at the possibility of being convicted. I have a feeling this story is coming to an end soon. Please tell me I'm wrong.
Author's Response: Well, I can't really say that. This is my vision of what Michael's life may have been like had he had a partner/spouse that he could really trust. Somethings, would have changed as in children being born earlier. Somethings, as in old demons and habits, would not.
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2012 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 27
LOL That last scene was funny, but I know it won't be like that for much longer because trouble's brewing *sigh*
Author's Response: Troubles always brewing. But these two are tough. They can make it if they stick together.
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2012 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 25
That was perfect! What a relief to read a chapter that's pure joy. I'm so glad they got through everything stronger than ever. And I'm super excited they're expanding their family.
Author's Response: I've always wondered, if Michael had married earlier in life, if he would have actually reached his goal of 10 children. If he didn't, I'd be willing to bet it wasn't for lack of trying! lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2012 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 24
This is so tough to read but I think you're doing a great job of realistically representing the things Michael went through.
Author's Response: That was the goal. To present Michael as a whole person/man other than the musical icon that many people pigeonholed him into being. Not saying that he wasn't, of course. But there was so much more to his story than the music.
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2012 11:29 am Title: Chapter 21
These chapters can be like a real roller coaster. One part I'm estastic for them and grinning like crazy, then the next I'm sad and really worried about them. But that's life, so you're doing a great job!
Author's Response: That seemed to be the path of Michael's life. Never being able to really catch a break.
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2012 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 20
LOL That Oprah interview was hilarious. Michael sure did love to shock the world, so it makes perfect sense. But I can't believe they kept their marriage a secret that long!
Author's Response: Hey, it could have been possible if he wanted. We didn't find out about Janet's marriage until she divorced. And she was married twice as long! Lol
Date: Jan 24, 2012 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 21
Ooh, I remember reading this fic over at posmike, I didn't know you were on MJFiction! This was my second fan fic I've read and I fell in love with it, I adore your writing style! This fic had me crying like a baby at some points especially towards the end! But i loved it :) Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: *waves* Hey! Lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2012 11:42 am Title: Chapter 19
Yay! It's official! That was so beautiful! I can't wait to see what married life is like for them.
Author's Response: In a nutshell? Ups, downs, and in betweens. Lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2012 10:19 am Title: Chapter 21
I finally have some time to review some stories and just want to say keep up the good work. Interesting and well written. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I figured most of my readers were silent readers. But it's nice to read the comments of those who take the time to write.
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2012 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 18
This chapter was just beautiful!
Author's Response: *smile* Thanks