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Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2012 09:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Michael is blinded by that crusty ass beach whale named Diana. Michaels going to see that Diana is not perfect and I can't wait to see it. I also think Diana was the one who shot Lexi. It's weird how as soon as Lex is gone. Her is Diana. Ugghh that bitch!!



Author's Response:

It is weird that she moved in as soon as Lexi is gone....:)  Thanks so much 2human4nature.  Your FANTASTIC.  I just appreciate you so much.  And girl, i'm dying for updates!

<3 Leah

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2012 01:06 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

DIANA YOU FUCKING BITCH! She just had to fuck everything up. She's got Michael wrapped around her finger, she's playing him like a violin, treating him like a puppet and SHE'S the puppet master. I can't believe he wouldn't believe Frank and "Sara". Something needs to be done. Someone needs to make him see the light and that DIANA is the real enemy here. SOMEONE needs to. I swear to god, if someone doesn't I am fully prepared to start a riot! I WILL find a way into this story and I will go after Diana with MY bare hands! -_- I hate her so much. Great work Leah, I can't wait for more! :D

 

P.S. You will always have my support Leah. :D <3



Author's Response:

you are so sweet! And I LOVE LOLOL How mad you are at Diana.  Thanks so much!!!! :) <3 <3

Reviewer: susan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2012 07:56 am Title: Introduction.

I hope so! Somebody needs to stir up something MJU is getting to be a pain because of Diana!



Author's Response:

He is seriously struggling isn't he?  It's awful!  Thanks so much Susan for reading!! <3

Reviewer: ladyskywalker23 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2012 07:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

AAAH SHIIIT OH MY DAYS!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!!!! NO MICHAEL YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO BELIEVE SARA!!!!!

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2012 10:21 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Omg Diana is SO bad in this..... I cant even.....! ! ! This was so dramatic... Wonder what will happen, the wedding has to be stopped!! AHHH This is amazing and so full of action xD The way you write is just the incredible - thats why i love to take time out to sit down and relax before reading this story! XD update ASAP love!

Author's Response:

She is! I agree.  Thanks so much for reading, and thanks so much for your kind words! They mean so much coming from an INCREDIBLE author that I respect so much!!

<3 Leah

Reviewer: AlexisJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2012 07:15 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

OMG OMG OMG Diana is such a bitch. Manipulative, coniving, mouthy, little bitch that needs brought back down to her level. He can't marry Diana. He just can't. I swear he is soooo blind. Blind to her tricks and her lies. He is so wrapped up in Diana he can't see who he has standing right in front of him. If he marrys' Diana, it will be the biggest mistake of his life. Not to mention kicking Lexi out of his house and firing Frank. I'm sorry The moments between Frank and lele are so cute. I know they are friends, but they are still cute. Anyway Great chapter doll. UPDATE SOON. Lots of love. Oh and I sent another banner request. If you have time.

Author's Response:

Hey! So glad  you like it Alexis :).  I DID see it, i've been working about 18 hours a day right now. AHH!!! But i'm DEFINTELY going to try to work on it tomorrow.  Much <3 Leah

Reviewer: MichaelsBillieJean1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2012 04:36 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

I'm so disappointed in you, man! That you let that bitch manipulate you like that! Lex played into her hands tho! Did she really think Cruella would just admit it? She is so strong! If I was her, I'd simply blurted out, who I was. Michael is gonna make the mistake of his life, if he marries her. Let Janet kick her bro's ass and give him an update! He'll see, he's been fooled and trapped! I sooo agree with Temptress! Update! Update! Update! :-D

Author's Response:

Aww thanks so much! So glad  you like it :).  <3 Leah

Reviewer: susan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2012 03:57 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Ok girl you know I am loving all the updates and want more soon but enough is enough when is dummy going to open his eyes. He is being a complete idiot and something needs to happen and soon real soon!



Author's Response:

Susan! I'm glad you like the updates AND AHH! I wish I could tell you what's going to happen!!!! Some stuff is definetely going to unravel in the next few chapters though so be ready! :) Thanks so much AGAIN girl....you just make my day!! <3 Leah

Reviewer: Abc Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2012 01:54 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Cool update! I'm new to this story, but I'm glad I checked it out. I feel so bad for Sara, being in her shoes must be AWFUL. Well, I'll be looking out for the next update! 



Author's Response:

Hey! I LOVE new readers!! I'm glad your checking it out! Thanks for taking the time to read it :).  I hope you continue to enjoy it! <3 Leah

Reviewer: Temptress Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2012 12:51 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Uh uh.

NO. NO no no no no no and NO! MICHAEL! WHAT ARE YOU DOING! DIANA YOU BLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP! ARE YOU KIDDING ME? LOVERS QUARREL?! HOW DARE YOU LAY HANDS ON LEXI?! NU UH. NO. YOU DO NOT LAY HANDS ON MY GIRL. NOPE.

MICHAEL YOU IMBECILE! ARE YOU SERIOUS? KICKING HER OUT WHEN SHE WAS THE ONLY ONE THAT CARED ABOUT YOU?! THE WOMAN THAT DIDNT EVEN BOTHER TO SHOW UP WHILE YOU WERE IN THE HOSPITAL HAS MORE SAY SO THAN HER?! REALLY.

............Mmkay. Im calm. CALLLLLLLLLLMMMMMMMMMM. Nope, I'm really not. KDJFLSKDJLSKDJF LADY IM GONNA  HAVE A STROKE. Its either laugh or kill Diana...or I can laugh while I kill her but you know....

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH I need another one. Please please please please PUHHHH LEEAAASEE! See how many times I said please? I NEED ANOTHER UPDATE!

Reviewer: Temptress Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2012 04:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Leah, this chapter is just...absolutely heartbreaking. I mean the detail, how every word transports me to this scene. I'm right there, watching everything as it happens, feeling everything Sara is. 

Simply incredible. Michael wants to be friends after he kissed her. Michael, Michael, Michael...don't you know that simply can't happen after you KISSED HER?! You can't just kiss her then be like "Can we be friends?" after sending her mixed signals?! ESPECIALLY BECAUSE ITS LEXI?! hOW CAN YOU NOT KNOW THAT'S LEXI?! Hello?!??!

And lady...the comment "I'm  not telling you which Chris it is.." IS KILLING ME! YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU'RE DOING!!!

..........anyhoo. This chapter...just tore my heart apart. Imagine being Lexi, just wanting the love of your life and watching them marry someone else...and talking so lovingly about you, and  youre sitting right in front of them..imagine the heartbreak. GAH LADY! Youre just...incredible. I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!! 39538969486986 stars! But the scale only goes to ten. BUT IM RATING ANYWAY! :) 

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2012 12:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Aww... :( I wish she'd tell him but I get why she isn't. I want that guy chasing her found so she can have her real life back. :( It's so sad and I feel my heart break for her with every passing chapter. Imagining someone in a situation like this... it's so awful. I hope everything works out soon. Good work Leah. :) I can't wait for more. :)



Author's Response:

It is heart breaking.  Not only your best friend but the person your in love with? AHHH! It would be so hard.  Thanks so much for your continued support MJLF :) <3 Leah

Reviewer: ladyskywalker23 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2012 10:20 am Title: Introduction.

wow, wow, wow.... that's all i have to say... i didn't get to compliment you earlier but i will again, the way you wriite this story is amazing, everything about is amazing, please continue! i will give you 100/100!!!



Author's Response:

Awww thanks SO much!!! You hhave no idea how much that means!! <3 Leah

Reviewer: ladyskywalker23 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2012 10:14 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

OOOOOOOOOOH NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!, Y didn't she tell him? when is she gonna tell him? she has to, she has to now!!! oh my i ca'nt wait for the next chapter!!!! please update!!!! next chapter roll on girl!!!!



Author's Response:

Thakns so much ladyskywalker23 :)  I'm SO glad your into it!!!! :) AND i just updated!

<3 Leah

Reviewer: susan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2012 09:27 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Ok girl I am so glad you updated but you are killing me. When exactly is something good going to happen please please. Michael is a fool in two ways he has kissed Lexi how many times and has kissed Sara twice and he can't tell the difference oh boy he is a ditz and him believing in Diana oh please she is a piranha. Girl please let something good happen soon.!



Author's Response:

Things are getting ready to get stirred up..... Ahh! But i can't say any more :S.  Thanks so much for reading Susan...you are amaaaaaazzzzing! So encouraging :) <3 Leah

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