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Reviewer: Temptress Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2012 07:37 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

SHEW. Ok ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

Lady....sea puns? Awkwardness? Dahhhhling? I know where all this came from Mrs. Thang. AND I LAAAVAIT. 

ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL Making a splash. Triton's daughter. I'm literally....rolling... clutching my stomach and almost fell out of my chair from laughter a few times. 

AND OMGOMGOMGOMG HE KISSED HER. Just like...BAM. Lord....He has to know. There is like no way he can't not know now!

And Diana... -_- freaking psychotic spazz...she needs to hop of the Bridezilla pedestal and calm the hell down. And what about My fiancee...he's loaded. Yes thats not subtle or anything. 

And judging from your description of her dress...ROFLROFLROFL Lord have mercy. I would give anything...to see her make a splash at this wedding. She defenitely shorely would reach a whaley epic proportions of LSKFJSLDKJFSLKJ. Sea what I mean? LOLOL Ok. Im good. 

Anywhosit...lady!! You are purely genius at comedic relief. You make me feel like I'm there...watching this whole thing as it unfolds. Which sometimes makes me wanna leap at my screen and attack michael...but you didnt hear that from me. 

LDJFLKDSJFKDJFLKJFD 98579837874598374 stars lady!! Keep it up!!

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2012 03:17 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

I'm so sick of Diana. Michael needs to kick her to the curb. I wanna punch her in his face. Aww MJ and Sara kissed!!



Author's Response:

Diana is a definite pain......sooooo much entitelement! AGH! Thanks so much for reading!!!! :)

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2012 02:19 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

OMG!! Michael KISSED her!!! OMG! This was great! I loved it so much! Diana annoys the HELL out of me, I really hope Michael won't marry her. -_- But I did enjoy the dress Lexi convinced her to buy. Mwuhaha. Revenge is so sweet at times. >D I can't wait for the next chapter! I wanna see the outcome of that little moment there! :D Great work Leah! :D

P.S. I didn't think that whole "miss iiiiiiiinngg" thing was lame. LOL I enjoyed that! ;)



Author's Response:

He did kiss her!! AHHHH!!!! FINAAAAAALLLLLLLLLY! lolol i'm glad Diana gets under your skin also...because she seriously gets under mine as well!!! AHH! She's such a pain sheesh!!! LOL i'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!!!! And i'm glad you don't think my dorkiness is lame lololol.  Makes me feel better :)

Thanks for being such an incredible reader!!! :)

Much Love,
Leah

Reviewer: AlexisJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2012 06:21 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Ok, after that little show of affection she seriously needs to tell him. SOON. It's killing me.Anyway great chapte. Lots of love.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much Alexis!!! :) Your such an incredible encouragement!!!! <3 Leah

Reviewer: Temptress Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2012 11:58 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

BAAAAAAAAAAAAH. I just can't get over that.  Wrap my mind around it fully.  I gave you the most reason not to care, and besides my family you cared the most."  

Im just done. My heart is squeezing a bit too hard at this. AND OMG MICHAEL ROFLROFLROFL WHAT ARE YOU THINKING? Lexi/Sara with Diana? Boyyy you don't know what you're doing.

And LOLOL Chris...is such a tool. But OOOOOOO he knows!! HE KNOWS!!! 

SDKFJSDKFJSKDJFKSDJF IM JUST OOBER EXCITED FOR THIS UPDATE!! Joe you little betrayer. Im just saying I gave him a cookie earlier line...freakin GENIUS. A cookie?! REALLY! LOLOLOLOLOL

As always ma'am, BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN. 87346538746538746837465 stars!!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

<3 Thanks Tempy!! :)

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2012 08:34 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Oh dear, here we go. Lol I feel so bad for Lexi. She has to spend time with Diana, she really loves him, huh? LOL! I loved their bonding moments and I find it funny that Joe doesn't like Chris either. Lol, at least he likes "Sara" :D I wonder if Chris does know she's Lexi. >.> Hmm... I guess I'll wait and see. Though, that kind've makes me go "Does everyone know that's Lexi except Michael!?!?" Lol, it's so infuriating. Ah well, I'm sure he'll figure it out soon enough. As for the updates, Leah. Don't worry. Take your time. We know life can be very chaotic at times. You update when you can and that's what counts. ;) Wonderful work, I can't wait for more! :D



Author's Response:

Lol She does really love him or i'm pretty sure Miss Ross would be Miss iiiinnng. ...........That was pretty lame lol.  You'll have to excuse me i've been working on updates all night.  LOL I love Joe.  As for Michael...........he's completely clueless...but not hopeless lol.  You'll have to see what I mean by that.

Thanks so much for the continued support and encouragement :)

Much Love,
Leah <3

Reviewer: susan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2012 07:20 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Thanks so much loved it esprcially the Chris and dog part that was hysterical. Thanks so much can't wait for more. Can  do w/o Diana though!



Author's Response:

Aww i'm glad you loved it! Susan you brighten my day with your reviews thanks so much :) 

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2012 09:13 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

OMG! Fiiiiinaaaaaaaallly!!!!!! I'm so excited! I feel like dancing! :D Michael's finally letting Le~ I mean "Sara" in! ;) Oh I can't wait for the next chapter, it's going to be very interesting! Thank you Chris Tucker! Normal conversation, it's going to be so interesting to read that between them again! :D I loved how when Lexi won she started singing "Beat It"! Haha! THAT was hilarious! Chris cracks me up, he's so flirtatious! I love it! You know, I had a feeling that the reason Michael was being so cold towards "Sara" was because she reminded him of Lexi. Considering she IS Lexi. I cannot wait to see what happens with this story! Reading this makes me happy, I love your updates! But Leah, don't worry about how often you update. :) We understand that you can't always update frequently. Stuff happens. An update once in awhile is better then none at all. :) I look forward to your next update and I don't care how long I have to wait! Lol ;)



Author's Response:

OMG I LOVE your reviews!!!! I look for them every time i update :).  I love Chris Tucker so much, and I love writing the normal dialogue between lexi and michael again.  Well.....semi normal at least lol. I'm so glad my updates make you happy, but i'm sure they don't make you as happy as your reviews make me :) I love them so much!  They encourage me to keep writing and Ahh! I'm so glad you understand the lags but i'm definetely going to try and make those less frequent. 

MUAH! Much <3

Leah

Reviewer: Lele Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2012 10:10 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Please PLEASE update! I've been waiting for this story.

 

I can't wait until she tells Michael that she's Lexi! AHHHHH I'm so excited for the next update!



Author's Response:

Aww thanks so much Lele!!!! I just updated twice to make up for the delay i know it's been a long time coming :S. 

I'm so glad you like it though!!!!

Much Love,

Leah

Reviewer: susan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2012 06:00 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Love it girl maybe they are getting somewhere sure hope so! If possible please update more you spoiled me updating daily or ever few days before. Love it please more! Love Chris maybe Lexi should confide to Chris the truth!



Author's Response:

Awww Susan thanks SO MUCH! I am so glad you love it and i'm so sorry my updates have been sporadic but to make up for it I posted two tonight :) As for Chris..............you'll have to see :) lol

Much Love

Leah <3

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2012 02:44 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

 

Hahahah, that was funny and cute!! The only person i possibly love more than Chris Tucker (apart from Michael that is, hehee) is Eddie Murphy xD legendzzzz ohmahgawd.

WOOOO... Back to the story though-

Michael is healinggg YESSS, i am so happy omg legit tearz of joy.

(ahhh, by the way everytime you use the name Sara I am reminded of my sister, im sure i have already said this ahah but i cant help but laugh each time because she absolutely avoids anything MJ at all costs, she is lame hehe.)

Please dont leave us hanging too long for da next chapter!!!! xD

 



Author's Response:

You have a sister named Sarah too? lol I imagine that's hilarious since she avoids Michael stuff hahahahahaha.  I have a feeling i'll be reminded of that while i'm doing updates now lol such a cute story!

And lololol I LOVE Chris Tucker and Eddie Murphy too.  Oh my goodness..they are both hilarious!

Sorry the update took so long and girl, I am SO looking forward to sitting down and sifting through the chapters of your story i've missed.  Much love, Leah

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2012 12:51 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

The Michael we love is back!! I missed him!! I can't wait for this conversation!! Hopefully we are closer to her telling him the truth.



Author's Response:

I missed him too!!!! :) Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Temptress Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2012 10:58 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

RRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!! Twinkle toes...as much swag as Michael Jordan on a golf course....So much sass in this chapter. Chris is such a troll.

About time Michael you stop being an ass to L-Sara. She's the only one that's been there through all of that.  I love how you kept Chris to a minimum in this chapter so you have room to add him to later chapters. He is being added later right?!

SLKFJLSKDFJSLDKFJKDFJ LEAH EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! You've outdone yourself again Ms. Thang. I LOVE IT!! Hint hint....CHRIS NEXT CHAPTER!!....................Ok Im good. BAH!!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE!! 398u43983938483984938 STARS!!

Reviewer: AlexisJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2012 10:13 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Love it girl. He's finally talking to her. Maybe she'll tell him she's her. who knows. SHE NEEDS TOO. Lol. Great chapter. Lots of love.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much Alexis!!!! I appreciate your reviews so much!! :)

Reviewer: susan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2012 12:03 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Hope you update soon!



Author's Response:

So sorry it took so long Susan!!! I just posted an update though :) Thanks so much for the support!!!!

Much Love,
Leah <3

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