[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2012 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
Love it! Continue hon:)
Date: Jan 21, 2012 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story is adorable, keep it up!!
~Grace
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2012 03:35 am Title: Chapter 7
I really hope that Mel will let Michael into her life and get rid of John as soon as possible I mean Michael and Mel will make a cute couple :) Please continue <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2012 03:10 am Title: Chapter 6
Aww:) That's so adorable please continue this story doll <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2012 02:20 am Title: Chapter 5
John is so pathetic right now. I love it doll , please continue <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2012 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
Why did John came in the story Mel doesn't want him , just saying. Thank you for your comment and you deserve it doll :) Please post more chapters I am hooked <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2012 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
Love it! Continue the story please :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2012 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
Please continue:) <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2012 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
Mel's ex was such a jerk, he couldn't even respect her wishes that's a damn shame:( <33 I love it thoughXD
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2012 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is VERY good:) I love it <33
Date: Jan 11, 2012 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think this is a great idea but you need to go back and correct spelling and capitalization errors within the story. It isn't necessary but, each time someone says something, there should be a line skipped.
I'm sorry people aren't reviewing but if you keep on rolling with these improvements, they'll come around. It also helps to have a banner of some sort to attract attention.
<3 Mrs. Maraj-Jackson