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Date: Sep 08, 2013 01:39 am Title: Bella's Birthday

*starts crying real thug tears* I'm glad he finally decided to celebrate :,) I still hate the chapter of when she died...



Author's Response: Yeah. I hated writing that chapter. Especially having to kill her off so soon. I just honestly couldn't think of one thing that could pull them apart but that.

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Date: Sep 08, 2013 01:30 am Title: PART FOUR

Lol looks like the 15 date plan didn't work out too well lmfao

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Date: Sep 08, 2013 01:22 am Title: The Conversation

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww how cuuuuute ^__^ I'm glad they got all that out lmfao

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Date: Sep 08, 2013 12:56 am Title: Katherine's Phone Call

And we're back to this again lmfao. She can never REALLY let go of Michael. And he can't let her go either. They need to fave the fact that they love each other and are soul mates lol

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Date: Sep 04, 2013 05:42 am Title: Time To Move On

Ah so we're at this stage again. I can't say I'm surprised lmfao

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Date: Sep 04, 2013 05:38 am Title: A One Night Stand

Since this was posted in 2010 I guess there's no point in suggesting fics to you lol. But I looooooved how they were expressing their feelings for each other :,)

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Date: Sep 04, 2013 05:21 am Title: "I'm Still In love"

Well of course he's not gonna take it well lmfao. Does he ever? Loooooooool

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Date: Sep 04, 2013 05:06 am Title: Just One Date

When and if MJ finds about Maurice I hope he doesn't turn into #PettyMJ again lmfao. But aww what nice birthday gifts :,)

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Date: Sep 04, 2013 04:55 am Title: Paris-Michael

Eh, tough question lol. REAL tough. My fave part of the story... I really don't know lol. I loved the arguing between MJ/Lisa/Michelle/Maurice when they had that awkward dinner lol. And I love all the sweet moments between MJ/Michelle. My least fave parts HAVE to be a) Bella's death (it was depressing af and I hate when babies die) and b) all the times where MJ truly acted like an asshole lmao. And ooooooh boy when MJ was all up in her face *collapses*. I never got the chance to meet him irl and even I can see he was pretty intimidating looool. Just by posters and short films!

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Date: Sep 04, 2013 04:38 am Title: A Rough Patch

I'm just the reader and even I'm mad at MJ looooool after reading this. He's acting beyond childish *sigh*. But what else is new? This isn't the first time he's acted that way in this story. I don't even really react anymore when I read him acting this way lol. I hope things will change soon.

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Date: Sep 04, 2013 04:23 am Title: Another One?

Even though her and MJ's relationship was crazy I appreciate how long they've stayed close to each other. Whether married, divorced, just friends, former friends, etc. they're always in each other's lives :) and oop looks like Debbie is pregnant again!

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Date: Sep 04, 2013 04:08 am Title: The Letter

All I could do was shake my head at this chapter lol. This dude stayed having a wife, girlfriend and a mistress lol. If he didn't wanna be like Joe in that aspect, he failed lmfao 

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Date: Sep 04, 2013 03:54 am Title: Prince Jackson

Oh lord she has feelings for him again lmao

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Date: Sep 04, 2013 03:45 am Title: "You're Having What?!"

I would've been a little hurt too tbh :-/

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Date: Sep 04, 2013 03:36 am Title: The Other Woman

Yeah she shouldn't have her kid calling MJ "daddy" because that's not her father :-/ and oh lord lmfao MJ playing the same old games again smh

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