Date: Nov 23, 2010 06:24 pm Title: Prince Jackson
This is great...keep up the good work. I would love to understand what's going on thru Michael's mind, who does he love? what does he want?
Author's Response:
Don't even try to understand lol
Date: Nov 19, 2010 08:33 am Title: Prince Jackson
I love it when MJ refers to Mel as his family..........will they ever get back together and have another baby?
BTW...what happened to Shena? And why did Grace seems to just barge in to their house the first time she arrived?
Date: Nov 18, 2010 10:15 pm Title: The Other Woman
i thought your chapter was fine. i like how it's really Michael-esque, lol if that makes sense.
Author's Response:
I really apperciate that. I want Michael to seem like a 'real characer' if that makes since. lol I want him to be portrayed as human, And all humans make mistakes and are not perfect.
Date: Nov 15, 2010 07:37 pm Title: Once In A Lifetime Opportunity
Holy crud what happened. Just this past weekend you had like a new section up and it disappeared. I was in the midsts of reading it and then when I came back on it was gone :(
Author's Response:
I have no clue. I contacted Admin, but no one has gotten back to me. I am angry about it, and I considering reposting everything but...i'm afarid it might get removed again (For what, I don't know!!!!)
so hopefully soon, i'll get a response back and get those chapters as well as my new ones up. :)
Date: Nov 02, 2010 08:40 pm Title: A New Invitation
MY FAVE STORY IN THE WHOLE WORLD IS YOURS!!!!! and yes I had to write that in caps LOL. Great updates.
Date: Nov 02, 2010 07:57 pm Title: A New Invitation
whew, drama drama drama ! lovessss it. thank you for the great updates :)
Date: Nov 02, 2010 05:24 pm Title: Once In A Lifetime Opportunity
Oh my god! I'm soo happy you continued to keep writing. This is my ultimate favorite story hands down :3
I knew that jerk-face Maurice was cheating on her > < and glad she divorced him. But it seems like Michael wants things to go back where they left off, wanting a relationship wiith her right away. He needs to understand that it doesn't work like that, she needs time to heal emotionally as well as physically. So he needs to buck up and be a man, put his child-likeness aside for a while if he intends on having a decent friendship. Especially for the little one :D
Date: Oct 27, 2010 11:17 am Title: Let The Drama Begin....
Cmon don't give up on this....I really love the story of Mel and MJ.........Actually, I believe they are gonna get back soon....coz its plain and clear that they are still in love with each other despite of being married to others....
Date: Oct 26, 2010 06:53 pm Title: Let The Drama Begin....
Please continue....your story is to good!!!! I love it.
Michelle and Michael need to stop playing and get back together.
Date: Oct 26, 2010 11:03 am Title: Once In A Lifetime Opportunity
Yes, please continue on w/the story...it's very interesting!
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2010 05:09 am Title: Let The Drama Begin....
I am a new reader and I loved it. Maurice is hilarious. I think he is jealous because he is no Michael. I just finished reading all the chapters and please continue its great.
Date: Oct 26, 2010 03:08 am Title: Once In A Lifetime Opportunity
You really, really gotta keeping going with this story! I'm completely sucked in!
I don't know if this was your intention, but I kinda sensed that Maurince and Lisa might be messing around. I mean come on, they both end up going to the bathroom and she was druink. Thats what I got.
Yes Michael hasn't always been there for her and broke things off over the most trival things it seems like but she has too. Its like deep down she still truly does love him and same goes for him.
Date: Oct 26, 2010 02:03 am Title: Let The Drama Begin....
heck yea you should continue, your story is too good to stop now :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2010 01:55 am Title: Let The Drama Begin....
yes!!!! plz continue
Date: Oct 22, 2010 12:20 am Title: Once In A Lifetime Opportunity
loveddd the updates!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you did. And thank you for your review. :)