[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2010 10:31 am Title: The Meeting
Big ups!
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2010 09:49 am Title: The Aftermath
Girl, why?!
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2010 09:38 am Title: Our Biggest Nightmare
Sad girl. Sad.
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2010 09:33 am Title: Gone
Aw girl. Why you make the baby die! Damn, girl. Not Bella! I'm hurt. Daggonit!
Date: Dec 02, 2010 02:24 am Title: Paris-Michael
YAY!!!!I'm loving this update. It has to be my favorite right now. The least when she was married to Maurice, big mistake.
I love Michelle and Michael together even if he sometimes has me shaking my head with disbelief.
Author's Response:
"I love Michelle and Michael together even if he sometimes has me shaking my head with disbelief."- Aren't they a trip? Lol. I'm glad you liked the update. :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2010 10:48 pm Title: The Pregnancy
Of course I want you to continue girl. Keep it coming. Great update.
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2010 09:36 pm Title: Paris-Michael
hmm, well i love the whole story so i don't really have a favorite, but that one part, i think last chapter, where michael was being kinda rude to michelle cracked me up for some reason lol.
least favorite, when Bella died, :(.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your input and taking the time to answer the question! :)
Bella's death, yeah it was pretty hard to write. I often wonder should I have kept her in the story...but right now i'm working on bringing another baby into the picture.
Date: Dec 01, 2010 03:57 am Title: Paris-Michael
QUESTION: So far what has been your favorite part of the story? What about the least?
My favorite would be during their earlier part of their relationship when they were just starting .......the tour and when they are truly in love and can't get enough of each other.....
The least would be of course....when MJ opted in having other relationship.....Shena, Tatiana, Liza and etc.......
They really belong together ....their love as MJ said beyond friendship....even more deeper........TRUE LOVE I guessed?
Author's Response:
Thank you for your input and answers my question. :)
And i've got to be honest, the first Part-Part One, when everything was just starting is actually my favorite part to go back and reread and i'm trying to really recapture that 'sweetness' of that time, when they are back together in the future. Hopefully i'll do it justice.
And yes it is true love, and no matter what happens or who else enters the picture-I.E. The other women- they will still love each other and always go back for more. :)
Date: Nov 29, 2010 05:12 am Title: Once In A Lifetime Opportunity
This is such a great story! I really love reading it. Please give them a chance to be together again... they really belong to each other! Keep going, you've got such a great style.
Author's Response:
I think they belong together too. It's just always something preventing it! Well good news is, they can't stay away from each other to long ;)
[Report This]Date: Nov 28, 2010 01:52 pm Title: Lisa Marie
Great chapter. I feel sorry for Lisa having to witness Michael all over Michelle because she is pregnant.
[Report This]Date: Nov 28, 2010 01:51 pm Title: Another One?
Great chapter. I have to wonder why Michael doesn't tell Michelle about Debbie having his second child when he considers her family. Why does he always keep secrets from her.
Author's Response:
Good Question- Maybe to protect her???
Date: Nov 27, 2010 02:11 pm Title: Another One?
OOOHHHH!!! Drama, drama, drama. Please update soon. Why does Michael keep hiding this from her?
Date: Nov 27, 2010 02:09 am Title: Once In A Lifetime Opportunity
I really lov ur fanfic. Always looking 4ward 2 ur updates. Hope u can update frequently. I think MJ truly loves Michelle but he gave up asking Michelle 2 start all over. I think he's scared that she'll turn him down again like the several times that he did. Like most girls beside Michelle they all take the initiative and Mj just accept them but with Michelle its different. He really wanted Michelle 2 make d first move if she likes them 2 get back 2gether. But somehow whenever Michelle thinks of starting over again wid mj, things just keep happenings that keeps stopping her. Michelle really doesnt want 2 make the same mistake again and doesnt want get hurt again thats why she's really taking her time to do the right thing at the right. Tho i really want mj and michelle coz its quite obvious that they belong 2 each other and truly love each other. Can u please give their love a chance and be a family again. Perhaps another child 4 them? Thanks!
Author's Response:
Your anaylsis is right on point! :) And don't worry, give me a few chapters and your wish will be granted.
Date: Nov 27, 2010 01:47 am Title: Another One?
This just keeps getting better :3
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it. And thanks for the continuous awesome reviews!
Date: Nov 27, 2010 12:49 am Title: The Letter
Awwww nuuu! Bad, bad, bad Lisa. Lies, lies, lies. Michelle is the one for him. She'd give him a million and a half babies if she could. He's too damn nieve. Can't he see that the women in front of him is the one for him? BAH I love this story more and more each time I read lol :D