Date: Jan 26, 2014 12:26 pm Title: My Stupid Plan
Lol psycho dad is back. I kind of feel like since it's Michelle's body, she should have a say and control but whatever lol. Michael was even driving ME crazy reading this lol
Date: Jan 26, 2014 10:58 am Title: The Shocking News
I knew it!!! From the moment nausea was mentioned in that one chapter, I knew she was pregnant lmfao. And yes, this news couldn't have come at a worse time for her :-/ her and MJ are fighting and now she has to tell him she's pregnant? I would be so agitated lol. But we'll just have to see how everything goes....
Date: Jan 26, 2014 10:49 am Title: The Plastic Surgery Issue
Omgggggggggggggggggg lmfao. I'm sorry but if that were me, I wouldn't be able to deal with MJ. He's just... Lord lmao. He's being unreasonable to say the least. How is he gonna be mad at her when Landi was the one who said those things? And he shouldn't have questioned her so much if THAT was gonna be his response. I mean dang, he proposes and promises stuff to her and them goes back to being spiteful Michael again. Nonetheless, I'm reminded of why I love this fic so much lol. It's good to be reading about spiteful Michael again. Even if I currently want Michelle to slap him lol
Date: Jan 26, 2014 10:19 am Title: The Pneumonia
Nice chapter! Man those September 11th attacks affected everyone. To this day America is still paranoid because of them. I remember being in school when I heard about it on the news. I was sent home early I think. But yeah there was mass hysteria everywhere. It was madness. I wonder what's gonna happen in the next few chapters? :O and why do I get the feeling that Michelle is pregnant? Lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2014 09:57 am Title: The Rehearsals
This was a good chapter :) I haven't read this in months but I still know what's going on. Yeah, I remember hearing about Aaliyah's death when I was little even though I didn't really know much about her. So very sad and unfortunate :(
[Report This]Date: Nov 24, 2013 12:21 am Title: The Songs
What a great chapter :D it was so cute, I kept going "awwwww" lmfao! They're adorable. And I adore Chris tucker. He's always been hilarious in my eyes. He's so goofy, it's funny <3
Date: Nov 24, 2013 12:12 am Title: Inducting The Hall Of Fame
They're not even married yet and they still have these arguments lmfao. Lord help them. Lord hell them both lol. And you didn't offend me :) I swear there are a lot of things Michelle says about MJ's life that I 100% agree on. Especially the part about him wasting money. He seemed to do that a LOT. You would think someone who's so humble would be careful with his money lmfao
Date: Nov 24, 2013 12:00 am Title: The Sleepovers
I agree with this entire thing
Date: Nov 23, 2013 11:58 pm Title: The Arvizo's
Ugh, the arvizos -___-........... Anywho, apart from them, this chapter was good :) it feels like a filler lol. And lol at MJ showing off his intellectual skills
Date: Nov 23, 2013 11:51 pm Title: A New Proposal
I swear I reviewed for this chapter... I must've forgotten lol. But anyway yaaaaas I'm happy she said yes :) I thought she wouldn't lol. We'll see if this can last though. This couple has been THROUGH it lmfao
Date: Oct 18, 2013 03:11 am Title: My Plan
Awwwww he really did miss her :,). Lol I'm sure she felt bad about going off on him. When she said that MJ wouldn't let his kids out of his sight, she was right lmfao. I knew he would never enroll them in that school lmfao. Lol and it always seems easier to get 2 mothers into a room, but not 2 fathers lmfao.
Date: Oct 18, 2013 02:27 am Title: Return of The Ex
There was so many points during this chapter where I was like "well, he does have a point/well she does have a point" lmfao. At least when they argue now, it's not as bad as their arguments during the 80s lol. So it's good to see that they're not handling arguments so recklessly and so immature as the other times.
Date: Oct 18, 2013 02:13 am Title: The School Issue
LMFAO!!!!!!!!! This chapter was hilarious! Lmfao omg as soon as MJ was like "well hey, maybe I should call up all my exes" looooool I knew that he was pressed. I love argument chapters for some reason looooool. This was great but watch them get back together eventually. They are so damn messy.
Date: Oct 18, 2013 01:58 am Title: The Birthdays
This was a nice chapter :) there wasn't any drama going on and everyone was happy. Just a nice, easy-going chapter. But I'm sure it will be drama soon enough lol
Date: Sep 17, 2013 11:11 pm Title: Michael: His Version
I'm BAAAAAAACCCCKKKK! I can't wait to see this from Michael's point of view!
Author's Response:
Glad to have you! Hope you have been enjoying it! Part Three coming in 1-2 weeks. I've been writing it and re-writing it like crazy! I'm like Michael "never totally satisified!" lol.