[Report This]Date: Dec 17, 2010 10:51 pm Title: A One Night Stand
Im so glad that I could find this forum. I love MJ'S fancfictions!!!! I really love your novel!!!! It's so good! You really write and describe every chapter so nice.
I love how Michael tried to let Michelle know how he feels. He tried to let her know inside her about her feeling for him. Sorry about my english. I really try my best jajajajaja
Date: Dec 16, 2010 05:35 pm Title: A One Night Stand
This was absolutely amazing!! I knew they both felt the same way about eachother because they once had a very fulfilling life and daughter. But once that ended they fell a part but it seems like major events tend to bring them closer no matter what. They are soulmates and always will be :3
Oh you could always read mine :3 Ones a horror and the romantic lol feel free to read
Date: Dec 16, 2010 02:23 pm Title: A One Night Stand
ahhh so glad u updated, I couldn't wait for the drama haha.
hmmm story suggestions.. One of my favorites on here is Keepin The Faith, u should check it out..I also like the fanfics on dangerouspyt.com & cobracrackcentral.com
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2010 01:27 pm Title: A One Night Stand
omg I want to know how Michael feels about her he's always beating around the bush lol update soon plz, no pressure but omg lol!!!
Date: Dec 10, 2010 12:59 am Title: "I'm Still In love"
Oh no! All his dreams and hopes of them getting married is now desheveled ;-;
Author's Response:
Not so soon....
Date: Dec 10, 2010 12:17 am Title: Just One Date
Awww! Michael spoils her like crazy, but I hope he's not doing that all in hopes that she'll stay and have a relationship with him....since she's with Martino
Author's Response:
Yeah she's with Martino...but he loves her so he can't help it. :)
Date: Dec 09, 2010 10:32 pm Title: "I'm Still In love"
*GASP VERY LOUDLY* I was hoping they were going to get back together...Michael is going to be very upset and devastated but at the same time maybe now he knows how Michelle felt all the times he shut her out. Can't wait to read the next chapter....
Author's Response:
*GASP VERY LOUDLY*----Haha, I loved that. :)
Date: Dec 08, 2010 09:44 pm Title: Paris-Michael
My favorite parts are always when Michelle and Michael are getting along and flirting and my least favorite is when they're fighting and people keep getting in their way
Author's Response:
Thank you for your input. :) And yes, I love writing those scenes when they're flirting. It's always some of my favorite scenes to write. lol
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2010 07:04 pm Title: Paris-Michael
Hey Gigi girl. I don't know where you are; and I hope all is well with you. Please finish this story, when you get a chance. Cuz this joint is the bomb.
I like how you made the story sexy without making the sex scenes explicit (tho I like explicit. lol). This shows that you can make a story hot without being downright nasty (tho I like it nasty! lol).
I found myself rolling on this story girl. I mean, this joint had me rolling. There was so much drama and romantic tension. I loved it!
You also weaved the real Michael Jackson's history and personality into this piece very well.
Michael is so slick right now. Working his spell like a charm. That's right baby! Claim what's yours. And live happily ever after...Isn't that the dream?
I have so many good things to say about this story. But I gotta move on girl. You really need to finish it. For Michael. And for MJfanficters everywhere.
TWO BIG THUMBS UP!!!
Author's Response:
Motownmjdevotee- I have been meaning to respond to you for a while, I just haven't had the time. I THANK YOU for this positive and wonderful review! I'm so happy that you like the story, I put a lot of time and effort into making it as entertaining and realistic as it can get.
One thing that i'm glad you picked up on is the romantic tension that is always between Michael and Michelle, I don't clearly state it but I wanted that to show through and you picked up on it, so that let's me know i'm doing an okay job. lol
I'm also glad that I was able to make you laugh, i found myself shaking my head sometimes too as the words came to me and i'm the writer! lol. And this line, "I have so many good things to say about this story. But I gotta move on girl. You really need to finish it. For Michael. And for MJfanficters everywhere. TWO BIG THUMBS UP!!!"----Makes me keeping writing. That was one of the best reviews I've ever gotten so thank you, thank you, thank you!
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2010 06:42 pm Title: A Rough Patch
INTENSE!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2010 05:13 pm Title: Prince Jackson
big ups
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2010 05:01 pm Title: "You're Having What?!"
you shouldve gave into him girl. your bad. lol
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2010 04:07 pm Title: PART THREE
girl you show love killin off people in this story. Lol. RIP Maurice. lol.
Author's Response:
He had to go. He had no significance in the story lol...And Bella had to happen so that they would break up :) Maurice I didn't mind writing, he was a jerk. But Bella was hard to write- She never really leaves though, I mention her a lot in the story.
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2010 03:16 pm Title: Laya Johnson
big ups.
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2010 12:19 pm Title: Let The Drama Begin....
Girl this chapter was da bomb. Drama drama drama. I loved it. I'm predicting that the babby is MJs not Maurices.