[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2010 09:44 pm Title: The Initiation
Argh! Daggone cliffhanger. Lovin this story gigi. update soon please.
[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2010 06:18 pm Title: The Initiation
I hope everything works out for Michelle and her plan to tell Michael about her feelings for him dont backfire on her.Great chapter
Date: Dec 28, 2010 06:02 pm Title: The Initiation
nooo!!!! this was getting good..I was at the edge of my seat. I will patiently wait for the update...*sighs*
Date: Dec 27, 2010 09:47 pm Title: Katherine's Phone Call
Ohhhh I really like this chapter!!!!! Because she realized that MJ is the ONLY ONE!!! Just 2 more chapters??? pleaseeeeee keep them together!!! She can't marry Martino...nooooooooo
jajajajaja
I'm really in love with this couple.
keep writing pleaseeeeee
Date: Dec 27, 2010 04:20 pm Title: Katherine's Phone Call
Love the chapter. Its obvious that Michael and Michelle care for each other but maybe they are better off being friends.
Date: Dec 27, 2010 04:12 pm Title: Katherine's Phone Call
Oh God, those two are meant to be together....yes Martino will be hurt, but I want Michael to be happy
Please update soon
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!! :)
Date: Dec 24, 2010 12:19 pm Title: Paris Jackson's Birthday
HI! I really love this story. why they cant be together... theres too much confusion over them..I hope they can finally find their way...keep writing
Date: Dec 24, 2010 11:04 am Title: Once In A Lifetime Opportunity
MJ and Chelle...still do love each other....why can't they have a moment to really talk....I'm sure they'll admit it that they still love each other.....Martino and Liza are just sidelines that makes their time worthwhile .......while they are waiting for the other to make the first move....If only MJ will make the first move....I'm sure Chelle will accept him back and agree that she still loves him....C'mon everybody can tell that they love each other ....even her parents do......
Date: Dec 24, 2010 04:14 am Title: Paris Jackson's Birthday
Even though they didn't have Layla together, she'll always be the glue that holds them together no matter what. I just hope things do work out, but it just seems like one big game of cat and mouse lol
Author's Response:
It really is one big game lol And you're right about Laya- they will always come together because of her. :)
Date: Dec 24, 2010 03:34 am Title: Time To Move On
Awww I knew that was going to happen. I still don't understand how they could have any sexual relations if they're so distant and have other people in their lives.
I still really enjoy reading :3
[Report This]Date: Dec 23, 2010 04:01 pm Title: Paris Jackson's Birthday
Uh! now its getting frustrating..they should so get back together!
Very good story though..one of the better ones!..very realistic in the way you portray the characters..Michael and Chelle really need to get it on again!! soon!!..
Love the story
cant wait till next chapter!
Author's Response:
Realistic---That is what i'm always striving for. I want the story to be believable and I want people to feel at times that it could have happened; so thank you for that awesome compliment! Let's me know i'm doing okay lol
[Report This]Date: Dec 23, 2010 03:29 pm Title: Paris Jackson's Birthday
great updates as always :)
Date: Dec 23, 2010 02:02 pm Title: Paris Jackson's Birthday
I just registered last week, but have been reading it. Can I tell you I LOVE THIS STORY.
What a fabulous writer you are!!!
My heart breaks they aren't together, but WOW you can feel the chemistry between them. I think Layla is going to bring them back together somehow....
As always I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Thank You So Much! I'm glad that you like it, I really put my heart and soul into it. :)
Date: Dec 19, 2010 08:56 pm Title: A One Night Stand
This was great..I think for once in their entire relationship..they need to sit down and talk to each other..they never really did that. I think Michelle tried but Michael blocked it out. I'm dying to know what he tells Michelle. Why be with other people when they clearly still love eachother? I love how you write, you bring me in this world of your story and your so good with your details and I get emotional when I read the story because I find myself putting myself in Michelle's shoes...Anyway, Great update, great story, great job.
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2010 02:17 am Title: A One Night Stand
Great update girl. Keep it coming.