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Reviewer: claudiux9 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2011 10:49 pm Title: The School Issue

Why are they so Stubborns???? He can't fly to home. She can't fly over MJ.... ahhhh I want to shout them!!! sorry about my english...I try to express the best I can.

It feels like Michelle needs him a lot....but she doesnt want to admit it....she doesn't want to presure MJ....

I hope they could talk each other and come back soon

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2011 08:19 pm Title: The School Issue

Nooo!!!!! Michelle? Michael? What are you doing??????

Reviewer: motownmjdevotee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2011 08:05 pm Title: Once In A Lifetime Opportunity

Why is Michelle clowning?  I mean, she goes and visits an ex on an out of town trip.  Then has the nerve to trip out on Michael asking her about it.  This girl gets on my nerves.  Poor Laya.  Michael deserves better.  What'd she wanna see Ralph for any how.  What a dumb a$$.



Author's Response:

HAHA! Yeah Michelle, definitely has her moments. :)

Reviewer: mjslovelyone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2011 03:23 am Title: The School Issue

WOW

That was sooooo good.

I love Michelle's come back "I want Michael's Dick". You go girl!!!

Now they've broken up AGAIN, poor Laya

Update soon Please!!  I love this story!!

Thanks

 



Author's Response:

Yeah I debatedback and forth wheter to keep that line or take it out.lol. 

And I'm glad that you enjoyed it. MAKES ME SOOOO HAPPY!

Reviewer: sannah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2011 02:08 am Title: The School Issue

Oh no......wht did they end up in that situation again...it's like back to zero again? Duh!

Author's Response:

Yeah, they justcan't get it right! lol

Reviewer: Call_it_bliss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2011 01:44 am Title: The School Issue

OMG!!!!!!!! that was intense!!!!!! I hope they work it out! I love them together!!!!! don't leave us hanging for an update to long lol.....



Author's Response:

I Won't! And haven't you figured out by now, that sooner or later-they always work it out. lol :)

Reviewer: claudiux9 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2011 10:00 pm Title: Return of The Ex

Hey Girl!

Thanks for updating! I like how they manage their issues.....It's like things are different now....It's like they are older, more matured....they try hard to be the best one for each other....

I love this story.

Please keep writing asap

LOL

 

Reviewer: motownmjdevotee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2011 04:32 pm Title: Return of The Ex

Glad to see Michael and Michelle working it out.  Nice update.  Keep em coming girl.

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Date: Jan 25, 2011 04:10 pm Title: Lose Some, You Win Some

Loved this update girl.  Did Michelle have an abortion or not?  That's the question.  I'm tending to believe she did based on her reaction to findout out about her pregnancy. 

She's a bitch for wanting to decieve Michael about the pregnancy/abortion in the first place.  That decision was real selfish of her. 

No wonder Michael didn't believe she miscarried--Michelle's an untrustworthy liar. 

And poor Grandma. 

 



Author's Response:

No she did. She was considering abortion and was still considering it when she miscarried from stress. She didn't lie. :)

Reviewer: BreakOfDawn Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2011 10:34 am Title: The Birthdays

Love that update, girl! :-) they are very sweet together... hope they'll start planning baby blanket soon... XD! Keep going!

Reviewer: MJ25 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2011 11:40 pm Title: The Birthdays

i like this update 

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2011 03:22 pm Title: The Birthdays

I'm so happy that Michelle and Michael are back together. Will they have their own child??

Reviewer: claudiux9 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2011 11:06 pm Title: Making A Holiday Tradition

Ohhh that so sweet! I was checking every day for updates! 2 chapters! thanks a lot!

I really hope they can make it. They try to hard to understand and respect each other point of view.
I like the way you write. It's really nice.

Keep wrinting!

Reviewer: belovd2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2011 09:21 pm Title: Making A Holiday Tradition

Good story - can't wait for the rest of it.  LOL!

Reviewer: motownmjdevotee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2011 04:10 am Title: Making A Holiday Tradition

Hey gigi.  Loved the update, as usual.  How can I not love the Michelle and Michael story?  I'm glad they both realize they don't need to rush their relationship; just take it slow and easy.  I enjoyed the family atmosphere with the celebration of Christmas.  Got quite a few laughs in this one.  It's a wonderful fantasy.  Keep it coming girl.

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