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Reviewer: claudiux9 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2011 04:26 pm Title: The Shocking News

ohhhhhh they will have a baby!!!! this is so unreal! the whole situation I mean....they are both aparted....and then the baby.....I hope Michael will be more matured to fix his relationship with michelle

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Date: Mar 01, 2011 12:22 am Title: The Shocking News

awwww Blanket's coming !

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Date: Feb 28, 2011 11:56 pm Title: The Shocking News

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon!!!!!! I can't wait to read his reaction omfg so looking forward to an update! loved it!!!!

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2011 11:15 pm Title: The Shocking News

*screams* "A BABY!!!!!!!!!!!" I know they are not in the right terms but the idea of a baby makes me happy.

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Date: Feb 25, 2011 12:19 pm Title: The Plastic Surgery Issue

very interesting.



Author's Response: How?

Reviewer: motownmjdevotee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2011 11:12 pm Title: The Plastic Surgery Issue

So  what is Michael mad about?  And why is Michelle questioning him about plastic surgery?  Oh, I guess that's why Michael's mad.  LOL.  I'm kinda slow.  Great update. 

Reviewer: claudiux9 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2011 11:33 am Title: The Pneumonia

thanks for the chapters!!! i like the way you write.

Keep writing!

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!! I try to be a good storytelling! lol

Reviewer: sannah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2011 11:26 pm Title: The Pneumonia

OMG! What did Michelle and her sister argued about........which sister is it? Landi? She and MJ and a thing before Michelle right? Please do tell us what happen ....you're killing me with a cliffhanger such as ". It even changed me and Michael’s relationship and not for the better; for the worst"

Author's Response:

And yes Landi was the sister with the mini 'thing' with Michael. Brooke is the other sister who Michael is closest too and whom Michael is closest too! :)

Reviewer: motownmjdevotee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2011 10:23 am Title: The Pneumonia

This was a wonderful tribute to the victims of 9/11.  Sorry about ya girl Monica sis.  And to all those lost and who suffered a loss on 911, you're in my heart.  Much love to you all.   

Loving this story.  Still.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I actually battled with was how I was going to tie it in; but i had to because Michael was really in New York during that time. Glad you're still enjoying it! :)

Reviewer: motownmjdevotee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2011 10:18 am Title: The Rehearsals

Loved it girl; esp. the cameo by Chris Tucker.  That's my boy.  The whole update was on point gigi.



Author's Response:

I LOVE Chris tucker and I loved writing him in!

Reviewer: motownmjdevotee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2011 10:10 am Title: The Songs

Girl, Don't Walk Away is my song.  I'm bout to play it now, while I read this.  I hope Michelle aint tryna break up with my baby again.  We'll see...Lemme loop the song real quick.

Loved the update gigi.  I'm in love with Invincible Michael so I'm feeling ya here sis.  Michelle better not had came with no old okey dokey on my boo.  So all is well.  *smiles*



Author's Response:

Yes, I actually heard the song seconds before I wrote the chapter and it was like 'ding!' Idea.  Glad once again you liked the cahpter. Thanks for taking the time to respond every time, continously!

Reviewer: motownmjdevotee Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2011 09:49 am Title: Inducting The Hall Of Fame

I can't stand Shmuley's b!tch a$$ either.  Old hating a$$, lying devil. 

But gigi, I'm glad you brought Michael's real enemies into this piece.  Yes, I hate them.  But Michael is truly helping me to not hate them as vehemently as I once did. 

How anyone could take offense at your adding realism to your MJtale is beyond me.  You're doing a good job with this story.  And I love it.



Author's Response:

Yeah I'm bringing everybody. If they've ever been associated with Michael or 'rumored' association then I mention them. Or at least I ttry too. lol

I really wanted a realistic story to be wrote about Michael where real life events happened and where it could almost feel like 'oh that could have really happened!'

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Date: Feb 18, 2011 09:33 am Title: The Sleepovers

Girl, I think most of us here know Michael is innocent.  We know he wasn't a perve.  I couldn't read none of this update though cuz I don't want my hatred and stuff for Michael's enemies to grow.  But I know what you had to say was on point, just like this story.  So keep it coming girl. 



Author's Response:

That's okay, I understand.  :)

Reviewer: motownmjdevotee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2011 09:30 am Title: The Arvizo's

Death and destruction to the Arviso and Chandler parents.  Death to them greedy a$$, blood on their hand b!tches.

Loved the update gigi.  Sorry I had to go there girl.  I can't stand them b!tches.  But I love this story.  And Michael, I love you more.  Keep it coming sis. 



Author's Response:

No I completely understand. They caused Michael so much pain, it's indescriable, so I completely back you up!

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Date: Feb 18, 2011 02:37 am Title: The Songs

Ahh I forgot to leave a review for the songs chapter so cute!!!!! I love that he wrote so many for her lol So sweet lol!!!!! Love you writing & story telling keep it up :)



Author's Response:

Haha. Yeah I was reaching a lot. Glad you thought it was sweet! :)

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