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Reviewer: SequinGloveLove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2011 10:56 pm Title: Drifting

I REALLY don't like Michael here....

Author's Response:

I have a feeling that you're not going to like him in the next few chapters either....haha.

Reviewer: mjj4everinourhearts Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2011 04:29 am Title: Drifting

I stayed up until 4:30am to finish reading your story it is great!  I love the tension between Michael and Michelle!  I really can't believe Michael's behavior! He love Laya and Michelle but then doesn't include them in his will!! Someting sounds very fishy!! Calling Lisa!! Great work Anxiously awaiting the next update



Author's Response:

4:30?? THANKS! I'm glad you like it!!! i'm glad I was able to keep your interest.   :) Thanks for taking the time to read it.

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2011 01:24 am Title: Drifting

OMG OMG OMG i was me walking around in circles not being able to read when he was talking to Lisa i literally stop reading and had to walk to get some air grr i just could bring myself o read that part lol

BTW Michael it really annoying i hate how he just treats he like crap at time like she has no feeling he is sooooo self centered.. Did he flip when she went to see her ex bf ohh but talking to Lisa is nothing bad..I understand why he denies her to the public but SHIT man that hurt but he doesnt seem to see it..Yet he is always the victim and the one who no one understand, the one who always gets mad and Chelle is the one who has go come around..Ohh wow he did a painting BIG deal that doesnt matter..He is always the one making trips and this and that..I think she should take a trip alone and do something and teach Michael a lil lesson so he feel what is like to be treated the way he treats her at time..Deny him in front of everyone and when he ask..WTF chelle, she could be like well i didnt want for people to know about us since it ruin your rep or image..

Ughh idk i just vented on here LMAO

Author's Response:

HAHA.  and this: "I think she should take a trip alone and do something and teach Michael a lil lesson so he feel what is like to be treated the way he treats her at time..Deny him in front of everyone and when he ask.."

You gave me an idea... Hmmm....  but i'm glad you vented and are wrapped up in the story. this two will do it to you! Even though,i'm the writer, I often find myself wrapped in the story as well. lol

Reviewer: mjj4everinourhearts Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2011 12:34 am Title: Making A Holiday Tradition

I haven't been on for awhile, I began reading your story a few months ago and loved it!  I came back today and can't stop reading it!  It is great!  I love how Michelle and Michale complement each other!  I

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2011 11:19 pm Title: Drifting

What is Michael's problem? and what Michelle is planning to do might not be a good idea. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response:

Yeah, Michelle does do some dumb things doesn't she?! And Michael, who knows? he definitely flip/flops haha.

Reviewer: motownmjdevotee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2011 07:17 am Title: Diana Ross

Aww.  What a great update girl.  Loved the portrait with Bella.  And all the jealousy Michelle has for Diana.  Good stuff gigi.



Author's Response:

thanks so much. Thanks for always responding!!! :) You're one of my favorite reviewers/readers!

Reviewer: SequinGloveLove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2011 11:47 pm Title: Diana Ross

Damn. I don't trust Michael anymore. He's up to something REAL shady, I can FEEL IT. And I think he's using that painting as a diversion....EXCELLENT UPDATE!

GIMME MOAR! lol.

Author's Response:

Haha! Thanks.And I don't know. Michael is acting very weird isn't he?

New chapters are up!!!

Reviewer: baby-be-mine Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2011 07:58 pm Title: Diana Ross

Is she just going to drop the whole "will" issue? Cause I know, I sure would'nt of had!
The picture was a lovely gift, but I'm sad that these two can't stay happy for long.



Author's Response:

Yeah but it seems to be all apart of their cycle. They love, they hate. It can only go on for so long. :)

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2011 05:56 pm Title: Katherine's Suggestion

It's obvious that Michael and Michelle really love eachother and I applaude her for speaking up. This chapter also showed how mature they have become. Great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you.i'm trying to show the changes in their relationship. I'm trying to show how they evolved from the beginning. :)

Reviewer: SequinGloveLove Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2011 12:18 am Title: Katherine's Suggestion

TURBULENT. That's it. THAT'S the perfect word to describe this tale!

Author's Response:

Uh oh, i don't think i like that word. lol

Reviewer: claudiux9 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2011 11:40 pm Title: Katherine's Suggestion

I'm so sorry they didn't get married. But I think it was ok Michelle's point of view.... I'm so glad they grow up because they come back together after the little fight they had... I really hope they can get married ASAP.

lol

 

keep writing girl!

thanks for your time



Author's Response:

Yeah they're getting there. They want to make it work because they really do love each other.

Reviewer: baby-be-mine Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2011 06:12 pm Title: Katherine's Suggestion

wow that was intense! i'm shocked that michael wanted a pre-nup, and i dont blame her one bit for being angry with him. the ending was so sweet though. can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the ending. I really wanted to showcase that they are trying to do better and make it work since they really do love each other.

Reviewer: belovd2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2011 06:16 pm Title: Once In A Lifetime Opportunity

Good story...it doesn't appear you have lost anyone, esp. me...so please continue.

Reviewer: motownmjdevotee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2011 12:31 pm Title: Preparing For Baby

Loved the update gigi.  I love me some Michael and Michelle.  This is a very nice, family oriented tale girl.  And sis pleeease don't make this baby die.  I don't think I could take that again.  Bella was enough.  Please.  I'm loving this story though so keep it coming.



Author's Response:

Thanks. The baby can't die, it's Blanket! Lol

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2011 03:02 am Title: Our Baby Blanket

NOOOOOOOOOOO Dont stop!!

But i do suggest, some more thrills exciting moment, adventures, craziness but all mixed with happiness..no more break ups..Now they are happy..Jealousy is fine but i hope that now they are enjoying life and are happy and STRONG!



Author's Response:

I won't. i'm committed now. :)

And yes, there are definitely some more thrills and craziness and excitement coming...breakups...well they're inevidable, but they'll always come back together...some way or another :)

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