[Report This]Date: Aug 06, 2011 10:43 pm Title: Laya's Letter
Awww thank you for making me cry!! Lmao but great chapter wow very lovely touch with the letter, the words that Michael said to Laya wow very deep!!
Author's Response:
I'm sorry. No joke, I actually got a little teery when I was writing it. I could picture him writing to her.
Date: Aug 06, 2011 05:15 pm Title: PART SIX
Girl you are one of the most amazing writers and trust me i've read a lot of fanfic.This story is just seamless. you've pieced together everything so perfectly.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! You don't know how much I apperciate that! I put a lot of time into it. :)
Date: Aug 06, 2011 01:39 pm Title: Laya's Letter
Now thats the daddy Michael I love. I can't wait till hhe actually sees Laya and Michelle again.
Author's Response:
He will officially return Thursday! :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 06, 2011 01:19 pm Title: Laya's Letter
For some reason, my eyes got watery when I was reading the letter. This made me appreciate Michael a bit more. Even though, there is no excuse on how he had treated Michelle. I hope these two find their peace.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
And one day they will. The distance is good for them.
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2011 08:34 pm Title: PART SIX
Laya is so cute. <3333
I'm so glad Jermaine called and took the first step. I'm glad the family realized they were wrong about her. I just hope Michael is as smart. :D
I'm always looking forward for more. You rock, girl xoxo
Author's Response:
I love writing Laya. She's one of my favorite characters to write and I can always envision her expressions and prersonality so well. :)
Thanks for continously reading! You're one of my favorites!
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2011 06:30 pm Title: PART SIX
Geez I really Love Mitchelle, she finally stood her ground and wanted NADA to do with Michael!! Woot woot
I thought that call was Mike OMG!! Lol
AHHHH Let's see what happens now.. I really hope Michelle tells Mike off!! And I'm glad that she told Jerm on how Mike pushed Laya off and kept her from Blanket!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad someone likes Michelle, lol. And yeah, Michael has a few chapters before he makes his physically reapperance. But when he comes back, he'll be Badder than ever!(In a good way).
Date: Aug 05, 2011 04:29 pm Title: PART SIX
OMG Gigi girl. You're tryna kill off Michael right before his birthday too?! Why is everybody tryna kill him off at the same time. Dayum. I'm not gonna be able to read much then. Why ya doing this to me gigi girl? I thought we were cool. And then you about to kill off my baby and Michelle gets to live. Oh no girl. I don't think I can handle that. Make her ass die, not Michael. But you already letting me know he's about to die like soon. Like this month. That ain't right girl. So I guess I'm gonna have to wait till after his birthday to come back around to this story. I need me some laughs. Some Mike Jr. And some drama. I can't deal with him dying again right now. Dayum. I just knew I was gone have me a story to read today. But the title just effed with my mind girl: PART SIX: THE FINAL YEARS (2006-2009). Dayum. I'm such a sensitive wretch. I need some laughs...Daggoneit gigi!
Author's Response:
Lol. No dear, I haven't decided what i'm going to do just yet. I have wrote that chapter (where he passes) but I don't know if i'm going to post it. I don't want the story to end on such a sad note, but then again, so far everything i've included in the story-pertaining to Michael's life- has been true and I can't ignore that happened.
Still, it is hard for me as it is with everyone on here who reads these stories. So, I haven't decided yet. I may not kill him off, I may make a twist and Michelle may die, or no one may. I'm not sure.
But believe me, I truly do understand where you are coming from. And trust me, more laughs and more love is coming!
Date: Aug 05, 2011 02:54 pm Title: PART SIX
Finally..he reached out. I was about to get mad at Michael's stubborn ass myself. I can't believe Jergreasy(I think his hair is so greasy haha) reached out first. One thing I always wondered though was how Janet was feeling about Michelle around trial time.
I do understand Michelle not wanting to see Michael. The cutoff he did from Laya was very selfish and immature on his part. When Maurice died even with Michelle protests Michael insisted that he was Laya's father. Its about time he start acting like one again.
Author's Response:
Jergreasy! Haha. Isn't it? I want to know so badly what he uses in his hair. Yeah about Janet, I don't know i didn't really focus on her. I could I should have included how she felt, but hell, none of them would talk to her, so it wouldn't have mattered either way. lol
And yeah about the Laya thing you're so right.
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2011 01:32 pm Title: PART SIX
i REALLY hope they make up!!! they seem to fight all the time and always over react to each other. i want them to be happy so so much :)
Author's Response:
They will.One day, they're going to get to that point that everyone wants them to get too and they're going to be happier than ever.
Date: Aug 05, 2011 12:57 pm Title: Once In A Lifetime Opportunity
Oh my God! I love this story so flippin' much! I am going to cry when it ends, I know I will. Loved the update:)
LOVEEE
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoy it. I love writing it! :)
Date: Aug 04, 2011 08:25 pm Title: Coming To His Defense
I think she helped. She did good. Sneddon was trying extra hard to get her though. Michelle wasn't having it. girl has always been a fighter. Gigi I love how you wrote this. I cried with Michelle when the verdict was being read. It felt like 05 again me and my mom waiting on the verdict. It was a good day. Thankyou.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. I battled with if I wanted to write the chapter or not lol. Glad it turned out okay. :)
Date: Aug 04, 2011 03:16 pm Title: The Approach
Oh Michelle of course they call you. after your little lil tv show ups. She gets on my nerves. looking forward to see what's up her sleeve though.
ah the porn collections..my poor Michael he must of been so embarrassed. I loved him more though.
Author's Response:
Lol and yeah the porn collections, I wondered what Michael thought when they were discovered....
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2011 01:48 pm Title: Coming To His Defense
You know I ran to the computer when I got the email that you updated haha and not only one update but two LOl I love ya girl *hugs computer screen*
I'm so glad Michelle stood up for Michael. That day was such a scary day for me. I could imagine what Michael was actually feeling.
Author's Response:
*Virtual Hug back* :)
Yeah I remember that day well too. I was on vacation with my family and we were driving, and they were announcing everything over the radio. We were all so happy! But yeah the days leading up, I oculdn't even begin to imagine for Michael and that's why certain things in the story I don't touch. I didn't want Michelle around him because I didn't want to have to write how he would feel, because I oculdn't even begin too.
Date: Aug 03, 2011 11:03 pm Title: The Cutoff
I agree that what Michelle said was totally uncalled for , but at the same time he should not have said that thing about him trusting kids more than he trusts her. My whole face changed when he said that lol O_O I was like wtf? I would have ended that conversation right there before I went off on his ass! But Like Michelle said the kids are the ones who keep accusing him of this bull. I had to start laughing too because it reminded me of when I was watching a youtube video where steve harvey was talking about MJ and how he loved kids. You should watch it!
Author's Response:
Exactly. Michael was out of line too and I think a lot of people overlook that. They just think about Michelle's comment because it was so messed up, especially coming from her.
And yes! I know exactly what you are talking about. Steve Harvey had me cracking up! :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2011 10:26 pm Title: The Cutoff
Am I the only one who doesn't hate Michelle? Now everyone on gonna hate ME for not hating Michelle lmao but anyways, I know that what Michelle said & keeps saying is wrong but I understand why she is being that way and why she said what she said, was it right? No, but I see her point.. And Mike keeps being an ass too!! Just saying..
Author's Response:
Haha. No they won't. And oh, I don't hate Michelle. lol
It's great that you can understand why and the deeper meanings with everything. You really get my story which makes me say YES! lol :)