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Reviewer: Marialovesmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2011 03:16 am Title: Once In A Lifetime Opportunity

I've been looking for this update all day. But when I finally seen it I was soooo happy. Like i literally scream XD

Reviewer: joy2thaworld Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2011 02:57 am Title: Baby Steps

* frowns at u * lol I was checking here all day yesterday for an update..imma read when im not half asleep haha.

Reviewer: claudiux9 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2011 01:07 am Title: Baby Steps

i was dying for this update girl!

lol

i was checking anytime for this update

thanks a lot!!!!

 

Reviewer: joy2thaworld Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2011 11:28 am Title: The Tennis Bracelet

*melts* 

reallly, thats all I got. to beautiful for words. Can't wait till that kiss happens though. and for Blanket to actually smile and talk to his mother.

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2011 07:24 pm Title: The Tennis Bracelet

Amazing chapter, so adorable it had me All mushy and geez my heart beatting a million mph to see what would happen and their reactions..

Damn Michael sounded real cocky when he said his girl/womans fans (us) only wanted his sex and his Annaconda aka Mike JR, Well no mister not all of them are like that. Like Michelle said some really do love YOU.. Others are just a case itself lol xD

Reviewer: claudiux9 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2011 03:10 pm Title: The Tennis Bracelet

I really loved this update!

You know....I though they were going to kiss..... but nooooo the song ended...damm song! lol

I love how Michael wants Michelle to be a part in Blanket's life....how he pushed her to fight for Blanket´s love.....

How can Michelle be ok just being friends with Michael? noooooo

She has to be his girl again!!!

lol

I can´t wait for next update!

thanks for your time!

pd.-sorry about my english! I do my best

:D

Reviewer: joy2thaworld Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2011 02:13 am Title: Progression

I don't know why but i'm melting....this is sooo cute. I love how Michael brings the fun and warmth out of Michelle without her even realizing it. she's a prude sometimes I still like her though. and Michael so planned that trip to LA. I love the catching up and yeah whats the deal with Grace. like girl please step to the left my gawd..M&M are too cute. and I love shy lil Blankito he just cautious.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.

'I love how Michael brings the fun and warmth out of Michelle without her even realizing it.'----he totally does. She's probably thee happiest when he's with her.

'and Michael so planned that trip to LA.'----I love how you can read my hints! :)

 

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2011 10:59 pm Title: Progression

I'm glad they are talking. I wished they would had kissed though in front of the elevator lol...is that asking for too much? haha



Author's Response:

No, lol.  It is not.  :)

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2011 02:15 pm Title: Progression

LMFAO While I was reading this chapter Fall again started to play!! Perfect moment huh?

OMG perfect chapter!! Like really, everything about it was amazing and just made me melt hehe Having him remember that date was Best thing, soo cute!! Yea right, she still has feeling for him don't lie!! Lol

Author's Response:

That is 'thee' perfect song for their relationship. In fact, I listened to that a lot when I was writing these chapters.

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I really enjoyed writing it.  :)

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2011 02:38 pm Title: Reacquaint

WHOO HOOO!!!! They are talking again!!! I hope it's for the better....impatiently waiting for the update. you rock, girl!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: mjfan0094 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2011 04:59 pm Title: Reacquaint

OMG!!!! my Mikey is makeing the first move?!?!!! I'm so Happy:) I hope Michelle dosent try to play hard to get lol:)!!!



Author's Response:

You already know she is, she has to be difficult. lol  :)

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2011 07:14 pm Title: Reacquaint

Mike making the moves for the first time woot woot!! Niiice to see that.. I did not imagine him inviting her for dinner that was very cute! And I'm soo happy she didn't go all flashy to the dinner that she just went casual. Kinda gives it the sence that she wasn't desperate for him or his attention.. An MJ come back OMG!!! Excited!!!!!

Author's Response:

'Mike making the moves for the first time woot woot!! Niiice to see that.. '-----Yeah, it's going to be a different Michael shown in the coming chapters.  :)

 

Reviewer: Cwooten Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2011 02:28 pm Title: Reacquaint

I've loved this story from the beginning!! I'm so glad Michelle and Michael are starting to get along :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking with it. I apperciate it a lot!  :)

Reviewer: joy2thaworld Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2011 12:00 pm Title: Reacquaint

*dances*...thats my Michael...he's about to shock the socks off Michelle...

I'm spoiled. I want the next uupdate. ugh how come the weekend is here. do you even update on weekends?

it's funny. Laya hasn't spent that much time with Michael but she sure is a daddy's girl. I don't blame her.



Author's Response:

lol  :)   I would be a complete daddy's girl too.

Reviewer: joy2thaworld Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2011 12:49 pm Title: Return

Omg...I want it to be friday so bad I need more. This is perfect. They were pleasant to each other thats a good sign. I love how I can still feel the awkwardness though. Michael looked good that day too I think I seen pictures (I used to stalk Michael on the internets don't judge lol) but he had on all blue and his hair was nice, those shades was nice. I can't believe she didn't say how good he looked.

I love Laya I think I'm more happy ffor her than Michelle. She didn't deserve the shut out. None of that matters now though. She's back with her daddy again. Poor Michelle..to have your own child not know you must be tough. Heres to more talking with Michael and Michelle and then down the line...maybe....yeah some lovin. ;)



Author's Response:

Yes! I was watching footage of that day as I was writing, I had to get myself in the character lol. He did look yummy yummy! And no, Michelle wouldn't comment on it because she's too stubborn and still 'mad' lol.

'...maybe....yeah some lovin.'---*wink, wink*

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