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Date: Apr 25, 2012 12:22 pm Title: For All Time...Pt. 2

aww I just knew that she wasn't going to marry Martino. That was a good scam that he pulled on her. Great story! I just loved it!

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Date: Apr 25, 2012 12:14 pm Title: Author's Note

As you mentioned at the beginning, I also remember what I was doing when I found out the news of Michael's passing away. But I'm really happy that you too out the time to write this story to give everyone a fictional yet a somewhat biographical insight on the real Michael Jackson. :-) 

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Date: Apr 24, 2012 10:21 pm Title: Torn

Oh goodness Michelle! You can't be lying like that! You're married girl! I feel like Martino is trying to win her back over. I mean he has to know that Michelle & Mike are inspearable. Anyway, great chapter :-)

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Date: Apr 24, 2012 05:02 pm Title: Beginning of the End

Somehow I knew that Michael's new manager was going to be Tohme Tohme before I even read that part. He was quite strange in my opinion. Anyway, all of this skepticism that Michael has doesn't sound too good. AND old friends just can't seem to stay away from Michelle! lol

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Date: Apr 22, 2012 12:10 am Title: The Approach

I think that they both are wrong. Michelle was wrong for what she said but Michael should have known that she didn't mean it. Plus, Michael was also wrong from cutting Laya off completely and not allowing Michelle to see Blanket. AND I think that it was pretty bold o his lawyers to ask her to testify after Mike cut off of like that. That's so wrong in my eyes because he pretty much dogged her out & turned everyone against her & yet he wants her to help him out. ugh this is just sjvbjgirejvjhgjecurj I cannot with them. They need to get it together.

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Date: Apr 21, 2012 05:13 pm Title: The Baptism Thing

oh my goodness! They're always breaking up! Michael shouldn't have gotten so angry over something like that because it wasn't that serious.

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Date: Apr 19, 2012 11:19 pm Title: Waiting

Michael is so cute with his excitement lol but I think he was a bit too excited about the baby.

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Date: Apr 17, 2012 10:38 pm Title: The Plastic Surgery Issue

wow I can't believe that he was so upset...Michelle was actually sticking up for him & he just got mad over a question smh...I hope they work it out soon

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Date: Apr 15, 2012 05:34 pm Title: A New Proposal

oh my goodness! that was a roller coaser! Michael's propoal was so sweet! I knew that they were going to get engaged sooner or later...but I can't help but to wonder about the boutique...

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Date: Apr 15, 2012 09:38 am Title: The School Issue

Michelle is tripping! I don't understand why she was mad because she brought it on herself. Michael was just getting her back. She should have known that. Now she knows how he feels about her and Ralph because she feels the same way (maybe even worse) with him and Tatiana.

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Date: Apr 14, 2012 11:08 am Title: PART FOUR

they're just so cute together...they were meant for each other after all of the drama that they've gone through

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Date: Apr 14, 2012 06:33 am Title: The Conversation

it's about time! they're inseparable!

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Date: Apr 13, 2012 11:05 am Title: A One Night Stand

They definitely have something going on. I can't believe that Michelle cheated lol She might as well go ahead and break up with Martino because her love for Michael will always strong. 

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Date: Apr 12, 2012 01:24 am Title: The Other Woman

this chapter was great...but let me guess the Shena was really Shana Magatal (or however you spell her last name)? I know that you probably won't answer lol



Author's Response:

Yes, it was Shana. For personal reasons I didn't put her 'actual' name in the story; but you figured it out anyway. That was my sercet plan. lol  good job!   :)

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Date: Apr 10, 2012 10:34 pm Title: Laya Johnson

Maurice is an ass. He shouldn't even be getting upset about Mike helping out with Layla because he's barely even there. He didn't really even act as if he wanted to be a dad in the first place so he needs to quit trippin.

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