Date: Sep 08, 2012 07:49 am Title: Chapter 8: Navy SEAL
Omg, I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw you uploaded with 3 new chapters! That's great, thank you so much! :) Incredible story as ever. I hate Joseph here, can't stand his behaviour..
Date: Mar 30, 2012 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 5: Creation of Fame
Wow, that's pretty interesting. Good job, I already love the story!
Date: Feb 27, 2012 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 5: Creation of Fame
Fortunately, Michael is able to prove his worth to his family. However, little does five -year-old Michael Jackson realize this is the dawn of a glamorous yet tragic career.
Date: Feb 27, 2012 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 4: Natural Selection
Aww Michael is depicted as such a cutie here! Joseph better be careful of what lack of talent he thinks his son has--he just might be outdone by his own children.
Date: Feb 27, 2012 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 4: Natural Selection
Aww Michael is depicted as such a cutie here! Joseph better be careful of what lack of talent he thinks his son has--he just might be outdone by his own children.
Date: Feb 27, 2012 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 4: Natural Selection
Aww Michael is depicted as such a cutie here! JosePh better be careful of what lack of talent his son has--he just might be outdone by his own children.
Date: Feb 26, 2012 07:18 am Title: Chapter 3: Atonement
The irony of it all! Roman dies and we find out why Joseph is such a bitter man.
Date: Feb 26, 2012 06:58 am Title: Chapter 2: Family Secrets
A Quite interesting second chapter this is. Mahlein Jackson--now he's an intriguing character.
Date: Feb 25, 2012 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: August 29th, 1958
I am captivated already! I must say I write biographical fiction as well, so it is wonderful I am not alone in that. You truly know how to make a story come to life through the use of imagery and foreshadowing.
Date: Jan 13, 2012 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 5: Creation of Fame
...Now Joseph knows he is not in any position to go messing around with those Shadow People. He should be focusing on what is and not what will be and how he's gonna handle everything that comes with it.
So this is where it all starts?
Appreciate the update, Dr. Jinx! :D Your descriptions of them are vague but compelling enough to keep the reader hooked. Thank you again for the update ^^
Author's Response:
Yup. This is where it all starts.
I appreciate the comments very much, MJSmile! Thank You. I'll try and update as much as I can, but I can assure you it'll only get better. :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 06, 2012 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 3: Atonement
:-0.......... JOSEPH!!!!!! Dude! wow...just wow! lol, god bless :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 30, 2011 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 1: August 29th, 1958
O.M.J This story is so mysterious.... I like it! You leave me wanting more everytime!
Date: Dec 30, 2011 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 1: August 29th, 1958
I've been waiting for something like this, and I've got to thank you for being the first one on this site to do it, I love it so far. ^^
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Its the same reason why I wrote it in the first place. :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 30, 2011 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 2: Family Secrets
Wow.....Absolutely beautiful ;)... God bless :)
Author's Response:
Thank You so much! Hope you'll enjoy future chapters too. :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 23, 2011 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 1: August 29th, 1958
O....M....G....this story is awsome! Rome...it reminds me of a similar name...oh yea! Romello....I like that name. Its a beautiful story so far, I absolutely love it! God bless! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, Dear. Stay tuned. :)