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Reviewer: nicky960227 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2016 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love your story, but please finish it! I want to see what happens with Michael and Kim.

Reviewer: nicky960227 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2016 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love your story, but please finish it! I want to see what happens with Michael and Kim.

Reviewer: elvirus54 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2012 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 16

*100 reviews* 

Awwww, I love how Chloe and Kim made up! 
They have a great friendship, and I hope it will last forever for them :D

I'm sorry I haven't left a comment until now, but I haven't been at home and I couldn't log in on my phone on this site, so I only read the chapter. 

Great work! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D 

Lots of love... //Elvira <3

Reviewer: CarlyRae92 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2012 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 16

This was hilarious! I love Dante.

Reviewer: susan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2012 09:36 am Title: Chapter 16

Love it girl please more soon!

Reviewer: Leahluv21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2012 12:19 am Title: Chapter 16

RRRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOOFFFFFFFFFFFFLLLLLLLLLLLLLL


This chapter was sweet, and the scene between Chloe and Kim was SOOOO adorable but RRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOFFFFFFFFFFFLLLLLLLl I can't get over the last part. LLLLLLLOOOOOOOLLLLLL

I had totally forgotten about Dante's brother.  Oh dear me.  LLLLOOOOOLLLLLl  This is going to be AmAZING i can already tell.

LLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLll Love it!! Great job Tempy!!! <3 Leah

Reviewer: elvirus54 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2012 06:03 am Title: Chapter 15

Aw nooo! She LOST her Job! STUPID BOSS! She should... bring him to court or something. And stupid John, who destroyed everything!

Oh my god am I already done? I want to read more! You have to update soon! <3 I LOVE this story! 
Thank you for what you have written so far! You're truly talented.
God bless! 

Can't wait for the next chapter. 
Lots of love... Elvira <3



Author's Response:

ELVIRUS!! Wow I was sooo surprised to log on and see you have reviewed every chapter! I love it when readers love the story and are on the edge of their seat for the nest update! This made my day. Thank you sooo much for reviewing it means a lot to see you are enjoying it. Stay tuned for another update today! Lots of L.O.V.E.-Temptress

Reviewer: elvirus54 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2012 05:44 am Title: Chapter 13

NOOOO JOHN! YOU ASSHOLE! YOU'RE WROOONG!
Gaaaah. Why did he do that? ;<

Michael thinks... and Kim doesn't know... and Michael knows... and Kim thinks and Chloe threw and .... GAAAH! 

Great chapter in a great story! 

Lots of love... Elvira <3

Reviewer: elvirus54 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2012 05:24 am Title: Chapter 11

Awwwwwwwwww, THEY KISSED! Whaaaa <3

Omg the beginning of this chapter lol, when they're about to ride that horse. I had NO idea they were talking about a horse. I was like: "Woah, what's going on? :O" Lol, I feel so dumb xD 

The scene in the mud was just ADORABLE. 
Great chapter :D 

Lot's of love... Elvira <3

Reviewer: elvirus54 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2012 05:03 am Title: Chapter 10

OMG YEEES she told John off! I sure hope he stays away from her now. :) 

Whooo! Romance! xD 
I'm in love with this story! YOU'RE SUCH A GOOD WRITER!
Great chapter! 

Lots of love... Elvira <3

Reviewer: elvirus54 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2012 04:37 am Title: Chapter 9

Lol, this story is so funny :D
I'm sitting here and are laughing like crazy. 
As I said before, I can really picture everything that is happening, which makes it even more funny!
You're a GREAT writer. You really capture the reader. 
Great job :D 

Lots of love... Elvira <3

Reviewer: elvirus54 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2012 04:15 am Title: Chapter 7

HAHAAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAH omg xD

"what are you doing with these?" 
"Washing my windows" 

I'm dying over here xD 
Michael is so flirty too. 
GAAH, I need to read more. Great chapter!

Lots of love... Elvira :) 

Reviewer: elvirus54 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2012 03:50 am Title: Chapter 6

HAHAHAHAHHAHAH
CHLOE! 
She's nuts xD Lol, I love her though. 

"That takes action" O.o
Oh my god I would die if Michael said that to me. 
Whew. 

Great chapter anyway :D Like I said before, I'm in a different world while reading lol. I love this story! 

Lots of love... Elvira <3

Reviewer: elvirus54 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2012 03:35 am Title: Chapter 5

HHAHAHA awww! 
That's so cute that Michael was/is being so blonde.

Lol, she's probably going to embarrass him. 

This chapter was funny! I love the sence of humor you have in this story :D 
Lol, Chloe is a bit like me. 
Great chapter!

Lots of love... Elvira <3

Reviewer: elvirus54 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2012 03:21 am Title: Chapter 4

Ahh I already love this story :D 
Lol, she's really attracted to him. 
I would probably also find myself staring at him if I was in her situation lol, who wouldn't? xD 

Great chapter <3 

Lots of love... Elvira.

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