Reviewer: KoP4ever2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2012 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 10

Oh my god, things are heating up!! Keep going!! :)

~Grace

Reviewer: DirtyDani00 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2012 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 9 Part 2

OMG! HE KISSED HER! FINALLY! Now if he just knew who she was.  I LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I JUST CANT WAIT!

Reviewer: Barbie61 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2012 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 9

Love it - it's hilarious and sweet and sexy and so promising .......... Hurry with part 2 girfriend  x

Reviewer: Barbie61 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2012 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loving this - it's making me giggle .........

Reviewer: DirtyDani00 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2012 05:14 am Title: Chapter 9

can't wait for part 2! missed this story!

Reviewer: KoP4ever2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2012 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 8

oh wow, I would've kill my best friend if she did that to me. :) Hopefully, kim and michael will remember their childhood sooner then later.

 

~Grace

Reviewer: Leahluv21 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2012 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 8

OK LOL

I got up...and went straight to my laptop cause....


I NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUH EEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDED to read it.


AHHHHH!!!!! IS IT SAD...I WAS GOING THROUGH WITHDRAWLS?

LIKE, Oh my goodness you just updated yesterday.  But regardless of that I've been working on this review around everything else I've been doing today cause....AHHH! I can't seem to find ten minutes to write this out.

Anyway :)

OOHMYYYYYGOSH! Tempy, I swear...ROFL.  You are a comedic genius.

I know I have said this like, a thousand times. But I just soooooooo love Chloe.

She's smart, sassy, uninhibited, comically obsessed over Michael, and completely and utterly shameless.

Chloe is....my girl. I love her so much! ROFL.  She's like an amped up version of Leah.

.....Well. I'm hoping anyway.  I probably wouldn't be able to handle being that close to Michael either.  Although Kyle is not anything like Dante so I guess I do have that going for me.

But you know, I digress.

Now that I'm doing obsessing over the story in general, imma write about this actual chapter LOLOLOL.

Geez Leah, way to sound like a stalker.

Chloe sticking her laundry in with Kim's...and then bringing out a Michael TSHIRT...ROFL.  Like, I had no idea it was going to be a MICHAEL...SHIRT. ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL Ohmygawsh.  Kim's life just got even more awkward.  ....Like she really needed any help with that.

What are you doing to this poor girl?! She's such a hot mess.

I LOVE IT! OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH my gosh how I love it.

And....Chloe is all like "Out of the graciousness of my heart I got you some close."
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ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

She doesn't even just apologize she's just like....be grateful that I'm even helping you.

OH. MY. GOODNESS.

I FREAKING LOVE IT.

Miss Hot to trot.....what choice do you have........

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There's that Tempy wit I love so much ROFL.

hot to trot....oh my goodness Chloe you brilliant, sarcastic little devil. She's just so matter of fact in her sarcasm.  ROFL ROFL ROFL

This is why I love Chloe soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo MUCH.

She's just boss.

And ROFL Kim just, like, smacks her as she walks by.

AHAHAHAHAHAHHA OMG their dynamic is just incredible.

They are possibly the cutest best friends I've ever seen.

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Gosh. I'm about to die over here.  ....and I just checked my word count and I'm at almost four hundred words. SMH. I've lost my mind over this chapter.

..............The sparkly condoms.  And the glitter on Chloe's shirt.  And the fact that she is FOLLOWING KIM while talking about them.

HOLY. HECK.

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ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

I swear, I am dying over this.  I'd like roses on my casket please. 

And Chloe.....oh my goodness. ROFL ROFL ROFL.  Just like, AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA oh, you must have just left it on the counter.


Yea.....uhhuh. I remember where you said this was going to go.

ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!! CHLOE!!!!!!!!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OH MY GAAAAAAAAWSH.  I mean, she knows Kim is going to work with Michael....and she still does it.  And ROFL makes Kim think that she misplaced her phone herself.

AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA

Swag. So much swag.

..............and kim's driving. -_- I know where this came from miss thang.  Wait till you see what ends up in When I Look At You. ROFL :D

I love how Michael is all "don't drive like a freak and kill yourself.". That part seems vaguely familiar too.

AND AHAHAHAHAHA she keeps calling him a smart ass.  First off, this is sarcastic gold the way she's all like

"Once again, you smart ass."

And second of all.... SOOOOOoooooooooOOOOOOOOOooooooooo much de ja vu. ROFL.

Kim Is so obsessively in love with Michael.  One of these days she's gonna slip one of her dirty thoughts and Michael may just possibly die from a giggle gland explosion.

.....Along with me.

KIM! IS! SO! AMAZING!

ROFL AHAHAHA.

And Michael bless his heart...trying to ask about Chloe. ROFL long awkward silence.  What is she supposed to say? She caught her dancing around the house with his stuff and makes her boyfriend dress up like him during sex?

Yea, that sooooooooooooooooo would kill the conversation for like, ever.

Not to mention probably result in a restraining order for Chloe.

.....................ROFL glitter.  She sees glitter on Michael's hands.

Leah's mind just went into the gutter.

AND ROFL I know yours had to have too when writing this.

Miccccccchaeeeeeeeel oh those magical fingers.  WHEWSH. Fochisssing. I am fochissing.

..Human water spicket.  ROFL

She sprays him with coffee.

ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL.

She tries to wipe it up.

...........................ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

WHERE IS THE AIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIR?!?!?!?!??!?!?!

ROFL ROFL ROFL

..............Michael you jackass.  "If you wanted...." ROFL.

OoooooooooooooOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooo How I love sassy Michael.

RAWR! *dinosaur hand*

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She makes a fake phone call....and it rings with Chloe's new ring tone for Kim's phone.

......DURING

HER

FAKE

PHONE

CALL.

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Like, DURING.

...............................................ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

I just know, I'm going to explode.  This chapter.

ROFL Is pure genius.

From beginning to end.

My heat kind of like, broke though for Kim as she zoomed away from the bistro with Michael looking after her.

I mean, the poor girl hadn't caught a break in forever. Her life was just KSDJLKLSDJSKLDJ.  But I know that Michael is going to make it up to her somehow.

Even though he really didn't do anything.

He's too sweet to see anyone hurting and not do anything about it.

And the padded cell thing...at least I would be the only one that was crazy. Sooooooo sounds like something you would say.

...............................................Almost a thousand words. Geez.  I've hit a new level of obsession.

Tempy, I just can't even, oh my goodness.  This chapter is just absolute brilliance.  It's weird but I'm all KSJDLSKDJS MY TEMPY WROTE THIS!!!!!!!!!!! I freaking love her! Fuzzies reading a comedic chapter of a fan fiction.

I have issues.

BUT! Oh my gawsh I just....your writing is incredible.  You tug at emotions in the right places, add a healthy dose of comedy, develop these absolutely AAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMAZING characters.

GAH!!!!!!!!! Most amazing story ever.

Reviewer: KoP4ever2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 12, 2012 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 7

ooooo, that was good. Michael is getting to kim more and more. :))

~Grace