Date: May 29, 2012 02:58 am Title: Chapter 3
LOLOLOLOLOL
I LOVE how Karen is messing with him. But she's right though!
Something is going on between those two. Hee-Hee.
God has made a plan for them.
Great chapter again, Great chapter in a Great story!
I need to read more :D
B.t.w the picture at the end made me lol xD
Lots of love... Elvira <3
Date: May 29, 2012 02:48 am Title: Chapter 2
Hahahah I love how Kim is all pissed xD
Great chapter :D I love how this is starting, again xD
It's like a new first impression for them both, even though they met each other as kids.
Anyway, this comment won't be long... because I want to keep on reading :D
Lots of love... Elvira <3
Date: May 29, 2012 02:36 am Title: Chapter 1
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I was in a different world while reading this. I could see it all!
I need to read more!
Ahh I feel so sorry for Michael, having that hard pressure and schedual. And WHAT are those boys doing? Really, four against one? But I loved how something good came out of the bad. :)
Temptress, I suspected you are a good writer, because you're such a good reader. But all I can say is WOW! You got real talent!
Great job! Now I need to keep reading :D
Lots of love... Elvira <3
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2012 04:05 am Title: Chapter 15
Oh girl this keeps getting better and better can't wait fr more love it!
Author's Response:
Hey Susan! You're back! I'm soooo excited that you think it keeps getting better and you can't wait for the next update! Thank you so much! This means a lot to me!! Stay tuned for another update coming today!
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2012 01:37 am Title: Chapter 15
I can't belive this! Plz update ASAP!
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2012 01:34 am Title: Chapter 14
Chloe! Poor thing.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2012 01:31 am Title: Chapter 13
This is so sad! She's trying so hard and he's ignoring her!
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2012 01:29 am Title: Chapter 12
Michael! No!
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2012 01:26 am Title: Chapter 11
Dante is hilarious with Chloe!
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2012 01:22 am Title: Chapter 10
Chloe is dancing! haha that's great!
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2012 01:19 am Title: Chapter 9 Part 2
WOW! Chemistry!!!
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2012 01:14 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh wow! Kim has so much to deal with!
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2012 11:32 am Title: Chapter 14
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OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SO MANY EMOTIONS AFTER THIS CHAPTER....IM JUST SPEECHLESS!!!
MY poor Chloe....my heart aches for her. I'm really glad she ahd Dante with her at least to help with the sting but just WOW. My heart is just so oober heavy.
This chapter was AMAZING. Beyond words. Please update soon!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you lady!! And thank you for being such a loyal reader to the story. You've reviewed every chapter in great detail and I am ooober happy you love this!! Update tonight!! WOOO HOOOO! <3
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2012 07:27 am Title: Chapter 14
Omg this is terrible! Somebody has got to set Michael straight love it girl please more soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much Susan! I'm glad you tuned in and are really enjoying the story! Make sure to check back tonight for another update coming. Let me know what you think! L-O-V-E, Temptress
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2012 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh wow!!!!! Dante is so funny! i'm so glad i picked this to read!