[Report This]Date: Dec 13, 2011 10:56 am Title: Chapter 2 boring day gotta see the babe
Beautiful characters!! Good so far but can i just suggest one thing, please?... Whenever you do speech/ something someone says write it in speech marks: it'll make it easier to read!
Other than that i like it; keep it coming! <3
Author's Response:
thank you im glad you like it. and im glad you gave me that tip on using speech marks. this is my first time wrinting so i have to really brush up on the skills. i will definitly get better at it.
[Report This]Date: Dec 13, 2011 03:09 am Title: Chapter 1 interduction
yay i cant wait for you to start this take ur time sweetie. it get better on ur grammer and ur spelling theres some words i cant spell either. the summary sounds good to me and i cant wait for the next chapter good luck dear :)
Author's Response:
aww thank you so much. i will try my best even tho im not a pro at this lolz i apreciate the support. :)