Date: Jul 11, 2012 04:18 am Title: Chapter 22
Any chance of an update?
Author's Response:
sorry for not updating on this page. there was not much response to it here. but i'd like to invite you to my livejournal blog. the story is up there and finished! hope to see you over there and read your comments. you don't need to create an account to read.
http://breakofdawn-mj.livejournal.com/?skip=30&tag=circle%20of%20life
thank you for all the love and for staying tuned. xxx
Date: Apr 06, 2012 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 21
Oh my gosh Michael...At least Grace was there for him and Paris too, and he realizes that he still wants to be alive. Hopefully he'll start to come back around.
Date: Mar 27, 2012 01:43 am Title: Chapter 20
This is absolutly AMAZING! The anger, pain, tearss, and how Val deal it with her man. Gosh, she is the best. This is great, keep writing (-σˆy5;')-σ
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2012 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 20
There is no way i'm the only one reading this story. Its so raw and real. Amazing.
I love how Val handled Mike. She knows her man. She knows he's still tortured sometimes yet she knows his long for her is stronger.
This chapter was brilliant! I truly didn't know what they was going to do. Fight or fuck. Funny enough though they did both at the same time.
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2012 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 19
Omg this chapter was so good!! I need to know what happens next!
I was just reading Sugar Daddy over and I still can't believe how close Garcia got to Val. I mean he actually tried to get some at the hide out.
I'm not even going to be mad at Pat. A woman knows when a man anit 100 with them. I know she has to feel some sort a way watching Michael love on Val, and feeling like her dude wants to love on her too.
Speaking of Val giirrllll...how she going to leave the call like that? She knows Joe is always a lil insecure. Love it!!
Author's Response:
aw, thank you! <3 ... and remember: garcia got some after he saved her life...
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2012 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 17
Awwww this is the most disgusting emotional, Joyful, funny chapter ever.
Hi lil Joy...you're finally here babes. Love Mike and Val's love.
When I go to MJ immortal circus tour in July, I'm going to enjoy it like he planned it.
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2012 06:26 am Title: Chapter 17
I just want know what will happen with Michael.I'm dying here girl...Please no more flasbacks!
Thanks!
Author's Response:
oh girl, i'm so sorry... but i guess you'll have to be patient for another while... ;)
Date: Mar 07, 2012 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 17
that was amazing
keep up the great work
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2012 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 16
MY GOSH!! Mike is always doing the sexiest things at the places....DAMN boy!!!
I really Love how Mike thought of Val to help him out and trusted her with his craft, That was really sweet of him and what a marriage is all about working together. They were truly made for one another!
[Report This]Date: Feb 25, 2012 01:21 am Title: Chapter 16
Omg beautiful , amazing, perfecto, flawless..I love them!
I have fallin so hard in love with this chapter I wanna have sex with it. The valentines date started shaky. But the love making under the stars made me melt.
I love how Val is able to restore his faith when he starts to slip.
I can' t wait to see how MJ and Val will do the immortal tour.( I got my tix for july, I can't wait)
I love u BOD! I really needed a flashback. Mike and Grace was tearing my heart out with grief.
[Report This]Date: Feb 24, 2012 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 16
ahhhh girl!It's a flashback!!!
I want know what happened with Michael!
jezzzzzzzzz!!!
Sorry but I'M DYING HERE!
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2012 04:03 am Title: Chapter 15
OMG ARE YOU FREAKING KIDDING ME??? YOU HAD ME CRYING THIS WHOLE CHAPTER THEN THIIIIIIS?????? THIS?
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2012 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 15
MJ Noooo!
Grace hurry up and find him.
Can I have a MJ/ Val flashback?
I love how intense this story is. MJ and Grace pain hurts me. I want them to be happy.
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2012 09:10 am Title: Chapter 14
This was the most emotional chapter!
Michael knows that he is the father of Eli .. It was beautiful!
Michael and Grace still has a great connection ... no doubt! And they both can come together through the pain ... Both are suffering a lot!
I have hopes that Michael and Grace stay together.
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2012 09:06 am Title: Chapter 15
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!PLEASE DONT DO THIS MICHAEL!!!!OMG!
WAIT A SEC!! I was thinking ... Michael doesnt want to die ... If he wanted wouldnt have called Grace. People who want to commit suicide dont tell anyone ... The person kills himself without anyone expected.
I think Michael is asking for help! He wants to be saved from the pain he is suffering and the first person that came into his mind was Grace.
OMG!Please,update soon!Thank u!