Date: Oct 28, 2015 07:44 am Title: UPDATE ( 3 YEARS LATER )
Awww.....
Date: Oct 20, 2015 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Not all of your pictures are showing up. But it's not dragging at all! I like this and regret seeing it sooner.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2015 12:47 pm Title: UPDATE ( 3 YEARS LATER )
I think you should finish the story.
There are writers who start stories then never finish them for what ever reason. Some stories have many chapters and others 1 or 2.
It's great you have taken the time to ask your readers.
Date: Oct 20, 2015 09:43 am Title: UPDATE ( 3 YEARS LATER )
Update this asap!
Date: Oct 20, 2015 09:42 am Title: UPDATE ( 3 YEARS LATER )
I lovvve it the way it is! Dont change it!
Date: Aug 10, 2015 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 10
Please write more chapters. I enjoy reading your story. I look forward to reading more.
Date: Aug 10, 2015 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 8
At least he is trying to include her in his life by having her meet his family.
Date: Aug 09, 2015 10:07 pm Title: II.
Its good to know how they really feel!
Date: Aug 09, 2015 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 7 (Last Part)
Good job Michael and Lani!
Date: Aug 09, 2015 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 7 (Part 3)
It always seems to happen this way.
Date: Aug 09, 2015 08:10 am Title: Chapter 7 (Part 2)
I wish Leilani had made a better effort to respond to Michael. Then nobody would be walking around with broken hearts.
Date: Aug 09, 2015 03:50 am Title: Chapter 7 (Part 1)
I like that Michael contactedLei after she performed the song.
Date: Aug 09, 2015 12:14 am Title: Chapter 6
Great! There is no excuse for Michael not to go to NYC.
Date: Aug 08, 2015 09:50 am Title: Chapter 5
Good story. Watch spelling. Keep writing!
Date: Aug 08, 2015 09:29 am Title: I.
Good job! Start to check the spelling. Decision. Tip:No one will want to read if there are a lot of spelling errors. Check and re-check.:)