[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2012 10:04 am Title: P.J.
I loved this chapter, my fave so far. Paris was so cute and so sweet to whisper "mom" to Nessa before she went to bed.
Author's Response:
Lol, I loved writing this chapter!
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2012 09:58 am Title: Hell
I see why you skipped those years. Michael didn't deserve that pain and I like how you included Paris in this chapter in the way he spoke abot his daughter made me smile. Girls especially are daddy's girls but are always looking for a mother figure so I see why he didn't want to rush before with Nessa. Great chapter, love :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad I could make you smile. :D
Thank you very much.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2012 09:53 am Title: We Fell Off... For Real
damn, time flew....
Author's Response:
Yass.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2012 09:51 am Title: Here It Comes And There It Goes
I hate that he had to leave. So sad. But at the same time, I loved the PPB remark in the chapter. So sweet MJ mentioned Nessa to the children. :)
Author's Response:
:(
<3 Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2012 09:46 am Title: Back On My Grind
what's the deal with safaree and vanessa in real life and in the story? are they just best friends or were they more in the past? and aww bunny, Michael is cute as a bunny :)
Author's Response:
Safaree and Nicki have been friends for a very long time and when she began to get more attention while still doing underground rapping, he became her hypeman. That's it though. There are a lot of rumors that they're together and engaged but, they aren't.
"I'm married to Benjamin, to Washington."
I love bunnies. <3
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2012 09:43 am Title: Trying To Be At Least Normal II
you are turning me into a Nicki Minaj fan haha
Author's Response:
Ah cha cha and the plan is successful. ;)
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2012 09:41 am Title: Trying To Be At Least Be Normal I
Suggestions? hmm...I would like to know more about Michael and Nessa like details, how she feels, he feels...the in between stuff. The only thing I would say is that you jumped in so fast from one chapter to another I thought I missed when she got her stuff and brought it to Mike's place. Don't take that as a complaint, is not one at all. I'm really liking your story. :) Now I'm off to read about their date :)
Author's Response:
Lol, alright thank you!
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2012 09:36 am Title: Southside Jamaica Queens: Part 2
Again, you are showing me pics of Nicki I never seen haha that "old" pic of her, I didn't even recognize her. She looks like my neighbor there haha
Author's Response:
Lol, that's funny!
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2012 09:32 am Title: Southside Jamaica Queens: Part 1
I never seen that pic of Nicki. She looks cute here. And damn, I think she was a bit harsh on her father.
Author's Response:
Oop, that's my objective. To show you the unseen.
"Don't judge a man until you've walked two moons in his moccasins."
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2012 09:30 am Title: 1+1
the kisses must have been magical which I believe Michael's kisses really are because I love you...*sigh* I'm in awe. *rushes to the next one* I don't want to stop reading XD
Author's Response:
Lol, I'm glad doll.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2012 09:27 am Title: Kissin' You Is All That I've Been Thinkin' Of
wow *fans self* I like this bold Mike *rushes to the next chapter*
Author's Response:
Lol, hurry up!
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2012 09:25 am Title: Looking.
"This man had me at Hank" <--LOL obviously she's lucky he wasn't a crazy guy and Michael's shyness vanished at the end. Damn, I wished he would have told me that XD
Author's Response:
Lol, no one else caught on to that.
Much <3
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2012 09:17 am Title: Breaking Nessa
Break of dawn is my fave song in the invincible album. They seem to be hitting it off. I'm excited to read more.
Author's Response:
It's my favorite song ever!
Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2012 09:13 am Title: Close To Dilly Dallying.
she's not shy at all but maybe that's what Michael needs...a woman to take control ;)
Author's Response:
Ohhhh yeah!
<3
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2012 09:08 am Title: Michael Who?
I'm glad she didn't faint and damn Mike can't be coming to Queens all suspicious. We, New Yorkers don't play haha
Author's Response:
Lol, !
<3 New Yorkers are funny.