Date: Jan 04, 2012 01:01 am Title: Who In The Hell Is This?
Hey hun, here's the banner I made. Hope u like? :) <3 All I ask if that you please give credit if u decide to use it. Much love. -mikespyt
Author's Response:
I love you for this, thanks so much. Of course I'll give you credit!
Date: Jan 02, 2012 03:02 pm Title: Who In The Hell Is This?
Lolz they got her. This was good I gotta keep reading :D this is my fav story. I got another one but this one is my fav.
Author's Response:
I'm glad this is your favorite! That makes me really happy inside...
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2012 10:52 pm Title: Back On My Grind
that was beautiful. i really enjoy reading your story and cant wait for the next chapter. i wish i was good at writing like you are.
Much Love Dear
Author's Response:
Your reviews are euphonic and I can't get enough. All it takes is some influence and practice! Get to it!
<3 Mrs. Maraj-Jackson
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2012 10:28 pm Title: Trying To Be At Least Normal II
your story is really good i love reading it.
Author's Response:
Muah! Kisses.
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2012 10:18 pm Title: Back On My Grind
Lol! I love this! Keep on going and I'll keep reading and reviewing!
Author's Response:
I love you! I'm glad you feel that way.
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2012 10:10 pm Title: Trying To Be At Least Be Normal I
impressive writing girl
Author's Response:
(British accent) Why, thank you darling!
Date: Jan 01, 2012 09:57 pm Title: Back On My Grind
love this they are so cute
Author's Response:
#BeleeDat
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2012 01:44 am Title: Who In The Hell Is This?
Awwww they are so cute together & I'm sure he's gonna help her start off a great career.
Author's Response:
:D I'm sure too...
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2011 11:31 pm Title: Trying To Be At Least Normal II
Wow, this chapter is something! Like how Nessa's in control! ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks doll, I guess that's just how Queens girls do it... ;)
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2011 08:12 pm Title: Trying To Be At Least Normal II
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I LOVED THIS!!
First off, I hadn't ever heard any of her music before...I assume those were her actual lyrics anyway LOL, BUT OMG! How perfect was that.
Secondly, I looove how you emphasized how different this world was from hers...I thought it was so cute she was trying to be all prim and proper in the nice restaraunt. It makes her relatable, but classy at the same time.
And then when they were flirting, playing foosties and you went into an intimate scene right after...
OMG! Your flow...is amazing.
Love it. Can't wait for another chapter!!! Thanks so much for the update!!
Author's Response:
OMG, I appreciate your review and now your life is complete because you've heard (or read) lyrics of Nicki's! I use all of Nicki's lyrics because I cannot rap. Not even a little but, I wouldn't mind modeling my career after hers (so far anyways). My flow...damn doll, thanks a lot. Don't thank me for the update! (although I enjoy the encouragement). And I looked up that resturant, it's real and it sure looks fancy as hell too.
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2011 12:32 pm Title: Trying To Be At Least Normal II
Make more! I'm lovin it!
Author's Response:
Wait... make more chapters or sex? XD Thanks a lot doll!
[Report This]Date: Dec 26, 2011 03:25 am Title: Trying To Be At Least Be Normal I
I'm liking those outfits! Mike and Nessa are 'bout to get nasty, ain't they?
Author's Response:
In a way, I think this is the best writing experience I've had so far because their are so many pictures of Onika to choose from in nice outfits (and some strange!) "I mean, I don't even know..." (Hope you know this reference!) We'll see!
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2011 09:00 am Title: Trying To Be At Least Be Normal I
This. Was. Adorable!
I cannot wait for part two! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks doll. I should be updating more often (I don't know, maybe so) since the holiday break is here.
Date: Dec 21, 2011 06:53 pm Title: Who In The Hell Is This?
OOOOOOOOO I smell baby making in the room XD
Author's Response:
Lol, too much!
Author's Response:
Lol, too much!
Author's Response:
Lol, too much!
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2011 06:53 pm Title: NOT A CHAPTER!
I think this picture is more distracting than anything....GAH he's amazing.
Lol anyway...suggestions...hmm...
I think the texting thing is adorable but maybe a couple actual dates? Or I love that she's a musician maybe they could have a sweet collaboration scene...?
I'm sorry that wasn't much help I'm sure... :s
BUT! This story is adorable and I'm sure however it moves from this point will be great :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your time. You're the only one who responded and I'm definitely going to take your ideas into consideration. I especially like the date one. That picture = LIFE.