Reviewer: colormepretty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2011 02:16 am Title: Chapter 1

I love this story!

Pure Amazingness. :)

xxx

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2011 01:41 am Title: Chapter 3

Dangg talk about hot stuff! Cnt wait for the next part :)

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2011 01:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Aww this is cute :) I like this story being told from a different point of view :D cnt wait to read the next part

Reviewer: belovd2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2011 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 11

Alright now...this story is definitely reflective of its title...it's hot!

Reviewer: mikespyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2011 03:30 am Title: Chapter 11

Very HOTTTTT. Love it!

Reviewer: booboo1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2011 09:27 am Title: Chapter 10

Superb!  Please continue.  Your writing has a certain ebb and flow to it that keeps a reader captivated.  My narrative style is more of a cliffhanger style, and my poems are the pieces that tend to flow.  If you have the chance, please glance through my story, "Kindred", and let me know what you think.  However, if at all possible, please read my poem, "From God, with love".  I put my imagination into my narratives, but I put my soul into my poems.  I would truly like to know what you think of the poem above all.  If you can spare the time to read it, I would be most grateful.  Please keep up the excellent work.  Looking forward to the next chapter most anxiously.

With much love

Bonnie

Reviewer: claudiux9 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2011 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 10

Please write another chapter! I want to know what is going on with Michael....is he falling in love? what is gonna be?

Reviewer: motownmjdevotee Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2011 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 8

Powerful stuff girl.