[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2011 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 16
Fuck! That was soooo cute. "Hey, there sleep okay? " Is he joking!?! What women would not say HELL YEAH! LOL. I love that part. Im so glad you updated. I love your writing so much. I have three stories that I love here and you are IT! Please keep updating. Michael was so sexy coming out of that bathroom, playful, naughty, wet and clean...deep sigh....he was so cute teasing her and buttoing his cuffs at the same time...I love when he said to her "Does your hair always do that in the morning" I can totally see hims smiling that sexy smile and saying that.....sigh. Excellent!
Author's Response: :D Your review made me smile! Thanks so much.
Date: Jun 15, 2011 03:24 am Title: Chapter 16
Love it! Cant wait for the next part :P
Date: Jun 15, 2011 02:56 am Title: Chapter 16
I love this story.. update soon! xx
Date: Jun 04, 2011 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 15
More please, more!
Date: Jun 03, 2011 11:51 am Title: Chapter 15
Ohhhh I read the 3 last chapters....let me tell you I really loved it!!!
please keep writing!!!! I hope Tati and Miguel can make it!!!
she brings him joy
:)
Date: May 28, 2011 03:53 am Title: Chapter 15
Love that! Please write more, it was so cute.
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2011 04:04 am Title: Chapter 15
Hahaha omg the 7 kids part had me dying! I was like omg xD toooo many kids lol. This story is really great, i love it! Cnt wait for the next part
Date: May 09, 2011 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 15
I love this! It's brilliant, keep it up xx
[Report This]Date: May 09, 2011 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 15
man, that was niceeee and looong and oh my gawd it feels like they're getting to that point wherre it's not just hidden-forbiddden anymore. I really hoe that Michael maes that move to say something about it, but for now, I'm happy that she got to tay the night so that it changes things a little more.
you know i love this story, so I don't need to elaborate on it. Keep it coming, my friend. :)
Date: May 09, 2011 06:03 am Title: Chapter 15
Best chapter yet! I loved every part. :)
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2011 04:47 am Title: Chapter 14
Ah, it seems like Michael is warming up to her. I'm liking that.
I'm loving this story! Your writing is rather unique to say the least. Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2011 01:03 am Title: Chapter 14
I wonder if they will blossom into an offical relationship haha cnt wait for the next partt
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2011 01:00 am Title: Chapter 13
Diggin it :) im happy you updatee! Ive been wanting to read this story for a while hah
Date: May 06, 2011 12:57 am Title: Chapter 14
I like this story...you allow the reader to use their imagination by leaving the space to fill in the blanks which is kinda cool. Looking forward to reading more. BTW - it'd be nice to actually give us the visual imagery sometimes too. LOL!
Author's Response: Hee. I was a little writer's blocked about something, but you actually inspired me... ;)
Date: May 05, 2011 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 13
Michael's getting more comfortable, I think...it's still going to take some time, but I think that with enough push, he could really trust her. She's already totally at his mercy. Does he know that?